>>1098162
Certainly is.
And the ragged breathing to top it off.

Follow with tina leading kevin into the water.
Wet tshirt scene.
Coldness very apparent, (...striking a fine balance between outright nudity and our sponsors consideration. Also gives us space to escalate later...)
Kevin very flustered.
Frolicing ensues.

Of course, kevin would leave his glasses up on the dock.
And the tomfoolery would happen to ensure he is the one facing the dock.
At first the blurry shape comes into some focus and kevin thinks they have a peeper.
But then he hears the crunch of his glasses and the ragged breathing.
He cant see clearly but tina, alerted by the noise can...
A violent swift movement from the dock,
Choking panic and struggling splashes.
A wet, hollow cracking then an uneven splattering noise.
a scream peircing the night.
Fade to red.

Watcher 2024/10/06(Sun)19:49 No. 1098322 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: "B-But I..."

Tina plucks off Kevin's glasses and pushes him into the lake with a big splash

Tina: "Tee hee!"

CUT TO Watcher in the bushes

Watcher: *Heavy breathing*

The Watcher somehow is able to sneak right up to Tina- mostly because she's focused on Kevin in the freezing water. Boy, that water is cold.

Kevin sputters in the water. Blurry shot from his perspective (water over the lens) of Tina on the dock. A looming presence is just visible behind her. By the time he swims through the frigid water and pulls himself up on the dock he finds himself alone.

she is also gone without a trace as soon as Kevin pulls himself up, except for the clothing she stripped off. No blood or anything. gotta build tension, and hope in the audience that she is still alive.

>>1098324

I like this. Maybe he cleans his glasses afterwards, and the presence has vanished.

>>1098322
Heavy breathing in a bush always makes me think of someone masturbating

Kevin and Tina 2024/10/09(Wed)21:59 No. 1098425 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: *sputtering water* "That wasn't funny Tina!"

Tina: "it kind of was~"

Creature: *heavy breathing*

Kevin: "Are you going to come in then?"

he gets no response

Kevin 2024/10/09(Wed)21:59 No. 1098426 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: "Come on Tina! it's really cold in here"

Kevin: "Tina?"

Kevin puts on his glasses, recovered from the dock, he is alone

Kevin climbs on the dock, examining the clothes left behind. As he does...

Tina pops out of the water behind him and catches him by surprise, eliciting a girlish squeal outta him.

First rule of monster movies: You gotta fake out the audience like 8 times before something actually goes down.

Tina’s gone, sorry Kevin!

Time to run back to the group in your skivvies and form a search party. No splitting up!

Cut to Tina getting an angel's eldritch wings forcefully grafted to her back. This clip should only last 0.25 seconds.

>>1098427
This is good

>>1098427
Yes, more fakeouts

>>1098426
Kevin, frustrated to be pramked again, clambers out to recover his clothing.
Hevpickscit up but...
Wait.
Red stains?
He does not remember enjoying a delicious Chickadee Red Soda recently.
He certainly would as the taste is as memorable as it is refreshing.
Plus hed never spill any...
What IS this red stain?

Kevin and Tina 2024/10/11(Fri)21:41 No. 1098505 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: "Tina? Where are you?"

Kevin rummages through the discarded clothing

Kevin: "Huh? did she just leave her clothes here?"

SPLASH
Tina bursts out of the water!

Tina: "BOO!"

Kevin: "EEEEEK!"

Tina: Laugh at easily frightened dork

Kevin: Splash her in the face

after a bit of splashing from tina & Kevin, Kevin notices that there seem to be a lot of scavenger catfish near them. Tina thinks it's kinda cute and tries petting one. They seem pretty docile. Weird since you'd think they would swim away. It's almost like they are waiting for something.

Oh yeah, Kevin also needs to also ask Tina if she saw or noticed anyone behind her. He could have sworn he saw someone standing behind her at the dock there

Kevin and Tina 2024/10/13(Sun)11:21 No. 1098582 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: "TINA! come on that wasn't cool!"

Kevin splashes Tina

Tina: "AHAHAHAHAHAH!"

Kevin: "Okay maybe it was a little funny... when you were on the dock did you see anyone else up there?"

Tina: "Nope! why?"

Kevin: "Oh, well I thought I saw someone..."

Oh no! Someone saw you in your underwear!

Tina teases that he's worried that someone will see what they're getting up to~

Kevin and Tina 2024/10/15(Tue)19:34 No. 1098646 ID: 0d1c28
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Kevin: "It's probably one of my sisters dumb friends"

Tina: "you afraid they're going to see some undies?"

Kevin: *Gulp* "we should get out of here"

Tina: "Aw Kevin, that's no fun"

the Producer feels too much time is being spent on Kevin and Tina
A) Cut back to the stars Brett and Trisha: What are they up too?
B) Spice things up to sway the producer: And how?
C) Go for the kill: make sure little more screen time is spent on Kevin and Tina

B) You have a good CGI artist right?
Spikes jut out all across the lake while the dock disintegrates. The killer casually strolls out of the bushes and insults their victims: "See you soon...", leaving them to drown.

A, we gotta use those big names!

A) Something creaks on the dock. The two turn to see. Tina looks terrified while Kevin can't see and asks what she's looking at. Just as she's about to scream we cut to Brett and Trisha entering the house.

This keeps Tina and Kevin in reserve to show up later as a wild card, or as a corpse to stumble on to ratchet tension before the killer is fully revealed.

>>1098652
ooooh, that sounds fun!

>>1098652
Yes!
Focus on tinas face
Tina draws breath to scream, flash cut to bretts face
Letting out a contented "ahhhh" as he steps under the cabin awning and tries to open the door.

Kevin and Tina 2024/10/19(Sat)21:42 No. 1098784 ID: 0d1c28
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Tina looks wide eyed at something off screen

Kevin: "Tina what are you looking at?"

she gapes in horror a scream held back for a moment

Brett and Trisha 2024/10/19(Sat)21:44 No. 1098786 ID: 0d1c28
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CUT TO THE CABIN with Brett and Trisha

Brett: "Ah finally we're at the cabin"

Brett grabs the handle and moves to open the door

>>1098784
Shes a natural screamqueen.
Great shot, excellent projection of building terror tina!

When Brett opens the door, the cabin is surprisingly well-kept. Somebody must have cleaned it up for the party.

Trisha points out that there must be someone already there, since she spies an open can of Chickadee Red Soda on a nearby table.

They enter the cabin to see a horrible sight...

Dean is on the ground motionless, with red liquid on the floor and on his shirt

the red liquid is actually Chickadee Red soda, Dean is just trying to prank Brett and Trisha. Maybe Tommy is in on the prank and will jumpscare Brett and Trisha for a laugh

>>1098788
This

>>1098788
Subtle.
I like it.
Maybe lingerbon the condensed moisture a moment. So cold. So refreshing.

Brett and Trisha 2024/10/22(Tue)18:50 No. 1098886 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett opens the door,

Brett: "it's surprisingly well-kept. Somebody must have cleaned it up for the party... but where are they? that creepy guy said everyone should be here"

Trisha: "Look! a refreshing can of chickadee red! I bet one of our friends was drinking it! I bet they're around somewhere."

Product placement, front and center!

straighten all the paintings

Can't do another spook so soon, so the others should be in the kitchen unpacking.

Brett: Pick up the can of chickadee soda, take a long sip, turn to the camera, and give a smile and a wink, along with some kind of slogan they use in their commercial

Preliminary script for this scene:

Brett takes a sip of the crimson ecstasy that is chickadee red soda.

"Brett!" Trisha says in protestation at his consumption of someone else's delightful drink.

"Oh, come one! You I can't resist a Chickadee Cheer!" Brett smiles cheekily while Trisha puts her hands of her hips.

"Whoops!" Brett lets out as his hand slips and the can of scarlet bounces off his chest and onto the floor. "Ah, great. Now my shirt's all red." This profanation of the scarlet ambrosia will be important later.

"Serves you right, you butter-fingers!" Trisha says as she walks away.

"Hey, I'm usually good with my fingers." Brett says, smiling again. If you pay attention you can see the actor inwardly groaning at this line.

Trisha then walks to the desk by the wall and finds her first clue as to the nature an origins of the slayer! Spooky!

Brett and Trisha 2024/10/24(Thu)12:09 No. 1098972 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett picks up the can of chickadee red, and takes a long drink

Brett: "Ah that really hits the spot! nothing like a Chickadee Red after a long hike!"

Trisha: "Brett! don't start drinking it now! Chickadee Red is best shared with good friends over good times!"

Brett: "but with this smooth spiced flavor who could resist this carbonated delight?"

Trisha: "Well you're going to have to try with these babies as they're going right to the fridge to get chilled to perfection!"

Trisha heads with the six pack to the kitchen

hahahaha, very sponsor

Trish: sneak a sip when you're sure nobody's looking

Chickadee Red in-universe side-effect: slowly enhancing knockers. None of the characters will notice this effect, actors just stuff their bras between scenes. This will give a subliminal message that Chickadee Red gives you something more, which should increase sales.

Brett: While Trish is in the kitchen, head upstairs and see if you can find any sign of Dean

>>1098984
This

Brett 2024/11/04(Mon)17:36 No. 1099394 ID: 0d1c28
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Brett goes to the top of the stairs

Brett: "Hey Dean! where you at?"

Does something happen when Brett reaches the top of the stairs, does he hear something?

He can hear someone fooling around in one of the rooms. Its the perfect opportunity to try and scare them.

Unrelated random survivor crashes through door, pivots across the railguard, falls on head and goes crazy.

>>1099400

I don't have anything better cooking in my noggin, so I'mma support this.