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17020 No. 17020 ID: fb5d8e

>BEGIN CHAPTER 28
>"JUDGEMENT, REVERSED"

>Find previous chapters and volumes in /questarch/
>Textdiscussion in /questdis/
>Fanfiction in /txt/ and fanart in /quest/
>Join us on IRC as DiveQuest and MudyQuest have update wars: Rizon, #rubyquest
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No. 17669 ID: 4d2ea2

Freak out, run out and check Bladetree's tent, then make Cheryl turn around if he's not there.
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No. 17670 ID: 089d75

Tell her about the intermission´s dream.
Straight down to the harness thing.
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No. 17671 ID: f98e0b

>>17670
oooh yes do that
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No. 17673 ID: 6164e0

>>17672
Said she threw the dwarf too to keep him company.
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No. 17674 ID: 96945d

Alright, that's it.

You need to grab her by the shoulders.
You have to tell her we can't just go and fight the Skullking on our own, and we need to look after our friends. You understand her being frustrated, but we can't just shun and throw away people that we get on the wrong side of for a short while, even if they are being a bit ridiculous about it.
"I understand that I haven't been good at explaining things to you, and we're getting better with it, but we can't just throw our comrades overboard! I mean, I would never do that to you, would I? Hypothetically, of course."
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No. 17676 ID: 0d5afc

>>17637
"I'm trying my best Raital, but we can't just completely disregard everyone and everything else in the world. I feel like I could die without you too, but you need to think more about the longterm. There are lots of things that pose a threat to us and everyone else. The only way we can be together forever is if we focus on defeating them."
"Plus... This may have basically solidified Bladetree's opinion of us as evil. I'm worried what he might try to get the rest of the High Elves to do now, and Axebeard was a really good friend of mine."
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No. 17677 ID: f44349

>>17664
Aaagh, damnit no, we have to go back after them.

"Raital you can't hurt people just to get to me.
I'm sorry for being such a tease but you can't take it out on the others.
We have to go back for them."
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No. 17679 ID: 684c9b

Punishing Raital by denying her sex is not a good idea. We are still going back for our companions and explaining what she did was wrong, but we upsetting her is never a good course of action.
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No. 17682 ID: fb5d8e
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17682

Mudy puts his tiny foot down.
>"Raital, I have a feeling that what you’re feeling for me isn’t love. It’s obsession. When you can’t see anything in the world but your love, that’s obsession."
, he says.
>"I love you, but this is starting to scare me. I’m going to turn Cheryl around. I think it may be best if we don’t sleep together tonight."

Raital turns her back to Mudy.
>"Fine! If your dumb friends mean that much to you, go out and get them by yourself."
, she snaps.
>"I could have killed them, you know. I could have killed everyone. I could kill you right now with no effort at all. You are just a weak little worm. All you're good for is being cute! Maybe I am obsessed with you just because of that one stupid characteristic! And you don't even have the guts to take responsibility for that.
>GOOD NIGHT!"
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No. 17684 ID: 1afd58

>>17682
Oh, shut the fuck up, you needy bitch.

I'm going to go find the people that actually matter.
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No. 17685 ID: 4d2ea2

Well, go get that worm turned around.
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No. 17686 ID: f98e0b

>>17684
YES I TOO WOULD LIKE TO SEE MUDY TORN ASUNDER
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No. 17687 ID: 132d83

>>17682
She's right. Mudy is a pathetic little worm that wears women's clothing. Cry self to sleep.
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No. 17688 ID: f44349

>>17682
>You are just a weak little worm.
:C
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No. 17689 ID: da5997

>17679

It's not just sex we're denying her.

It's physical contact. Emotional empathy.

It's NECESSARY. It's necessary, because it's the only carrot to which she responds. We've tried doing the "give in to her" method. We've tried doing the "Give her everything she wants" method.

Neither have had any success in assisting Raital in either empathizing with creatures that are not herself, or respecting us in any manner.

She needs to come to her own conclusions as to WHY we have decided she is no longer rewarded with the triggers that provide her positive stimulus; and she needs to not be rewarded with those triggers until the answers she reaches are ones that help HER develop as a functional being.
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No. 17690 ID: 476456

"Th...thats the only thing you like about me?" Start bawling.
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No. 17691 ID: bffa2a

>>17682

Well, it seems love is over. Go tell cheryl to head back and pick up the corpses. We are breaking up at the port.
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No. 17692 ID: e84119

>>17682
"I'm sorry." Turn and leave the tent. We have to recover our friends.
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No. 17693 ID: 4a7262

>>17682
Don't respond, don't indulge her little tantrum.
Just to out and tell Cheryl to pickup dorf and elf.
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No. 17695 ID: 6164e0

>>17682
...what?

Fine, we are turning Cheryl around, we need to go get them. And then we can spend the night talking (with Axebeard definitely, maybe Bladetree) figuring out how to help her get over some of her issues. She still has security issues as a weapon trying to live a normal life, besides our relationship as a whole.

So lets go back, lets get them, talk this out, and try and help Raital.
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No. 17696 ID: 9a71e2

>>17682
We need allies, unless you planned to take on the Skullking with just the two of us?
I'd happily do anything for you, but please think on the long term.

Go turn Cheryl around, then look for a heading/light/play the flute to find them/something.
Since we likely won't get any help from Raital.

Then go back into that tent and sulk on the other side.
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No. 17698 ID: 2b39d8

>>17682

"Then perhaps it's time I began taking responsibility. I'm sorry you feel that way about what we had."

Before you leave, turn and say to her,

"By the way, you began following me as one of those 'dumb friends'. Just because I feel for you in that way doesn't mean I can stop caring for everyone else important to me. If I did that, how could I live with myself?"

Leave to stop Cheryl.
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No. 17699 ID: f39593

>>17682
To cheer her up, grab the hilt of your sword and pull it up and down with the sound of a slide whistle. Don't forget the hilarious face.
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No. 17700 ID: f44349

>>17682
Don't react.
Just go fetch our friends and let her have some time to cool off.
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No. 17701 ID: 476456

Everyone fights in a relationship guys. Jesus.
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No. 17704 ID: 45afb1

>>17682
"Raital, I am not weak. Physically I am, but you know that deep in your heart and mind, you couldn't kill me, no one can kill me. Not because I am cute, but because of what I say, there is an old saying, that the pen is mightier then the sword, I am living proof of that. Raital, do not be sad, things will be they way we want them to be when the time comes, and when it does come, we will both be ready. Goodnight Raital." Go and get Bladetree and Goldwomb.
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No. 17705 ID: 2b39d8

>>17701

>Thinks everyone is actually upset

lol
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No. 17706 ID: 0d5afc

>>17682
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uzMSTwnWnbc
Goodbye Mudotsuki ;_;
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No. 17707 ID: 96945d

>>17682
"...yknow, I'm trying the best I can here. This.. this is the one thing I'm no good at talking through. I can make a whole city come together just by talking, even while in a woman's garb, but... When it comes to you... talking to someone I love, that's my weakness, you know."
Get up and leave, but before going all the way out say, "I just want to make everyone happy. My friends, the nations.. and you."
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No. 17708 ID: 476456

but barring that, get the last word in anyway.
"WELL I'M SORRY I LOVE YOU FOR WHO YOU ARE" and run off sobbing.
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No. 17709 ID: 684c9b

>>17682
Oh boy a fight I love these. Don't respond with more aggression, that never works.

"Raital... I have tried to give you everything. Whenever I haven't had work to do, I've spent it with you. I've spent every night with you since I found you again. And most everything I do, I do for you, Raital. Don't shut me out, I need you.
And I need my friends, too. I need their help to stop mother. And unless we stop her, we will all be dead. So please, don't be mad... I hate seeing your pretty face angry."
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No. 17711 ID: acdc9b

>>17682
"... How DARE you?! The ONLY reason I'm doing this is so we can be together without looking behind our backs every second, without having to run. I'm trying to pull off the impossible, I've been through so much shit, and it's because. I. Love you!

"I don't know how you can just pretend we live in this invulnerable little bubble, but there are people currently hunting us who want us dead, and have the power to make it happen. There's an assassin who could kill Taikah after us, after you! The skullking won't rest until we're dead.

"If you really think I'm so weak, then leave. Because maybe I am. But I can't honestly say I love you without trying EVERYTHING in my power to make this world safe for you. And currently that means traveling with other people and paying attention to others besides you.

"I'm not happy with our situation. I don't like it... but it's inescapable. And I really... really wish... I had your support in this." *sniff*
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No. 17712 ID: dd1710

>>17682
"I took responsibility! But I have responsibility for other things as well! For my friends, my comrades! For uniting Firewater and many other lands against a common foe!"
"WE have the responsibility to ensure our relationship is a healthy one! But you continue to shirk that responsibility and you won't listen to my feelings or my wants!"
"I want peace! I want us to be happy together without our family trying to kill us and destroy the land! Right now there are obstacles to that which need to be addressed! You aren't making it easier to overcome those!"

"...I just want to be able to love you freely."
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No. 17713 ID: bde1b8

Mudy: Shut up and say nothing.

She won this round.

Apologize in the morning.
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No. 17714 ID: 089d75

The dreeeeaaaam... tell her about the dream~

At the least, that´ll get Mudy in deep trouble because of the harness thing.

And that would be fun :3
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No. 17718 ID: 4a7262

Angrily point at your dick.
"THIS. *THIS* IS THE ONLY AUTHORITY IN THIS HOUSE YOUNG WOMAN, AND YOU. WILL. RESPECT. IT!"
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No. 17719 ID: 1afd58

Quickly jam your claw down your own throat and vomit her blood back up all over her. She can no longer be inside us.
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No. 17720 ID: da5997

>17690

No. No tears.

>"I'm sorry you feel that way, Raital. I do love you. I love you so much it hurts. But I can't support these decisions. The reason I responded so strongly last night? The reason I've been trying so hard to make you happy?

I love you, Raital. But I'm terrified that you will decide that it's just easier to kill me and not have to deal with your emotions.

I am cognizant every moment of every day of the fact that you, and every single thing, person, and entity with which we interact could kill me without the slightest thought.

Which is what you haven't been paying me. You love what I give you. You love what I provide. Your younger brother back, hope that you may not have to fear the skullking, Something cute to hold and cherish.

You take, and take, and take.

I can't keep giving.

Yes, you can kill us all. That would be "easy".

Consider how "easy" it would have been for me to just let the dark elves war amongst themselves. How "easy" it would have been for me to let Calvera trap me in that tomb, and kill everyone in their sleep. How "easy" it would have been to let Stormplague kill us all at the Worm-farm. How "easy" it would have been for me to never have risked finding the well of truth. How "easy" it would have been to let you stay enthralled to that sword. How "Easy" it would have been to have just given into Kuhral, and let her take my eyes. How "easy" it would have been to abandon the princess to the Serpentking.

How "EASY" it would have been, in fact, Raital, to have acted like the worm I am, instead of standing up and doing everything I can to change that fact.

We've DONE "easy", Raital.

Now you get to spend some time in this worm's shoes.

Go ahead and kill me if you need to.

It'd be the "easy" thing to do.

I'll be rescuing our friends.

I'll see you in the morning."
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No. 17721 ID: 0d5afc

>>17682
"I don't know what to do anymore..."
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No. 17722 ID: 6164e0

>>17720
;_;
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No. 17723 ID: 96e177

Make an angry face, then projectile shit all over the inside of the tent. She'll HAVE to respect THAT.
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No. 17724 ID: 96945d

>>17713
Yknow what... do this.
Talking just isn't working.
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No. 17725 ID: 40dc56

just say "yeah well fuck you" and leave
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No. 17726 ID: 7eda8b

"Responsibility? See, I thought I was out to save the world, not to be your stuffed toy for all eternity."

Grow visibly angry.

"Do you think I like being too weak to do anything? I have these city-demolishing siblings. My mom is a giant skeleton made of darkness. I have a magic sword in my HEAD. I can't do anything except talk to people. And I've tasked myself to save the whole wide world from invincible monsters. And I have indulged you for weeks because I care about you, and because I need your help... but I am NOT your toy."

Walk out and turn the worm around. Stand on Cheryl's head so you can spot where the dwarf and elf landed.
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No. 17727 ID: 4d2ea2

Look, we have two people stranded in the desert, the talking can wait.
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No. 17728 ID: 7eda8b

>>17727
No it can't. /quest/ finally has gotten the balls to yell at Raital. Doing so is worth the minute or two extra it'll take to rescue them.
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No. 17731 ID: 132d83

>>17728
Bullshit. Pages of "derp derp love derp Raital," should have told you as much.

Regardless of that, I like your response the most. Now if the rest of /quest/ finally followed said example.
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No. 17732 ID: 96945d

>>17728
Yes, because talking has served us so well so far.
Angry girl means SHUTTINK UP NOW. Let her cool off, as she's very obviously hurt.
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No. 17733 ID: 2b39d8

HEADBUTT Raital.

TURN Cheryl.

RIDE worm.

RESCUE friends.
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No. 17738 ID: bffa2a

>>17728

Eh, we are just trying to guess the key word to advance plot right now.
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No. 17740 ID: 4d2ea2

>>17738
Lets try this...

WAKE UP FROM BAD DREAM
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No. 17741 ID: 9294ae

Its been a good run guys, but it's time to just end it all.

Kill yourself, Mudy, do it~
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No. 17743 ID: 2b39d8

>>17738

USE KEY. Damn.

USE KEY ON DOOR. Damn.

USE KEY TO OPEN DOOR. Dammit.

UNLOCK DOOR. .....

UNLOCK DOOR WITH KEY. FUCK DAMMIT AUUUGH

*Answer was INSERT KEY
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No. 17744 ID: fb5d8e
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17744

Mudy chokes up.
A million words run through his head, but the stinging pain in his chest prevents them from coming out.
He decides it's for the best.

Mudy silently leaves the tent.
Suddenly the desert night's cold has a bite again.

He taps the back of the sandworm, ordering Cheryl to stop.
Her soft naive cooing quickly vibrates under Mudy's feet.
>"~~~WHAAAT DOOO YOOOOUUU NEEEEEDDD CUUUTEEEYYYY~~~"
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No. 17745 ID: 132d83

>>17744
"Kill me, please."
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No. 17746 ID: 95484a

"Some people... fell off. We need to go pick them up."
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No. 17747 ID: da5997

Let's go get Axebeard and Bladetree, Cheryl.
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No. 17748 ID: 1afd58

>>17744
Cheryl... please help me find the people that my sister just threw off of you. I don't want them to die in the desert.
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No. 17749 ID: f44349

>>17744
"Turn around, we need to go to where Raital threw the others."
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No. 17750 ID: e8d8be

>>17746

this
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No. 17751 ID: 9a71e2

>>17744
Did you happen to see which way the other passengers were flung, Cheryl?
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No. 17752 ID: 0d5afc

>>17744
Ask Cheryl for relationship advice.
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No. 17754 ID: bffa2a

>>17744

The comfort of cloaca, turn around cheryl. It's time to go where no bold has gone before.
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No. 17755 ID: 45afb1

>>17744
"Cheryl, can you please go find the two people that were thrown off earlier?" Play something on your flute. Anything. The first thing that comes to your head. The music will lessen the pain.
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No. 17756 ID: 2b39d8

>>17744

"Turn around. We need to find the others. Raital threw them off."

Climb up to Cheryl's head and scratch it absentmindedly.

"You know, life's complicated sometimes."
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No. 17759 ID: 4a7262

While we wait for Cheryl to get the duo, sit down and sulk.
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No. 17760 ID: fb5d8e
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17760

>"Some people... fell off."
, Mudy says between shivers
>"We need to go pick them up."

>"~~~OOOOKAAAAY CUUUTEEEEYYY~~~IIIILLL FIIINND THEEEEEMMM~~~"
Mudy feels the sandworm slow down and make a slow turn.

The night seems especially cold this time, or perhaps it is the chilling emptiness coming from within that makes it so unbearable.
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No. 17761 ID: 8b3e87

You guys realize our sister has borderline personality disorder, right?
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No. 17762 ID: fb5d8e
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17762

Mudy sneezes.

A warm hand touches his head.
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No. 17763 ID: f44349

>>17762
What?
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No. 17764 ID: 6164e0

>>17762
OHFUCKOHFUCK
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No. 17765 ID: 2dd482

>>17762
oh SHI it's Kurhal
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No. 17766 ID: 1afd58

>>17762
who~
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No. 17767 ID: 6164e0

>>17762
Well, this is a pretty decisive change from our recent string of good luck.

But whatever, we come back from this even better than before, you know it.
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No. 17768 ID: 9a71e2

>>17762
Use CUTE EYELASHES to parry...
Fuck, not Exalted.
Uh...
Bite hand.
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No. 17769 ID: 0d5afc

>>17762
Look up, wonder how the hell Raital snuck past you like that.
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No. 17770 ID: 7eda8b

>>17762
"What do you want, LuLu? :<"
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No. 17771 ID: 476456

"unhand me sir! I MAY BE IN WOMANS PANTIES BUT I'M IN A DAPPER MOOD FOR A BOUT OF FISTICUFFS"
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No. 17773 ID: 8b3e87

>>17771

This.
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No. 17774 ID: 96945d

>>17762
Look up.
"Either Raital was joking and I'm a even bigger jerk now, or you're a Blutjager."
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No. 17775 ID: fb5d8e
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17775

>"Hello, mine little brother!
>I was worried I would nay be able to catch up, so it's truly thy kind gesture that thee would turn yonder sandworm aroooouuuund~"



>End of chapter 28
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No. 17776 ID: 8b3e87

>>17774

If she is joking she's totally asking for a tickle fight.
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No. 17778 ID: 6164e0

>>17775
Are her eyes actually pink or is it just the night time lighting?
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No. 17779 ID: bffa2a

>>17775

Oh, thank god it's you.
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No. 17780 ID: acdc9b

>>17775
Just let her kill you. This charisma/relationship/diplomacy shit's annoying.
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No. 17781 ID: 0d5afc
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17781

>>17775
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No. 17782 ID: 132d83

>>17775
OH MY GOD HOTNESS I WANT TO BANG YOU
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No. 17783 ID: f44349

>>17775
Oh god DAMNIT.
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No. 17784 ID: 4a7262

>>17775
"You know what? You know what?! I ain't got time for this shit right now! Bend that fat cat ass of yours over cause Imma ruin it."
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No. 17785 ID: 0d5afc

>>17775
"Oh and the day just keeps getting better. What's next? Is the whole worm going to fall into a spontaneous dimensional rift and drop us in the lair of Demogorgon?"
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No. 17789 ID: 9a71e2

>>17775
"You know... I've finally figured out why you gouge people's eyes out. It's because they can't get it up any other way when looking at you."
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No. 17790 ID: 227d44

>>17789
Well played sir

well played
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No. 17812 ID: 61aa43

"Hello, Kuhral... can... Can this wait?

...

Your little brother has some heavy thinking to do. :.<"
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No. 17832 ID: 0d30bc

"Bitch I am not even in the mood for this. Piss off."
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No. 17875 ID: 8a66e4

Act fast Mudy, you've got the perfect opening. Use the height that Io gave us and give the tallfolk a Glasgow smile in her nether regions. Then, while she's reeling about in unimaginable agony, take the blade to her face and tear that shit apart like an orange!

Look at the smug bastard! She'll never see it coming!
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No. 18055 ID: 0d5afc

Realize that this whole bloody mess on the worm is your fault for thinking a few days or hours are enough to change what someone has learned their whole life.
ILLNESS ACKNOWLEDGED: YOU'VE TURNED INTO AN ARROGANT DICK
If you ever get the chance, tell Raital, Bladetree, and Goldwomb.
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No. 18071 ID: 0d30bc
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18071

fuck the rest of those wankers, Raital is all we need.
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No. 18097 ID: f44349

I would just like to point out that everyone overreacted to Raital's overreaction.
That is all.
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No. 18104 ID: 9e9b47

>>18097

This describes the entire internet.
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No. 18105 ID: 6292a8

>>17775
"You can't win, Dar--err, Kuhral. If you strike me down now I shall become more powerful than you can possibly imagine..."
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