>>146112
Deadjournal, obviously.

read rules.

hug sister.

in a very wincest way.

If you wanna be a real emo kid then livejournal is the way to go.

>but i dont drink it cos its gross?
>ii-kun.
>mum wont let me get a piercing, shes so dumb.

Gentlemen, I think we're dealing with a girl.

So what do you do, job-wise? What do you WANT to do?

Got any ladies you've had your eye on?

And do you have a sketchbook or a poetry journal?

>>146116
>25/m/NL
No, we're dealing with an idiot.

>>146118
>>146116
he is a emo thus we are dealing with all of the three above

>>146112
You can be honest with us. For starters give us your real age, I'm guessing 19.

So your life sucks you say. Mom being a bitch and your sister being an immature bitch and neither appreciates you. Your road is pretty clear. You must run away from home and travel to the wonderful land of California. There they will know to appreciate you and your unique personality.

Your family does not respect you. They do not understand! You must make them understand. With POETRY.

Ah! But they are dumb, they won't understand your subtle word-art. You need something simple, direct, powerful! For that you need special inspiration. Go and seek inspiration!

Have you tried drilling a hole in the wall of a stall in a public bathroom and writing GLORY HOLE above it? Maybe you should try that and then wait in the other stall for someone to come along.
Also do you wear your "little" sister's panties because they make you feel pretty? It's alright you can tell us, blog-patient confidentiality, man. With a rebel yell do you cry more more more? In the midnight hour, babe? More more more?

Have you tried any sports? If not, maybe you should sign up for something. Like tennis or bowling.

ENLIST YOU PANTYWASTE

Heeey, we're /quest/ -- not /b/! Giving bad advice is our shtick! We need to ruin this boy's life with gusto! :D

>>146137
Gotcha. So Lets have him try to rob a bank?

Come on lets at least give this a chance here.

Okay first off your screen name is razorbladeromance1991 which would indicate that you're probably 18-19 if you are in fact in our time line, which I'm assuming you are because of the I phone and what not.

You want advice? Read Romanticar and that'll be where this thing is headed very quickly unless you get more specific with what you need help with... Unless that is what you want...

>>146143
We'll make him want it.

>>146143
SO we'll be railroaded into a crappy romance?

So whats the game plan? Have the guy either man up or just drive him into a hilarious spiral of crash and burn?

well, you must think like a evil emo overlord, its the safest, meeriest way to express your emohood.

now im really thinking you should get about 10 gallons of black and purple paint and some explosives. once you get them, we are redecorating the neightborhood with gusto

>>146165
but this guy probably can't figure out how to make a simple bomb. He's 25 and only finished highschool last year (at 24) so he's either been held back due to be being mentally deficient or from attempts to take his life... Either case gives us an advantage here.

u shoud ttly post pics of your sis

>>146172
Even better, we can make him blow his own hand off by accident.

>>146187
That'd be fucking hardcore!

You guys DO realize he´s reading all this, right?

ANYway, we need to know more to give a proper input on what ye shoulda do. Besides killing yourself, I guess you heard that one enough.

>>146195
Of course he can. Otherwise where would the fun be. Or well he is a dyslexic who has used his handicap as an excuse to not read shit. So it's actually possible that he can't read this and had his sister write it or amazingly managed to write it by slapping his phone with his dick.

>>146197
You make a good point x3

>>146197
Dude don't diss the ability to slap your dick on a phone and produce somewhat coherent sentences.

Also expect the "Mental Illness" aspect to be played up mid-quest to try and draw us into actually caring for him.

We could play this realisticly and have the Emokid go and start listening to Linkinpark and writing EMOPOETRY but that won't be fun... we need to figure out a way to spice this up with color ... and explosions. Explosions make for awesome quests

>>146203
I got dyslexia and largely overcame it. If he can't make an effort and just use it as an excuse to use horrible spelling and grammar then he can fuck off.

Saturday, March 13, 2010 - 1:01 AM razorbladeromance1991 2010/03/12(Fri)16:17 No. 146291 ID: 950529
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Dear /Quest/,

Hello again, it's your friend razorbladeromance1991. Okay Ive been reading all your responses so i'll answer them one by one.
First tho here is a pic of me and my sister. I was like taking a photo for my friends on Gaia of my new shirt and like when i posted it I saw my sister totally ruined it. I was so pissed off!!! like I didnt talk to her for a day and she was like "Hey Tommy, unlock your door so i can tickle you" EUGH! Shes so dumb
Anyway
>>146113
>>146115
i dont need livejournal because this is my blog??? DUH
>>146114
uhm what? i dont want incest thats GROSS
>>146116
uhhhh no, I am a man
>>146117
I don't work, I live at home with my parents. I dunno what I want to do? Like life suxxx so I dunno? I dont know much ladies but I am p popular on Gaia but theyre all like 14 so theyre too young and dumb like my sister.
I do write a bit of poetry I will post some:
In my Life there is Nothing
I am Dead Inside and you are Laughing
You dont care, but neither Do I
I cant see you due to the Tear in my Eye[/i][/i]
Im still working on it.
>>146118
LOL ur the idiot GTFO
>>146120
I wanna go to the UsA but I dunno how cos i dont have money for it. Where will I stay anyway?? Do you live in California?
>>146127
yeah Exactly it's so annoying eugh I hate my life. I posted some poetry up there so check it out and let me no what u think.
>>146131
Eeeeewww you are crazy! But like one time my sister stole some of my boxers and I was like "Give me back my boxerwear" and she was like "OkAAAYY" but she gave me one of her panties and then laughed real hard, I was so mad
>>146135
Yeah like I used to play badminton but I got too serious? like I'm too inteligent now for the others in the team. So i quit.
>>146136
Huh???
>>146143
So what if Im not 25 Im still mature like Im 25. W/E?
>>146172
Uh no? I am real smart I think. Like I dont know much and not so good at math but like I know that life is SUX unlike my dumb sister.\
>>146179
Yeha posted some for u
>>146197
>>146195
>>146203
>>146207
>>146202
So like w/e I have dyslexia like I read about it on wikipedia and asked yahoo answers and like I cant write so well so w/e deal with it or gtfo
So thanks for responding /quest/. I like feel that I got a better grip on my life alredy. So please help me improve my poetry and deal with my dumb sister?
Okayu I gotta go but I'll be checking on ii-kun

LOve <3
from razorbladeromance1991

>>146291
Start by removing the part about a tear in your eye from your poetry. That part makes the poetry suck. Angsty and emotional poetry should not touch upon physical outlets for it. It should be about the emptiness inside and the bleak landscape that matches your feelings. Leave out anything about crying or cutting or that shit.

And no I don't live in California. I live in the facist liberal peoples monarchy of Sweden. And if you want to go to the US then I would suggest either looking through what kind of collages that have exchange programs with the local ones and what payment plans or scholarship plans exist for it. That or find a job.

>>146291
Dude. I like your sister. Is she single?

When did you become SO EMO? Did your parents get divorced?
To improve your poetry you have to make it more hardcore.
In my Life there are Bitches
Gonna make them end up in Stitches
Wu Tang Clan gonna make you cry
I cant see you due to the Hair in my Eye

>>146291
Have you ever thought about listening to some gabber? I can give you a couple songs if you want.

>>146312
Fuck gabber, dubstep is where the hoes skank.

razorbladeromance, you need some dubstep and hoes in your life.

>>146322
Have you actually listened to any gabber? If not, shut up. Give me some dubstep songs and I'll tell you whether or not Gabber is better. Right now, I don't know.

>>146324
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iy2TOdvr8QY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RTys8MEQ4D4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_MigURCQQA0

Gabber's alright, man, but dubstep gets you the hoes, which is what our man razorbladeromance1991 is seriously lacking.

>In my Life there is Nothing
This is redundant. Life is nothing, so it goes without saying that there is nothing in your life.
>I am Dead Inside and you are Laughing
This is a causal relationship. Try replacing and with because. Alternativly, swap the clauses around, keep the because.
>You dont care, but neither Do I
try being ironic here. you can never have too much subtlty. Maybe "You care but I do not", or "You don't care but I do."
>I cant see you due to the Tear in my Eye
See, it's pretty obvious that you mean tear as in 'rip' and not as in 'crying' because only a sissy girlyman would cry because of other people. To avoid such homonym confusion in the future, try using synonyms. Maybe talk about how your soul (which is obviously what you were aluding to with your eyes - nice try but another acse of unfortunate homonyms) has been torn by everyone elses stupidity or how its been dashed on the rocks of iniquity.

Add a few more lines. If you want to really get through to the idiots out there without sacrificing your obviously high minded artistic principles, I would recomend working into a classical structure such as a balad or rhyming couplet. Maybe throw some Shakespearean meter in there, after all, the man was master of the tragedy.

Man, first I got to give you some advice for posting here.

Do NOT let your sis know at this. She will totally screw it up.


Anyway, gotta ask. Have you ever TRIED being happy? I'm not going to ask for a pic of you smiling in a rictus grin, but you seriously need to get out more. Bet you just sit in your room and mope all day.

Bet you've got a bike. Why don't you try riding it a few miles every day? Go up and say "hi" to that girl at the mall you've silently had your eye on for a while?

>>146333
Eh, dubstep sounds a bit like IDM, but it's a bit too chill for me. Try listening to these:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EDgfnEet6WA
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3WYbk6esvY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lql4B0VWShs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7XmCXyD6_ys

>>146355
Not bad. Kind of heavy on the kick, but then again that's the point and dubstep is more bass driven.

If it's too chill for you the heavier stuff is pretty good too.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=toU1MsSdV-E
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dePpya4HBCM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OCfUiqQ1GJI

though not everyone is a big fan of that stuff, but hey, I unno.

Nonetheless gabber is pretty good. I propose we make gabberstep and then roll in any hoes, any place, any time.

>>146312
>So please help me improve my poetry and deal with my dumb sister?
is this your short term goals?

>So what if Im not 25 Im still mature like Im 25. W/E?
thats very mature of you.

in short of importance:
-get laid.
-get BF to sister. pedos do not count.
-get GF. goths are fine.
-get a notebook.

now, for no good reason at all, what are your SAT, how much money do you have and do you have a love interest?
-get proper literature lessons.

Heeeeey little bro.

You got a new blog? Thats cool. I'll be watching.

XOXOXO
-sis <3

>>146291
Say you sure seem familiar.

...Is your real name actually a number?

>>146310
Dude the guy looks like he's on hormone replacement and is probably gonna be a SHE in a year. We're dealing with some emotranny. He probably fucking wears his "Sisters" clothing all around waiting for the surgery.

Current mood: EUUGHGHHH :'((( razorbladeromance1991!!t0A2VlA2Lj 2010/03/13(Sat)11:26 No. 146729 ID: 950529
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Dear /quest/,

Hey again it's your buddy razorbladeromance1991. I got a tripcode today. I know this forum has IDs but i wanted to make sure you guys know who I am. So anyway thanks for the responses. You guys are pretty cool, wel some of you are a little weird or mean but maybe youre just joking???
Anway today i didnt get much sleep so im pretty tired but like the bags under my eyes kind of represent how i feel So I guess it's okay. I should take a photo of how fucked up I look. Like, Im a mess and my room is a mess cuz my life is a mess. You know?
Anyway nothing much happened today. My sister came into my room to tickle me again but I fought her off. I think I acidentally hit her for real but she said shes fine but then later she broke the lock of my door so I guess she was pretty pissed off?? Well it sucks anyway because now she keeps going in and out of my room, its SO ANNOYING EUGH
Anyway let me get to responding to your responsees

>>146303
Okay but I thought like crying is prety important, I mean I cry like every day but inside so I guess youre right? Like I cut myself inside too that is good
like
]i]A black ocean that I hide
Fed by the tears that I keep inside
That is prety nice?
So I dont know much about Sweden but i hear it's pretty cold, so good luck with that, but good news is that you are next to Finland which is where HIM comaes from. So thats pretty nice. I dont want to go to college becuz its like stupid? Like,,, i dont think emos in the USA go to college neway.
Anyway if you are emo too just keep around until I got like a myspace or Facebook and we can be friends if u like

>>146305
uhm yah she's too much of a dork to get a BF, like she spends so much time on the internet like it's so dumb i mean i do too but like she does real dumb stuff and she hangs out /v/ all the time EUGH Anyway we used to share the computer in the living room but she got a laptop and I got my ii-kun so we're out of eachothers hair for now. except for when shes bored she comes bothering me, like, all the time. Shes SO immature

>>146310
uhm I got emo when I was like 12 cos I switched from basic school to like middle school, like in the netherlands our highschool is called middleschool. Weird right??? it's like toddlerschool, basic school, middle school and then college is highschool and university is university atleast. Anyway like i lost all my friends and the school was real big so I got supersad and I was like 'fuck it i cant take it anymore" so I turned emo to expres my feelings.
My parents are still together but they do fight a lot but i guess theyre also buddies i dunno, like, i dont Spend much time in the living room anymore. I'm usually in my room listening to music and stuff. Anyway that poetry is pretty weird? lol but nice try

>>146312
>>146322
>>146324
>>146333
>>146355
>>146361
UUUHHH W/E like i dont care? i listen to music i like?? but i guess thanks 4 trying

>>146336
Okay so like I want to be clear that Crying is not a bad thing. Like, trying to be macho and stuff and hiding your feelings, that is pretty stupid. But I guess if you cry all the time that's dumb too. Like,, im doing it right, i express myself but Im not a big baby, u know? Anyway that is prety good advice. I will think of more poetry maybe I can post it at the end of the blog

>>146354
Yeah duh my sister doesn't know about tgchan, she's only on 4chan. Like she likes /x/ but thats the closest she gets to /tg/ cuz she thinks D&D is gay EUGH she's so tupid right? BTW i made like this vampire necromancer but im looking for a group to play with and i cant find any. 3.5 btw (it is much better than 4 i think it's like for normal people))

>>146362
Yeah like I think my poetry is kind of important so I want to get it real good and my sister is such a pain like right now she's standing in my doorway and Im like GO AWAY and she's like looking at me llike "What are you doing" and Im like "Thats none of ur business" and she's like "I want to know what my little bnrother is up to" and Im like what???? "im your older brother youre crazy" and shes like "well you dont act or look like my older brother" EUGH so I am ignoring her now.
Anyway I looked up SAT on wikipedia and we dont have that here, well we kind of do but I dont know I guess. w/e? For money i can ask my parents if I need something, and I dont have a love interest. Also Id like to point that I am not gay, like, i thought I was bi when I was like 14 but I got over that, so......

>>146364
lol youre not my sister! She doesnt type like that. I showed your post to my sister and she's like laughing so hard now. Wait Im giving her ii-kun so she can show you how she makes posts. Okay next line is my sister

So are you like, in a band?

>>146729
Cold and darkness is good for the artist inside you, the bleak landscape along with winter cold and days that last for a few hours can be a real source of inspiration.

Poetry is getting a bit better but you're still not there. Focus more on the futility and the useless struggle against it. Look to Great war poets (world war one) for inspiration, I would recommned starting with Siegfried Sassoon. Those should get you in the mood.

I'm not emo. I'm a nihilist, there is a difference. Finnish bands are alright I guess, Finntroll can be great fun at times. But I think you should try some classical music as well, there are some composers that can create hauntingly inspiring music.

Oh a question for your sister. Why are you bothering him all the time? I have smaller siblings as well so I know it can be great fun at times, but there are times when you should give them some personal space.

>>146729
>Like,,, i dont think emos in the USA go to college neway.

So?

College is about more than education. It's a great place to meet folks and start careers.

PUNCH GAMERA

"dude" your sis has a thing for you. you better let her learn that wincest is only good in fapfics and *chan posts or soon you will have her manhandling you.

>College is about more than education. It's a great place to meet skanky hos and start a new liver cancer.
fix'd

get to college, if you are after pussies you can try art or nursery. if you want real solutions do psychology.

you can always get some weird graduation diploma and do odd jobs at it, like graduationg in literature and history to write emo papers on byron's books

like, I totally wrote a poem because you inspired me?
Waves crash on the beach
Like my soul crashes everyday
My life is black, abysmal, like the sea
There's nothing you can do to help me.

>>146772
thats some good shit there, Razor. Your sister's got real talent. You may want to consider taking lessons from her.

>>146772
Getting a bit better but still not good enough. It should not be about your feelings. It should be about invoking the feeling in other people. Leave yourself out of the picture, focus on the feeling, not how you feel it but the raw essance of it and find a metaphor for it.

You should tickle your sister back. She can dish it out but can she take it? Or you could go invade HER room to be nosy about what she's doing!

what's your sister's name?

Also, forbidden love is good for poetry, try mixing some of that in.

Life is nothing.

Rape your sister, then she'll stop bothering you.

Current mood: Sleeppy z_z razorbladeromance1991!!t0A2VlA2Lj 2010/03/13(Sat)20:16 No. 146936 ID: 950529
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Dear /quest/,

It's razorbladeromance1991 again, hey. It's like 5:07 am right now but I can't sleep but, like, it's sunDay anyway so w/e I just hate sleeping during the day cuz of the sun? but I lvoe being awake at night.
Anyway, like, earlier today when I was gonna make my sis write something she just grabbed ii-kun and started making like stupid pictures like the one she posted with my blog? So,like, yeah, //_emoly is not my sister.
Anyway I still wanted to post some poetry but I read all your responses so like Ill read your advice first??
Anyway let me respond to you and thjank you for sticking with me.

>>146735
No, I dont have any friends who can make music, like, I tried to play guitar with i didnt like how it hurt my fingers? So I just sing. I usually sing HIM songs but I whisper them softly to myselve. Like, do you think i shoud me in a band? I just don't think there's a good bandscene for emos like me in the Haaglanden.

>>146736
Uhhh like I dont really follow you anymore so like I guess being nihilist is kind of weird?? so like if you become emo you can be my friend. Uh I can't really ask my sister now though like i could go into her room while she's sleeping cuz like she broke my lock too? So I can break her lock? I dunno how tho.

>>146761
Okay, like,,, incest hentai manga can be pretty hot, but like making out with my little sister is pretty gross? Like I really dont wanna do that. Im not really interested in girls (or guys lol) so I dont want to go to college just for them either?

>>146772
That is pretty nice but it doesnt rhyme??

>>146819
That's not my sister lol

>>146832
Alright like show that I understand real pain? Like sometimes people are like 'you have nothing to complan about' but they dont understand so if I dont talk about myself and show real pain they will see I am not a crybaby or w/e but my pain is like really real. thankx.

>>146834
Well, like, its 5:22am now so, like I can't really storm into her room? ( see above) but I guess i could anyway, since I cant sleep.

>>146837
Her name's Christine. I like love and stuff, like my favorite band HIm has al ot of songs about love I just dont know much about love?

>>146867
Eewwwww

>>146936
If you don't mind me asking, what's your favorite food? Mine's honey chicken.

>>146936
Storm into her room as soon as you know she's awake.

>>146819
>>146832
Uhhh I'm like, not Razor? I just like, wanted to write a poem for him?

>razorbladeromance1991

hmmm... razors... and romance... blades?... poem about... razors and...?
I'VE GOT IT!
Write a poem involving razorblades and romance.
Set in 1991.

>>146936
You should like, totally create a band so you can express yourself? I play acoustic guitar? I like to go to the local poetry reading place? And play my poems with my guitar? It's full of conformists, but they seem to, like, like my songs?

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>>146943
Uh I dunno, I really like instant noodles?

>>146967
Okay, like, I can hear when her doors opens? So then I'll go see her.

>>146971
lol razorblade Romance is the name of the HIM album. It's like my favorite band and album.

>>147040
That sounds pretty cool, like, id like to do that but i dont know where's there's open poetry? Or something? Also I can't play guitar? I could write poetry for you and maybe you could, liek, perform it??


Okay guys, like 30 minutes have passed and i just, like heard my sister exit her room to the bathroom so I'm goin in there now.


Hey guys its Razorbladeromance again, I'm still here. I'm in my sissters room sitting on her bed while she tries to sleep and im bothering her with the questions you asked but, like, she's not getting angry? She's just like, answering, like, all sleepy??
She says she keeps teasing me cuz she loves WHAT?? then why cant she just be nice?? like, im nice to her cuz I love her, but shes always like a total retard.
When I ask her what shes doing she just says sleepin.

So I dunno how to, like, bother her any more? I think she fell asleep.


oh hello, what's this i find here? an ipod with an unsent message?
i see, i see, my little brother has been keeping a secret online dairy (oxymoron as it may be). how silly. well, i'll be a good big sister and post this for him.
hello, everyone, i'm christine, or you can call me cookiedough if you like. i'm 17, in my last year in highschool, and i have the best brother. he is being so cute.
let me take a picture.
he's going to be so angry when he sees i posted this. consider it your payment for sleeping in motel de christine, thomas!

>>146936
Good for you that you're trying to improve your art. And try to explain how you feel about your sisters teasing to her.

Are there any poetry clubs or similar things near you? Because it's easier to improve when you have company and can get critique faster.

>>146970
I know that. I'm trying to help you both. Damn it's hard to write with a cat in your lap.

So how old is the little shit?

Hey cookiedough. Do you think he'll ever understand that teasing = love? :3

>>147381

You ever watch that TV show It's Always Sunny In Philadelphia? It's p. awesome.

>>147381
So that's his real name. Nice. So tell us a bit more about yourself. And why do you keep teasing him all the time? I mean I know it can be fun to tease siblings, but sometimes you need to give them a little space.

>>147381
tits or gtfo

and don't delete the pic from the iphone when you're done.

but seriously, what's up with you and your brother? Always messing with him for what?

>>147423
Most girls love emo boys because they look like girls.
inb4 incest

>>147381
Tell your brother to MAN THE FUCK UP. I'd really appreciate it.

>>147381
Hey Thomas, ever play chess, or any other board games? Why are you so sad anyway?

Ha. your name is Thomas. How dorky.

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>>147396
hey, don't call him a little shit. he's a sweety! he's 19. he's so tiny, though. mom said he was born prematurely. he spend his first year in one of those incubator things. so i consider him my little brother. <3

>>147396
i dunno. he's not very smart! maybe you can help me out? =3

>>147405
i don't think we recieve that show in the netherlands. i don't watch much tv though.

>>147407
well, what would you like to know? i enjoy videogames, anime and manga, 4chan, my favorite food is sushi, my favorite anime and manga serie is ouran high host club, my favorite videogame is the legend of zelda: ocarina of time, sometimes i drawfag in /v/ ms paint threads.
i love teasing my brother because thats the only way i get attention from him! he's adorable and i love him. i just want to interact with him. but maybe i'm a little sadistic too? =3

oops, looks like someone is waking up. i'll steal his iphone again some time, or try to find you on my laptop. byebye


Dear /quest/,

razorbladeromance1991 here. Hey, how are you? It's 2.50 Am now but I dont feel like sleeping. Today was like a real shitty day because ii-kun was missing? Like, i couldnt find ii-kun until just now cuz it was under my sister's pillow so like she only found it when she went to sleep?
But like I did like get to annoy her I think cuz I spend some time on the PC in the living room but like that was real boring cuz I had no privacy? So I went to btother my sister in her room and like she was on her laptop playing this videogam Minecraft. So like, She made this huge tower for no reason? it was kind of weird? And like she didnt die when she jumped into the lavaa? She let me play too and I made like a big skull and like added red blocks at the eyes so like it looked like it was crying blood? it looked cool so I told my sister to save it. Anyway like when I was done she begin tickling me again and stuff and like she was more aggressive? like she uses his nails and like her whole hand instead of just tickling? Maybe it was like cuz it was in her room? Anyway, I left cuz she was dumb and I watched some TV in my room. There's this show on MTV caled Sweet 16 and like it's so dumb? Like, the girls there get all upset but theres nothing to be upset about? Anyway, it was prety shitty but then my sister called that she found ii-Kun so now I'm in her room while she's sleeping. She has like this fullbody mirror in her room so I can take a picture without getting up.
Anyway let me respond to your responses. Thans again as always.

>>147382
Like, i've told her thousands of times already? Like, what am i supposed to say so She'll listen? There's no poetry clubs around here or atleast none I know about. I'll search on the internet. If I find one should I just, like, go for it? Like //_emily said too?

>>147396
uhm I'm not a shit and I'm like 25? You're the little shit.

>>147403
like, teasing isn't love? it's what bullies do?

>>147456
Like, you're the second person who says I look like a girl. I guess I dont like really mind but like dont mention it too much cuz its kind of weird?

>>147457
W/E everyone always acts so macho, It's so stupid! I am so ful of pain I need to express myself cuz like I'll break down if I don't. Lik, maybe you're too dumb to experience pain??? You're, like, a rock? W/E

>>147504
I used to play boardgames before we got internet, now it just feels, like, too boring? Why?
I'm so sad cuz, like, life is really shitty and like I don't want to just get a job and go to my job every day? It's, like, so pointless? Like school? And like, everyone is always so posing? Like, they can't feel? It makes me real sad.

>>147537
w/e I don't, like, go on the internet to make fun of poeple's name's.

Oh yeah I saw the blog my sister posted? I was prety angry but like i guess it is kind of my fault for, like, falling asleep in her room? I lost ii-kun too cuz of that. So w/e and, like, she let me play on her laptop so it's okay I guess? Or should I be real angry?

Anyway I thought of like some poetry today
] In soft darkness a cold heart bleeds
screaming as it releases the tears it feeds
to the angry maw of certain doom
conformed, restrained, in a blank grey room
I don't really know what it means but, like, it sounds prety deep? What do you think it means?
Okay, I gota get out of my sister's room before I fall alseep here again.

See you tomorrow /quest/ or later if i can't sleep again
It's not like I have school lol

Love <#3
razorbladeromance 1991

>>147652
I have an idea. Maybe you should go to your sister and get advice from her for your poems. Her advice may be stupid, but you should at least try.

>>147652
>I am so ful of pain I need to express myself cuz like I'll break down if I don't
Wow, like, I totally feel your pain? There's like, usually poetry clubs? at like bookstores? That's where the other emotional people like me hang out? Also, I think your sister has like, a crush on you? That's like? kind of gross?

>>147652

Dude your sister is still up.. I think she's watching you~

>In soft darkness a cold heart bleeds
This line actually isn't terribly bad. the words your using are too predictable though. try cool instead of cold. the feelings it evokes are more suble and nuanced.
>screaming as it releases the tears it feeds
screaming is a form of release, and therefore this line is pretty repetative. Try not to end a line unless you intend to have it read off with some sort of break. :...it feeds, to the angry..." doesnt work too well unless you change it to be on which it feeds, thereby making the line self-sustainable.
>to the angry maw of certain doom
while maw is a wonderful word, this line comes together like a movie trailer. Metaphor, boy. Metaphor.
>conformed, restrained, in a blank grey room
great imagery here, but you've lost the subject. you can either restablish or throw in a secondary subject earlier on and leave some ambiguity regarding meaning like the pros do.

all in all, not bad. an improvment for sure. try focusing on making them longer and keeping a consistant principle of organization, temporal works best, but requires narrative consessions.

Also free verse is a superior form of poetry.

razorbladeromance1991, what color dod you do your naisl? I always try and do mine sparkily, but it takes so long to do them right. anyway, what do you think of the /quest/s, anyway? I really love those weorld builer ones, like the icon and those really badass ones with the badass guys and badass girls in 'em.

ah...right. rbr1991, could you tell me how good I am?
{{i}} cold hyperion night stears down upon a blighted trail
linkgering across a bleeding wound
like cold maber from a ancient tree
all wristed and ganrled with rage
she weeps gold from her loves care.{{i}}

kthks!

>>147652
You're improving, now just listen to >>147727
and they may not throw peanuts at you if you go to a poetry bar.

But you know bullying and teasing is different. And your sisters teasing is how she expresses her emotions for you, which is that she likes you. She just thinks you should spend a bit more time with her. And it was pretty fun wasn't it? I mean you got to build a kick ass tower and shit.

Well I was thinking you could join a chess club or something but if you've got no experience playing the game I guess that wouldn't work.

Do you have any hobbies or anything?

Hey if you like poetry why don't you join a poetry club.

Current mood: cold razorbladeromance1991!!t0A2VlA2Lj 2010/03/15(Mon)08:22 No. 147953 ID: 950529
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Dear /quest/,

It's your friend razorbladeromance1991 again, hey everyone. So, like, I slept pretty late but when I woke up i read your stuff right away so like Don't worry, I'm still here.
Anyway I read that you sugested I should, like spend more time with my sister? So she won't bother me like so much in the future? So I'm like at her school now. She's gonna be out in a little bit and we can, like, go home together and stuff? Like I'm picking her up?
I used to do that when we were like much smaller.
Anyway what kind of stuff should we do together? Like, I just want to be alone, so like I dont know what to do? But like I gotta do this or she wont leave me alone, right?
So just like, keep suggesting things and I'll read them but I won't be responding until tonight probaby.
Now I will respond to your reactions. Thanks like always.

>>147659
Okay, like, I'll ask her on the way home? Maybe she like shares my hoby? I dont think so but like I can ask.

>>147663
emily you are pretty cool? Like, I think like you and me are the same? Let's be friends? Anyway, like I checked on the internet if there's like poetry clubs cos like we dont have a local bookstore? But like this poetry club has like 5 members and theyre all middle aged women so like I dunno if I want to join. Anyway do you realy think my sister has like a crush on me cuz thatd be prety weird, like what should I do? Should I, like, ask her? Or something?

>>147727
Okay, like, I dont really know what you mean but like I''ll read your reply later when like Im making poetry again, okay?

>>147767
What is that?

>>147808
Hello. I do my nails in like black or dark purple or dark brown cos that's like the color of my make up too. You can see it in the picture Im posting with this post cos like I only wear it when I go outside? Anyway, like, I like the quests that dont have like a lot of text becuz of my dyslexisa? So i dont read the all text quests or the like complicated ones like the Icon. My fav quest now is Shoujen cuz sometimes I think, like, being a girl might be easier? Like, I know that's weird, but like, everyone thinks that sometimes? Anyway, like, I also like the magic and like he has long hair.
Okay your poem I really like, I don't understand it but like it sounds real deep and like complex? So that's pretty cool? I think you will , like get famous, so like, people here are giving me lots of advice on poetry so like, read along with me and we'll improve together.

>>147830
Yeah so like, this is the post that, like, made me decide to pick up my sister? Anyway like yeah so Im gonna spend more time with her and then like she'll leave me alone. So, like, I just need like ideas on what to do? Cuz Im' usualy alone?

>>147834
So like I responded to emily about joing poettry so like scroll up a little. Anyway like, hobbies I like music a lot and sometimes I read a bit of manga? (japans comics) So should I, like, join a music club or manga club? Like, I donnu if those exist, but like I could search. I guess if I go to college maybe theyll have clubs there?

Any way the bell has been ringing for like 10 minute sso my sis is probly here soon. So, like, give me lots of ideas on like what to do with my sister so she'll leave me alone later and, like, I also dont know how to ask her if she has like a crush on me? So, like, Ill be reading but I wont be responding until like tonight or like tomorrow. Okay, see you.

Love <3
Racorbladeromance1991

>>147953
Well she likes videogames and shit. Find some nice co-op game you can both play. Or you can watch some anime or something, or if you think she is interested you can read her some of your poetry.

>>147953
Yeah, I guess most manga clubs are in college.

When your sister tickles you, have you tried tickling back? Or just lying there and trying not to react at all?

try going to the movies together. its like being alone, but with the added benifit of not being alone.

>>147953
You know I think it would be nice to spend time with your sister. Have you asked her how her life is going? Maybe she's just as lonely as you are

You both moved and lost some friends and you're probably the only one she feels really close to.

hey cutie~
listen this is kind of weird but i kno u'll understand

could you please take a pic of u with you're shoe on you're head?

OMG u r so hawt. wanna hook up? 20/f/NL ;3

>>147953
What the hell is with that statue in the background jesus christ you must destroy it.

Also, Free verse is a form of poetry which refrains from meter patterns, rhyme, or any other musical pattern. It is more free. You can focus less on making it rhyme and more on the substance of the thing. Of course, I say this because I'm a terrible rhymer.

>>Hello. I do my nails in like black or dark purple or dark brown cos that's like the color of my make up too. You can see it in the picture Im posting with this post cos like I only wear it when I go outside? Anyway, like, I like the quests that dont have like a lot of text becuz of my dyslexisa? So i dont read the all text quests or the like complicated ones like the Icon. My fav quest now is Shoujen cuz sometimes I think, like, being a girl might be easier? Like, I know that's weird, but like, everyone thinks that sometimes? Anyway, like, I also like the magic and like he has long hair.
Okay your poem I really like, I don't understand it but like it sounds real deep and like complex? So that's pretty cool? I think you will , like get famous, so like, people here are giving me lots of advice on poetry so like, read along with me and we'll improve together.

oh, kai! yeah, awesome! We're like friends now, right? Awesome! we'll be best friends foerever!.

what's the kinda girl you'd think you'd be, huh? poeple always say I look like girls.what do you do when they say that?

what does your sister post at /tg/?

Hmm, you know hearing about you struggling with your art has made me decide to try to write again. I wrote a short story, it's not very good. But what the fuck I'm posting it anyway.

-------------------------------------

She surveyed the crowd. Her prey was out there in the moving masses.
He was moving away from her, his lithe body moving through the crowd as if it wasn’t there.

She picked up the pace, the hunt had gone on for a long time but now it was drawing to a close.

Like a hunted animal he sensed her presence. He knew she was out there after him. She could see panic taking a hold on him. He started to struggle against the crowd, trying to pick up the pace but only slowing himself down.

She cut through an alleyway to cut him off.

When the arm reached out from the darkness he was to startled to resist. He was pulled in and the arm locked down around his throat. He couldn’t scream and his feeble attempts at freeing himself were in vain. The chloroform drenched rag descended onto his face and she locked eyes with him. There was recognition, panic and lastly resignation. He fully understood now, he could run but never escape.

She smiled down at the limp form. She had put down her pray. He darling brother was coming home with her and this time he would stay.

-----------------------------------

As I said it's not so good. It's something I came up with today while I was bored in class and I decided to actually for once write one of those down.

razorbladeromance1991!!t0A2VlA2Lj 2010/03/15(Mon)15:58 No. 148089 ID: 950529
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Dear /quest/,

Razorbladeromance1991 here, like, hiding in his closet. Like some bad things happened? Like, I'll start with tellin what like came first.
So me and Christine went home together and like I asked her about poetry and she like said she was pretty interested? So that was cool? And like we talked about like that minecraft game? Like what more we could make and stuff? So like when we got home she like installed Minecraft on the PC in the living room and like we played online together, like she was using her laptop and stuff. So like, we had pretty good time and stuff? Then like we went to my room and I like showed her some of my poetry and like we wrote a little poem together which was like
Block after block
Towers cloud high
Live through the shock
And love the lie
It's like about Minecraft but like also about the modern world? Like how weird it is and like everything is fake? I think it's prety deep.
Anyway, after that we went to watch a movie in her room, It was like this movie with computer graphics and stuff, like Sky Captain or something? Anyway like the commercials came on and she began tickling me again, so like, I took your advice of tickling back? But like she got more aggresive cuz of it? and then, like, she grabbed my wrists with one hand and like tickled me with the other so then i like tried Your other advice, like, lying real still? But like, she went silent to and like she wasn't really tickling anymore? But more like touching me? And like it was like really weird? Like, I got really uncomfortable? And then she leaned in real close to my face and like i was really uncomfortable so like I fought real hard and ran to my room and like hid in the closet. she's been calling for me for like the last 30 minutes but like I feel real weird and awful and stuff but I also feel bad for just ditching her but like i dont want to leave the closet. What am i gonna do???? :'(

well I will responsd to your replies, like, im sitting here anyway> Thanks like alwaysl

>>147954
So yeah like your suggestions was like why we played Minecraft. So thanks.

>>147962
Yeah so yeah like I tried that but like I dunno if it helped? Scroll up to read more.

>>147974
well It looks like she has like quite a bunch of friends? Since she was saying bye to like so many people at her school and like she's usually doing stuff. I asked her how she's doing and like she was like "Yeah Im doing good"
but I dont want to like spend time withh her again now?

>>147998
Yah I dunno lol that statue is like pretty weird? Anyway I like free verse becuz like it's nonconvormist but like its not really poetry? Or like real reblelious poetry? Maybe I should, like, try it when Im good at normal poetry.

>>148011
Yeah like I don't mind being friends, that's pretty cool. So like, i think I wouldn't be that different as a girl but like I guess I'd be more emo cuz of my period? But like I could wear cuter clothes so that would be cool? Like now I cant wear like a lot of boots and like shirts and skirts? Anyway I dunno when people like tell me I look like a girl or like I have a babyface I just shrug cuz like it doesn't really matter cuz Im not a macho
My sister doesnt post on /tg/ she only goes to like /v/ and /a/ an /b/ and /x/ and sometimes /h/ and /y/ and /d/ and she sends me like weird pictures eugh

>>148076
uhmmmm that is like real scary :'( especially after like what just happened? But it's also like a free verse poetryM so that's pretty cool but it made me like kind of upset so like dont post anymore of like those kind of stories, ok?

So, like, I dunno, I'll just like sit here for some more. She has school tomorrow so she'll be in bed soon and like I can sit her until she leaves for school. Like maybe I should get food when she's in bed though cuz Im kinda thirsty?
Okay so see you later probably Im not going anywhere lol :'(

Love <3
razorbladeromance1991

okay, yeah. your sis wants to incest you so hard. your options are move out or bang her.

>>148089
Damn man your sister goes to /d? Actually that's pretty hot in a very terrifying way. Tell me if she ever visits sweden.

I don't think running from your sister will solve anything. You need to sit down and have talk with her, just make sure you have something between her and you while doing it.

You're improving your poetry pretty fast by the way. You're getting better at using symbolism and methaphors.

>>148092
Shutup you. Not everyone wants to bang their own sisters, you know.

Now, I dont know how much might be her liking you or just trying to tease you, but I guess the right thing to do is to be honest with her about things getting uncomfortable there for a moment.

Also, out of that closet man, she isn' gonna eat you. As far as we know.

Man up and come out of the closet. Your sister will totally understand.

I made a joke.

Can you discover it?

Like, your sister? like totally wants you? gross?

>>148098
like, I mean like? you're cute? but your sister? that's like gross?

>>148089
Uhm. Yeah. Sounds like you actually have something real to cry about now.

Try to avoid her for a while. When you're feeling up to it, tell her that made you feel very uncomfortable and that she shouldn't do it again.

If she tickles you in the future, just try struggling and making her stop. Actually tell her to stop, too.

>>148089
Did your sister touch you in the bad places, son?

whoah... sudden conscience...
look... a person has to confront what they can to get ahead. If you felt that was innapropiate, you oughta let her know...

I mean... she did touch you... in your sensitive areas... right? I mean, that'd be horrible...

Hopefully she's just high or something. If she's not, this could be a bigger issue than getting her to stop shooting up or something...

>>Yeah like I don't mind being friends, that's pretty cool. So like, i think I wouldn't be that different as a girl but like I guess I'd be more emo cuz of my period? But like I could wear cuter clothes so that would be cool? Like now I cant wear like a lot of boots and like shirts and skirts? Anyway I dunno when people like tell me I look like a girl or like I have a babyface I just shrug cuz like it doesn't really matter cuz Im not a macho
My sister doesnt post on /tg/ she only goes to like /v/ and /a/ an /b/ and /x/ and sometimes /h/ and /y/ and /d/ and she sends me like weird pictures eugh

Oh wow RBR1991~! Ghat sucks!I mean, your sis did that? she is kinda cute, and but she's a real 'b/tard. Did shue hurt you? I...you can't be hurt! you're friends! I...I gotta write this down

{i}hurt inside
everywhere cuts
bleeding for love
my eyes fall low
and I can never see
light doesn't work

did...she hurt you? because maybe she thought you liked it...I mean, she's cute...I wish I had a sis like that, to help dress me up and so I didn't have to wear those big boots and junk...

maybe...you tell your parents?

>>148100
BAH! She's just teasing you, boy.
If you want her to stop, you just need to take it too far for her to handle.
Next time? Start to make out with her. She'll play along for awhile, but pretty soon she'll freak out and leave. If that's not enough, then drop your pants and shove her face in your crotch. She'll bail and leave you alone.

>>148109
this plan could not go wrong!

You could just compliment her big tits to creep her out and leave you alone. Man, she has big TEEETIIES. I think you should also contemplate going to a strip bar. Could be fun and adventurous. For the BIIIG TEETTIIES.

Of course you could be an assman, do you lika the rumpus? Strippers will shove them into your face just as much brah.

I wish I could punch you over TCP/IP.

stop saying everything with an upper inflection? like it's a question but it's not a question?
seriously stop.

Wow, dude. Way to not handle a situation well. Running away from your problems? I expected better of you than that. You need to sit your sister down and talk about what just happened. It doesnt matter how awkward it may be, if this blog has taught me anything about you it's that you really know how to express yourself, and it would be a shame to let that talent go to waste when it could serve you the most.

I mean, come on, this is your sister. No matter how weird things may get at times, she still loves you and deep down you love her too. I mean, thats what siblings do, right? They may not always get along, but they're always there for eachother. If you don't get out of the closet and go talk to her, you'll wind up furthering the rift between you two and it may get to the point where it can never heal. You don't want that, trust me, I've been through something similar myself.

So you may feel awkard right now, you may feel confused and betrayed and all that stuff, but imagine how she feels. Probably the same way, but rejected and embaressed on top of that. She's not as well versed socially as you are. She made a mistake and by now she's probably kicking herself over it. Hell, I'll bet she's crying about she's so remorseful. She needs you there to tell her that it's alright and that everyone makes mistakes sometimes. She needs you there to sit her down and talk to her about how she feels and how you feel. You need to clear the air, get her side of the story, understand what's happening rather than just making assumptions like all the other sheep out there. Come on Razorbladeromance1991, be the freethinker we all know you are. It can only bring you closer together.

And hey, she could just have been joking. You never know. You guys sound like you really need to talk things out though anyway.

So you still haven't come out of the closet (I think I will never get tired of that joke)? I still think you really need to talk to her.

Oh and ask her what she thought of the story. Damn, actually writing it down got me thinking I should do it again. Might be another story coming later today. This one won't be scary like the last one, the coming one is going to be sad and depressing.

razorbladeromance1991!!t0A2VlA2Lj 2010/03/15(Mon)22:14 No. 148192 ID: 950529
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Dear /quest/,

It's me again, razorbladeromance1991. I, like, fell asleep in the closet, and now, like, my neck hurts so bad? And like it's 6 am now. But, well, like, I should just wake up my sister if you all think I should, like, talk to her?
I'll respond to your responses first, before i go wake up my Sister.


Okay, like, you're all saying basically the same? Like, yeah, she hurt me, like my wrists still hurt a bit? And I was like so scared? She didn't touch, like, my penis tho. But like, her hands moved, like, all over the rest of my body? I felt, like, really violated and stuff.
So, like, yeah, I used to, like, just fight here off, and like, in my last blogs I posted that she broke my room's lock cuz I, like, accidentally hit her too hard. But, like, I guess she was like, cos, like, i was tickling back? and then doing nothing? Like, it gave her the wrong idea??
Yah you're right about, like, leaving her cos like, she may be feeling real guilty. Now I feel guilty too :'(
Okay I'm going there now, see you later



hello everybody, this is cookiedough again. that was quite the scare, wasn't it? well, me and thomas talked a bit. we feel better now. he asked me to post our conversation so he gave me his ipod (he calls it ii-kun, it's so cute x3). here's a little photo of us reunited! hes going to try to sleep now, so i'll write out the conversation. i have school in two hours anyway.
the conversation isnt really complete because i have to translate it from dutch. ill post the important parts. =3

thomas: *wakes me up*
me: thomas? are you okay?
thomas: christine, im sorry for running away. i want to talk about what happened.
me: okay. i am sorry too. i never wanted to hurt you.
thomas: what happened? how did you experience it?
me: well, you were tickling me too so i thought you finally warmed up to me again. then when i pinned you you got all silent. i guess i thought you were surrendering yourself to me. that is a little dumb in hindsight.
thomas: oh. huh? christine, do you have romantic feelings for me?
me: .......(his face was so cute here x3)........yes
thomas: but we're brother and sister!
me: well, maybe i want to be more than your sister. i want you to be my brother and my lover.
thomas: what? i cant return those feelings.
me: so do you think im unattractive? or stupid?
thomas: yeah, i mean, no but youre my sister so i just dont feel it.
me: well maybe you should try to get over that. i mean, you love me, right?
thomas: yeah
me: well i love you too, so its no problem.
thomas: i dont know, christine. i feel real weird and confused and scared. i need time to think about this.
me:okay, but no matter what you decide, i wont give up.
thomas: okay. hugs?

and then we hugged. =3
so everything is fixed!
thomas will be checking with you again tomorrow. be nice to him, okay?
byebye

>>148192
RAZOR OH GOD YOUR SISTER IS CREEPY

>>148192
Damn lady. You're one scary attractive girl.

>>148192
like? gross? razor? you're like totes cute? you could find someone that's like? not your sister? and your sister is pretty? so like, she could like? find someone that's like? not her brother? tell her to like, get over it? you know? right?

Just tell her you're gay, bro

i think we all CALLED IT! anyway. as long as you don't have babies it will be fine, that pretty much the only downside for incest.

Oh god dammit... damn you Internet. Damn you HARD.

See? Now you know her side of the story. Remember, she's a person too, and has feelings and junk you need to consider.

Now you need to figure out how you feel about all this.

Suggestion 2010/03/16(Tue)01:14 No. 148294 ID: 445c48
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>>148089
> I like free verse becuz like it's nonconvormist but like its not really poetry?

>Implying free verse isn't poetry

Like, you like? Really need to do what's like, best for you? I know you like? love your sister? But she's loving you like, too much? you know? Tell her how you really feel? and like, maybe she'll understand? Or just like, throw a brick? at her face?

Current mood: *sigh* razorbladeromance1991!!t0A2VlA2Lj 2010/03/16(Tue)15:14 No. 148433 ID: 950529
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Dear /quest/,

It's your friend razorbladeromance1991 again, hello. So, like, me and my sister, like, things have been a bit serious? Like, tense and stuff? But, like, I'm happy it's like not lying? Like we don't try to pretend it never happened or something. Like, we just, like, like she apologized and I'm like "I need some time" and so like we're just dealing with it.
I showed her like how she hurt me, like, the scratches on my stomach and like the bruise on my wrist? She seemed like pretty shocked and was like "I'm sorry' a lot, so like, i guess she wasn't aware of what she was doing? Anyway, she insisted that we take a phot of it, so Im posting that with this blog.
So I want to thank you because, like, I was just going to run away, so like, it's good you told me to talk about it. So thank you.
Anyway, let me get to your responses.

>>148193
I know, right? But like she's my sister so I cant just ditch her? She was nicer when she was little.

>>148196
Do you think creepiness is like attractive? That's weird but like it's also kind of interesting. Like, that's like masochism? Is that an emo thing?

>>148197
Like, I know, right? Like, she should find, like a real boyfriend? Cos it's pretty creepy? Maybe, if like, I got a girlfriend, she'd leave me alone? But, like maybe thats mean? Like to just get a g/f to ditc her? But how do i get her a b/f?

>>148200
uhmmm but I'm not? :gonk:

>>148203
But like I don't want to, like have sex with her.

>>148220
Yeah like I dont want to hurt her and like I guess it's like I just dont like her that cuz like we're brother and sister? so like is that fair? I'm like real confused and like a little scared and stuff. I dunno how I feel.

So like that's it for today. I will end my blog with like some poetry i made today:

A touch too rough
Eyes closed in fear
A misunderstood love
[/i]
I didnt get further cos like I kept thinking 'bear'?
So help me please.

Love <3
Razorbladeromance1991

>>148433
Like, you like? Really need to do what's like, best for you? I know you like? love your sister? But she's loving you like, too much? you know? Tell her how you really feel? and like, maybe she'll understand? Or just like, throw a brick? at her face?

>A touch too rough
>Eyes closed in fear
>A misunderstood love

This is actually pretty ok, needs an ending, but its a nice little couplet. Fear doesnt rhyme with bear though. If your ever get stuck on a rhyme go through the alphabet. Off the top of my head that makes Beer, deer, ear, fear, gear, hear, leer, mere, near, pear, peer, queer, rear, seer, tear, vear, year.

you'll want your next line to be 6 sylables as well, since our first and second are both 4. You should also make it alude to the second line, thematicaly symetrical, if you will, since 1 and 3 are both establishing subjects. Just, you know, reference a body part i guess? "fingers trembling...", or "cheeks hot...", etc.

This is nice, deep, personal, susinct and touching. Your skills have definately improved.

>>148433
If you can't find a good rhyme for a word, change the word. Mess with that second line, while keeping the meaning the same. Use some different words in it.

As for your sister, maybe you can find out if any boys at school have a crush on her. You could ask her friends. Maybe you can like, snoop around on her computer and find their emails so that you can contact them privately.

>>148433
Well I guess part of it could be machochism. Never really considered it, but I'm attracted to strong women and I often find strange things to be attractive. But then I'm a somewhat strange and self destructive person myself.

Well lets see. If you're going to find a girlfriend in the hopes of keeping your sister away then I think you need to find the local emo crowd. Start hanging out with them and try to find a nice girl among them.

Oh and I did some new writefaggotry. This one was something I came up with while going to sleep yesterday. I'm not really sure it came out as I wanted it. Anyway here it is.

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The steadily falling cold November rain had soaked his clothes. He was not feeling cold though. His purpose was all that filled his mind as he walked through the park under the bare branches of the trees.

He had lost everything he cared about. He could not run from them and they would not stop even if he surrendered. He had tried to end it himself but he didn’t have the courage for it.

There was only one way left now. He saw them up ahead in the field. They still hadn’t seen him, the rain masked his approach. He threw himself on one of them. With desperation he clawed, bit, kicked and grappled in the mud. Once he got on top he started raining down punches. The others hit him but nothing made him stop, he was numb to the pain. He could not stop it any longer.

This was what the road had led too. With mounting desperation they tried to pull him off his victim but they had never dealt with someone willing to go this far. He felt a sense of exhilaration he had never felt before. He was no longer helpless, it was they who watched on in mounting fear as he took control.

Then came the sound. A horrible crunching sound followed by the ringing of a metal pipe. His vision went black and he fell forward into the mud. He heard the other scrambling away, they were running away from him. He almost felt like laughing but he couldn’t breathe, there was mud in his face. Slowly turning around he wondered briefly why he hurt so much and at the warm sensation at the back of his head.

The unseeing eyes stared up into the grey clouds. The cold steady rain washed away the blood and mud from the boys face as the broken and battered body of a young boy let out its final sigh.

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There are probably some grammar mistakes there, but the autocorrector should have made sure there are no misspellings. I'm still not sure it gives the picture I intended from the start though. But I guess I won't know what impressions others get from it unless I let other people read it.

>>148433
DAMN BOY YOU FAT

//_emily 2010/03/16(Tue)21:58 No. 148583 ID: f609ed
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Uhhhhhh so like I was browsing? /b/? and like, I found? this thing? I'm pretty sure its like? your sister? I'm thinking? you should still go with the brick? to the face?

>>148583

Please to take this to the discussion thread. Thanks.

>>148585
but it's like? relevant? to this thread? I mean like? what if razor? doesn't like goooo to the discussion board? you know?

>>148583
the writing style mixed with the fact that the sister does not have access to that pic makes it obvious that it is a fake.

razorbladeromance1991!!t0A2VlA2Lj 2010/03/16(Tue)22:28 No. 148591 ID: 950529
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Dear /quest/,

AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
>>148583
I, like, send that photo to her email. Maybe that's why, like, she wanted to have it so bad? Like, I thought it was weird she wanted pictures of like my injuries? I'm so scared :'(((
i'm sitting in my closet again. This time I'm like really staying until like she's off to school.
What am I gonna do?????

>>148591
Confront her with it. You have justice on your side.

you could try hitting her

>>148591
>>148591

RBR1991 don't pansic! she just might like you and she's trolling b maybe? I hope she's not actually gonna rape you and then kill you and stuff, because you're my new friend and that would be bad.
>>148583
Wow! Emily you go to /tg/! That's awesome! I was hoping someone else could went there, it's so lame now. Blarug.

But RBR, maybe your mom and dad can help? I know I don't talk to mine caz i'm too cool for them, but maybe they can help. if she is a carzy b-person, maybe you can get some help.

>>148595
yeah? like sometimes? I go to /tg/? but I mostly like /fa/? and tgchan?

And maybe? we can help razor? do you have like? a car, razor?

>>148596
Yea! we are so comignt o pick you up! it's gonan be like, a quest! Hey, eheh, I can post here and ask for questions like Ruby!

Where in the us do you live, RBR? I am so coming up to save you! then we can, like, go out and go do some queststuff.

>>148604
He lives in like? The Netherlands?

>>148609
>road trip.

>>148611
>Where in the us do you live, RBR?
>us
>Netherlands

>>148591
You're in the closet again? Hiding won't solve anything. Try talking with your parents. Don't mention the whole molesting angle. But tell them that you're sisters teasing is starting to go over the top and you need them to make her back off a bit.

razorbladeromance1991!!t0A2VlA2Lj 2010/03/17(Wed)11:20 No. 148805 ID: 950529
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Dear /quest/,

Sorry, I like fell asleep in the closet again. So, like, I don't want to hide? but like I'm too scared to go out. She's gone to school now I think tho so I'll get out. I'm like sooooo hungry.
Okay let me like get back to your responses.

>>148593
But, like, I'm like pretty scared of her? Like she's way stronger than me. I'm like not athletic at all, like, i could a bit of a belly and my arms are like way skinny? And she used to do like olympic gymnastics? I dunno what the word is in english. Like she leaped over wooden things and like did handstands and like hung from rings and like did huge jumps? And she did like kickboxing for a while last year but she didn't like, like, getting hit and stuff.
So anyway I dont wanna confront her. Not yet.

>>148594
Like, scroll up, I just responded

>>148595
Okay, like, I'm happy you are like my friend? Cos like, you care? Like, okay I'll text my mom now. Will get back to that when I get like a response.

>>148596
No, like, I dont have a car, but like I have a bicycle and like a public transport pass. I don't even have like a drivers license? :'( Thanks tho

>>148604
So like, I live in the Netherlands tho? Not the US? It's in Europa, next to Germany. But like, thanks for like wanting to help.

>>148609
Like, where do you live? Do you like
live in the US too?

>>148637
Okay like I just send a text. Ill look if I got like a response.
Okay eugh so like I send my mom like "mom christine is taking her teasing too far could you make her stop" and she's like "thomas you're 19 you need to be able to deal with this, when are you going to college to set a good example" EUGH WHATEVER

Okay like, since my sis is out of the house I'll like respond to some of your older responses cos I like got some time?

>>148449
Okay, so like, yeah like, if I divert her attention that'll save me? I'll go check her laptop now.
So like she has a password but like I was like 'thomas' and it worked. Like........ like oh god? The entire desktop is like filled with pictures of me? all her files are pictures of me? like, going back like thre eyears? and some of them are real emberasing. eugh how did she ge


hello again, everyone. it's cookiedough here from thomas's iphone.
you don't have to worry any more. it was all a misunderstanding. me and thomas made up. =3
heres a picture of us hugging. see? everything is fine now. so dont worry or call the cops or anything crazy like that lol x3
now some bad news. thomas dropped his iphone. it broke. he wont be coming online anymore. sorry!
well, i have to go. byebye

>>148805
Obligatory statement of concern. Suspicion concerning circumstances of phone breaking. Implication that subtext exists beneath explicitly stated details.

Overreaction.

>>148805
>it's cookiedough here from thomas's iphone.
>thomas dropped his iphone
uh

>>148805


O_o Uhm.... This is getting into like yandere stuff now.

Really appreciate another update from Razorblade...

>>148805
Yeah I'm gonna be calling the police right about now.

>>148805
Aww he looks so happy and passed out from happiness. Or drugs. Maybe both.

So what are your plans now sweetie?

Well, while I track down your location from the cues you've given so far (that picture of the school should help!)

If by any chance you get away from her, Razor... try to get somewhere safe and call the police. Your sister is obviously mentally disturbed.

//_emily 2010/03/17(Wed)12:03 No. 148818 ID: f609ed
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Like, oh my god? Your sister is like? crazy? you really need? to get away from her? you're like going to get raped?
I like didn't want to say anything? but I live in the Hague? depending on like where? you live? I could probably? come and drive there? I could like beat up your sister? But I'm kind of weak? So like, I'll bring a brick? for her face? Or like? you could like? come to the Hague central station? Thursday? 12 PM? Here's like? a photo of me? so you can like, recognize me? and stuff? hope you can like, get there?

>>148805
Ok, wow. This has gone too far.

Does anybody know a recipe for a kind of mild acid that Thomas could mix together out of household chemicals and use in self defense if he had to?

>>148819
like, ammonia and bleach? but like not the anime?

>>148818
My god, you're perfect for him.

>>148820
We don't want to like, kill her! Jesus. Ammonia and bleach makes, like, deadly fumes and shit.

>>148818

Like o my weeney beeney

Proceed...

>>148823
Yeah? I know? But he like, wanted? self defense aids? He could always just like? grab a kitchen knife?

>>148838
Pepper spray, mayhaps. I don't know what kinda money our dear emo has available to him, but it's not like that's hard to keep track of. Or a tazer.

Whatever, we're counting on you to save our adorable poet, Emily!

>>148849
Hot sauce and alcohol in a small spray bottle.

>>148849
Like because of your response? I decided he has to like? write a poem? for me?

>>148838
I was going to suggest getting a knife, but decided on acid because, as has been previously stated, we don't want this situation to get all murder on us.

SirTen!!H3AwAzMwMw 2010/03/18(Thu)02:49 No. 149117 ID: a7a85a
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>>148818


You know what to do.

RBR! ar joo ok? I not hear from you, and you could be rapeds! I want to make sure you're ok, and not deaded! please reply? Come on man~!

//_emily 2010/03/24(Wed)19:35 No. 151584 ID: 18b69f
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Hey everyone, it's //_emily! Razor like, made it? to the train station? He's fine? he'll like talk to you after I do? Anyway? Sorry it took so long to like? Reply? But like? His iPhone just got fixed? So we can like, reply now? But we wanted to like, post this picture? of us?

We've been like? Really busy these past two weeks? Like, uhm? Since I live on my own? I had to work a bit more to help pay for more food? and stuff? But like? I work at my family's bakery? So they're letting him work there too? For now? Or for however long? So like, he can raise some money on his own? so he can like, live on his own?

We've had like? A lot of fun together? We like? like to go hang out at this park nearby? And see movies together? and other stuff? So like, yeah?

Also, so far like? his sister hasn't found him? Or his blog? So yeah?

>>148821
He is, like? pretty cute, huh?

>>149117
Uhm? Like put butter? on him?

~Okay? So like? Now Razor is going to post in a few minutes?

overuse of 'like' is mindfucking me...

anyway... plans first...

she posted from the i-phone, so she may find it through the username and stuff...

so she can show up any minute...
maybe she already has.


Either way, he needs to lay low for a while... He really did looked drugged before, so a drug test is in order... As in, his sis may have given him a roofie or something...

>>151590
Well it's been a week. I think if he was drugged he's fine by now.

razorbladeromance1991#666 Suggestion 2010/03/24(Wed)23:21 No. 151692 ID: 950529
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Dear /quest/,

It's me, razorbladeromance1991! Like, hey! It's been, like, so long. Like two weeks? Like, thanks for all your advice and stuff cuz like, I got to meet up with emily and like, she let me live in her apartment? And like, it's like, two weeks and it's pretty nice? To be away from home. But like now my mommmmm cut my allowance cuz she thinks I should get my own job. And like, my sister, shes like playing dumb and wishing me luck and stuff. You think shes gonna try to track me down? Cuz thats pretty scary?
Like when she found me on her laptop she like beat me and tied me up and stuff and then she like broke ii-kun but then she went to school and like cuz i cut myself the ropes didnt hurt much so I could free myself? so like I got on the family pc and saw your suggestions and stuff so I went to den haag centraal and stuff. I just got my ii--kun back from the repairman.
So, like wow! This wouldnt have like happened with out you? Like, it was scary but like, im glad that, like, i managed to escape? Before it got worse? ( how?? )
Anyway im pretty happy here but like I think emily doesnt want me to live here forever lol and like i work at her familys bakery now but like I should get my own job and place? Also maybe I should go to school? Cuz like I hate college but like emily goes to this artschool the Koninklijke Akademie voor Beeldende Kunst, where she studies fashion and stuff, so like, I guess I could go study art too? Cuz like I sometimes draw a bit? I could show you cuz emily has a scanner. here's the website, it also has english www.kabk.nl
Okay so like, please help me out, like, I gotta find a job where they will acept me and my paina nd like maybe sign up for college? but I dunno what classes to take? also, like, I should like thank emily? like we're prety good friends in 2 weeks, eventhough like shes punk emo and im goth emo, we stil get along prety well. So like, just, like, help me out again thanks.
PS what to do about my sister? like, you raly think she'll come after me? what do?
Thanks, ilu all

Love <4
Razorbladeromance1991

>>151692
Listen here, Razor!

Keep Emmers nearby at all times, and strive to not be alone. Should sis arrive, do not, I repeat, DO NOT BE ALONE WITH HER. All her abuse has been perpetrated when the two of you were alone, so that there would be no or little proof.
Should she come again, be absolutley certain to call her out on it. Apologies won't work now, she's driven you from home, broken your property, and scared the fuck out of you. You've given her a second chance, she doesn't deserve another. Call the police, press charges, so on and so forth, should she hurt you again.

Sibling love is a beautiful thing... but she doesn't love you. She wants you. She doesn't care, clearly, how you feel in this situation. So it's not love anymore.

You sure you're okay, man? Those look like tear tracks, and you're putting a lot of effort into covering your neck.

>>151692
Why do you keep saying 'two weeks'? Your last post was on the 17th, and now it's the 24th so that's 7 days. One week.

Heyyy, when did you get that lip piercing?

I don't think your sister is crazy enough to come after you but you should get some kind of protection. Have you told your parents or the police about her?

>>151732
Like? That's his make up? He hasn't been like? Too depressed here? You know?
>>151936
Like? His iPhone has like, that uh? word thinger on it? where it decides words? So I think it was like? a typo?

>>151692
Okay so you want a job right?

How about a job at a bookstore? That seems about your speed.

Just as planned...