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>...and personally, I would leave out the stuff that's just an insult. The trap is enough in of itself.
I don't see what's unenforceable about the oath. It just has a great, gaping flaw because it only binds the five people present for the meeting and not the Yozi witnesses or anyone else. Oops, they cheated themselves by not taking us seriously when we warned them about the rest of our family being a big deal.
You're right that we probably don't want to piss off those folks, so here's a rewritten version with an agony-savouring mercy where we offer to let them renegotiate, for free.
"As a courtesy, I will now warn you of what the truce and secrecy agreement does not protect from. The binding draws upon the attention, authority and will of the Yozi masters, so the very act of binding the secrecy agreement informs my masters of our discussion. They witnessed this meeting to serve as the authorities that will enforce oathbreaker penalties for violations of the pledge. Because the agreement was limited to us five they are not in the slightest bit bound to its terms. This would leave you trapped in a pledge of permanent truce and secrecy that you can't break without suffering severe curses, and which does not constrain the rest of my family at all.
"Because I'm not trying to inflict a bad deal on you, I offer the opportunity to renegotiate and replace our pledge with a different pledge. I don't ask for a payoff despite being in a position to demand one. Just come up with a deal that isn't bad for any of us, please."
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