Boris Calija 2017/03/04(Sat)16:02 No. 784888 ID: 16ace0
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dO799eOCMZY

....... AAAAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qZHah1j2vqM

LORENCE YOU LOOK SO EMBARRASSED!!!! AHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! FOOLED BY A TEN YEAR OLD!!!!

SOMEONE GET ME OUT THESE FUCKING ROPES, IT HURTS TO LAUGH BOUND LIKE THIS!!! OOHHHH SUSAN YOU JUST FUCKED UP!!!!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGp9P6QvMjY

>>784889
And then she ironically died from laughing, literally.

not really, but still would be funny

Boris Calija 2017/03/04(Sat)17:20 No. 784911 ID: 16ace0
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GUJhwvtI4tk
But now it is celebration dance time
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UcRtFYAz2Yo

two down, one to go. Time for the final battle against Susan.

>>784911
I don't think Susan has anything left, she all but admitted she's fed Lorence and Clara a load of crap. Now it's just a matter of Clara deciding punishment for her.

>>784911
Bye Lorence! It's been fun! So, moving right along Clara?

Boris Calija 2017/03/05(Sun)01:19 No. 785089 ID: 16ace0
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DaTI2OD3QoE
Also
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wTTxDWZcbxI

Well, let her know that although she won't be punished, she will have to live with the fact that even with the help of two prosecutors, she is far too weak to take you down in court. Not to mention the fact that you did this all without the help of a defense attorney, Which in a way makes you a whole lot more competent then she ever estimated you to be.

>>785094
That said, you must ask, who is the incompetent one here?

Boris Calija 2017/03/05(Sun)05:17 No. 785098 ID: 16ace0
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i6FXbxkxRAI

Matilda, you might not be a very good maid, but really, were you happy being a maid in the first place? You said yourself in the beginning that it was a boring job everyday, having to stand next to a car motionless, even probably in harsh weather conditions at times.

Though after proving you innocence on kidnapping, I can definitely see a different skill set you possess that could be a better asset for Root and his cult. Maybe the next time you see Root, you should ask for a new job position in the cult.

For now, just admit that you didn't do a good job guarding the car. Can't lie in court after all. Plus, Lorence did say here: >>782854 that admitting to your crime will reduce your sentence, and seeing as the crime of not guarding the car well enough isn't as big as a crime as kidnapping, and couldn't really be controlled, you might be able to get off with at most probably the loss of your maid job, which you yourself admitted thought was boring anyway. It is better than the death sentence, after all.

>>785369
Agreed. I think Atourney might be a better profession for you Matilda.

Also, can we have Stitch escort young Susan to detention please? I hear he's a great baby sitter! And then whisper to her

"While monsters like Mr. midnight may not be real, Stitch is. He is what you are scared of when you can't sleep at night. Have fun you little brat."

And now, what should we do about the boy? Can we get his name? And since we've already volunteered to help get him home...

"Hey (boy's name here), you ever ridden in a limo before?"

And before we leave, do we have any spare masks? This kid seriously saved our bacon, I think it's only fair we do the same for him, we know what's coming...

Boris Calija 2017/03/06(Mon)08:37 No. 785423 ID: 16ace0
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n2modMOFuLA

Ah what the hell, we're all on the same side here. Sure, I forgive you.

But seriously Lorence losen up a bit, maybe get a massage to destress yourself from time to time.

And kiddo are you sure you want look after her? Anyone who threatens to cut someone isn't necessarily you want to hang around, and by the way Stitch is actually harmless unless we tell him so, but she doesn't need to know that, right bud?

If you truly want to apologize, apologize to Root. Besides, I'm sure you have some questions for him anyway regarding how your secret slipped out. I only overheard a group of some of our members talk about it, that's how I learned about it.

Good point, where has he been all this time?

Suggestion 2017/03/07(Tue)02:46 No. 785696 ID: 16ace0
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SpFK4EiVxZE

What the hell? So what has he been doing all this time!

Suggestion 2017/03/07(Tue)13:46 No. 785775 ID: 16ace0
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7pJd9-RdTHs

Oh Lawdy....

Something tells me you don't want to know... Sooo.... Bob?Lorence? The fog should be rolling in soon, wanna get some coffee and watch? How does that fog even work anyway?

Suggestion 2017/03/08(Wed)01:13 No. 785993 ID: 16ace0
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LeVJYu_woXU

Clara is about to try to fuck shit up, and get fucked up in return... it's not worth it...

Suggestion 2017/03/08(Wed)11:01 No. 786034 ID: 16ace0
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lJ1NYJQnJTI

Well Matilda this has been fun, but you know, we have to come clean. We aren't your inner thoughts, I mean c'mon we don't even sound alike. In fact you could say we are in two places at once right now, it's... really odd. But I'm glad we could help save your life.

Suggestion 2017/03/08(Wed)13:03 No. 786074 ID: 16ace0
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ByC8sRdL-Ro

WC, can you hear us? time travel is weird, because while our present selves are bartering, us other selves just now finished with a past event with Matilda and time traveled to this exact moment.

bring us, the versions of us that just time traveled here and not the ones that are bartering currently, to a private place. We will help work on these lost memories for you.

Suggestion 2017/03/09(Thu)02:40 No. 786283 ID: 16ace0
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IuO-VSFyHLA

Hm, we can either

A. end the story now

B. End this story after we use this empty space to multitask by using this short story to help WC regain his lost memories here while our other selves are bartering in the main story. Save some time that way, and we wouldn't risk any distraction happening after our visit in the shop to eat away our time.

C. Sell this empty space for rent. Make some money with ad revenue that way. Though I don't know how your big chinned producer would feel about that.

>>786295
Yeah we can either try to help get his memory back but I think we could do that in the main quest, there is also the option of continuing self-reflection or we could take a look at what other stories are available

>>786329
Id say my biggest crit is you need to try practicimg sentence structure and vocabulary. Your stories are plenty creative but hard to follow because of misused words, broken sentences, and occasionally lacking punctuation. Essentially the same problems lonelyworld's quests have/had.

>>786329
Oh crude, that empty space you sold to that weirdo has WC and Ana in there, now they have to watch that weirdo fuck himself.

anyway, yeah, misspelled words and vocab aside, it was a neat puzzle, but there were some things that confused me like the shadow placement of the ball that WC saw, (though that could just mean I'm not all that smart admittedly) or things that could have been clearer, like the direction the kids were running that confused me in >>779681 and WC saying the ran in a different direction. Other than that, It was fun taking down our enemies like that. I especially love how I was able to prove Lorence wrong about never betraying Root before by examining the previous short stories.

It was a super neat puzzle, and also super stressful at time I kid you not I started panicking when Clara got made at us, I thought we were screwed so many different times there

Wait whaaaat? Ana is Ezael and WC is Daro???? Huh.... aaaalright then I guess Logan does have some resemblance to Triumphant (I think it's the head shape)

Welll as to which to which story and quest to work on, I would make an update schedule, on certain days you work on one project and another you do another. This way you give your audience something to expect and can plan for that day

And people won't really care which ones you take priority over, usually it's ones that the author finds more interesting or fun to work on. My only advice is don't let one quest not update for too long, the longer it doesn't update it gets stale and harder to start writing it again

Suggestion 2017/03/09(Thu)20:01 No. 786402 ID: d0002a
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QyfHvhAuKWg

No problem, like I said just try not to let your stories sit there collecting dust, I've seen so many quests die due to inactivity and it just gets impossible for the author to pick them up again.

Oh crude, I almost forgot, thank goodness I remembered before we leave each other again.

I know you don't want people to know that they are in a story, but I think I should alert you that in your short story, Modern Day Knight, the character Mokap, who is taking our officer hostage to go on an adventure had a list of names of other potential people who may go on the adventure. One of the names was Boris Calija, which I think might be you. He might be close to figuring it out. I would say, keep an eye on that one, and be careful, because he might have you as a potential hostage in the future. I should also note that he said that his father has a big chin. I'm not pointing fingers, but I think you need to find a way out of that contract quick.

BTW, how is that going? I'm sure that space money you got might help in your cause?

Suggestion 2017/03/13(Mon)02:50 No. 787045 ID: d0002a
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fWRMSn63yb0

.... I've said it once and I'll say it again. GET. A. NEW. PRODUCER. Seriously his son is a deranged psychopath so I'd get the fuck out as soon as possible...

What you could do to spite him and his father is put him in the story, but have him immediately die or something in the first panel

>>787081
That would be very funny, and have him be like an extra in the back that doesn't even get to say two words

Ok, let me get the mirror.

Suggestion 2017/03/14(Tue)09:51 No. 787311 ID: d0002a
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VBlFHuCzPgY

Hello Logan! I guess I really hit the nail on the head with this one... As the possible love interest thing... my best advice to that right now is to just calm down and listen to what Ana has to say, and just maaaaaybe things could get interesting. Ah, young love.

>>787340
I know, but is fun to talk with them

Maybe if we draw fanart of Motion capture, he'll go away.

>>787392
OH DONT ENCOURAGE HIM!

I don't respond to demands. Ask me nicely young lady and I MIGHT draw you a new one.

Suggestion 2017/03/18(Sat)13:59 No. 788500 ID: b8f2da
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=13OjzzJj27U

Lester I feel so sorry for all the shit you go through, you are honestly one of my favorite characters. Peace be with you.

Lorence when you show me a side of you that isn't a joyless asshole then you could get something else, but you never really looked like someone who is all sunshine and rainbows.

(PARADOX IN PROGRESS)
You guys should get a bigger water tank.

Sitch you know who Craig Jones is? He is kind of like a real life Michael Myers, just without the evil killer deal. He's one of the members of the band Slipknot, and I think that if we asked other members of the cult what they're thoughts of you it might sound something like what their lead singer says
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=__yvCe9IUjc

From the author
Yeah that is pretty much how he will act in the story like Mike Myers the Shape

Suggestion 2017/03/30(Thu)05:10 No. 791648 ID: 6f5376
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BJpcgRI9KZQ

Nice job Matilda, you can detect guilt! Maybe you really should be Lawyer! The question is, will you go into Prosecution? Or Defense?

Glad you liked your drawing too

Boris Calija 2017/04/15(Sat)11:49 No. 796110 ID: 81c4c9
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f4pxEFFmHBQ

Well I was certainly trying to make you look beautiful Ms. Luvia, glad to know I succeeded.

Also Delilah, I'd try to make sure you haven't been buried alive

From the author
Don't worry she is in her bed. She just woke up from a dream

>>796122
I wonder which one...

Boris Calija 2017/04/16(Sun)08:05 No. 796258 ID: 81c4c9
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1qCLuRYi7xI

How Andrew reacted to that drawing
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lqj-QNYsZFk

Answer carefully Root...

In all seriousness though I used one face in particular when I was drawing Andrew, it was the one where he told us why he earned the name demon. So my thought was "if it's not broke, don't fix it" and used that one as my model

From the author
Don't get me wrong I like how Andrew looks. It is only that to himself he looks ugly. I might use that face later in the story

Boris Calija 2017/04/16(Sun)11:00 No. 796283 ID: 81c4c9
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YW9QKy6oDkE

Lazlo you are too good good these guys...

Boris Calija 2017/04/16(Sun)16:44 No. 796333 ID: 81c4c9
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Fn36l_z3WY

>>796333
Is it about how you got those scars? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T6LWmD9YRpU

..... um.... yes? But is it a secret I'd necessarily want to know?

Boris Calija 2017/04/17(Mon)10:52 No. 796486 ID: 81c4c9
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HDCUnLM6UUc
at the end
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jTHNBKjMBU

and this is how their fight went
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-T4hcGtfYxw

Have faith, I don't think Blacky is dead. Anyone who can make awesome crafts in such a short time can find a way to keep going. And I think he can pull through, I mean c'mon, haven't you ever seen the evil dead movies?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YtyU2PJCk7Y

Boris Calija 2017/04/17(Mon)14:22 No. 796538 ID: 81c4c9
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e_mPrhwpZ-8

No! Put that away now young lady! You are ten years old, go back to detention! And for the record you are ten years, you don't need a boyfriend at that age, now go before I use the paddle on your butts, GO!

Boris Calija 2017/04/17(Mon)17:17 No. 796565 ID: 81c4c9
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Well this is where I got inspiration for the looks of the immortals
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wttweNLlFTY

This last one was an error
http://theblacknova.deviantart.com/art/I-Think-Therefore-I-Am-Error-172071408

Kid you are ten years old, and does she rule the world? Are you REALLY her boyfriend? Or were you just roped into it because that's what she does? But I'm going to teach you something I don't teach to my regular students, it's a simple phrase but it will change things up for you.

"I think we should just be friends." Then just walk away, or run because a hurricane might start from her...

Hey, I drew it because I wanted to, not because you asked for it.

But you know, I think it's amazing why more people aren't questioning where these mysterious portraits seem to be coming from and why some people receive them after being sucked into a cosmic nether-plane.

Boris Calija 2017/04/23(Sun)16:24 No. 797662 ID: 82a33d
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ggjIDjAQtrw

Aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!

Boris Calija 2017/04/24(Mon)11:47 No. 797748 ID: 82a33d
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1mjlM_RnsVE

Your appearance doesn't dictate what makes you a monster, only your choices and how you choose to live with them.

(I ain't gonna lie, and I don't mean to toot my own horn, but that edit is badass.)

SHOO! Go away you freaky hallucination, go on, scar! SHOO!

Anyway Boxy, first thing I'm going to see if I can find for you is a shave and a haircut if this is what you look like from under the box.

Absurdity masked man 2017/05/18(Thu)15:11 No. 802731 ID: 50613f
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eAwEiXCIasU

>>802731
You know you'd think it's the Cthulhu beard that doesn't land him any chicks, but it's actually his stupid fedora....

Was he a neck beard before all of this?

Suggestion 2017/05/19(Fri)18:57 No. 803054 ID: 50613f
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HokNuSqLDwQ