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>Which you don't.
yeah honestly this is less interesting-for-play and more silly-ideas, so I'm not gonna bother making cards
But I've got a few minutes so...
Enrad has two typos
Crash Quest should say 'When this enters the battlefield...' for the first part
Sam's ability should be either 'T: Sacrifice Sam, ...' or 'T, Sacrifice Sam: ...'
Server Crash's second and third sentences should not have a line break between them.
Insomnia's third ability is not phrased correctly. I don't remember off the top of my head what the correct phrasing is though, but it's something along the lines of 'Shuffle target face-up exiled quest into your library...'
Undermind Boost should be split up into two sections: the +X/+X, then 'At end of turn, tap that character. It doesn't untap during the player's next untap phase'. The phrasing for that is just icing on the cake. :3c
Kole: Deal X damage to target, not target takes X damage
Commander Yeltzin: Untap target character
Takeover Complete: Gain control of target land
Crawler: When Crawler is blocked, gain control of all characters blocking Crawler.
There's a bunch of typos in there too, or similar missing words. Also as mentioned balance is really off.
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