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285228 No. 285228 ID: 370692

Hello.
you might remember me from "Artifact Quest." I might continue that, but I had this idea and got eager to persue it. This will likely be another short quest. hope you'll enjoy, "Monitor."
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No. 285229 ID: 370692
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285229

You stumble up to the monitor as the door slides closed behind you. You're safe. You're not too familiar with this hardware, but still you manage to set the door's electronic lock. You relax and take a closer look at the rest of the monitor. You're currently looking through one of the security cameras-- "Cam 2," according to the bar at the top of the monitor. You seem to have a variety of commands available to type into the computer, and it would seem that someone is attempting to establish some sort of wireless connection to this particular workstation. Enter a command.
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No. 285230 ID: ad379a

>Other
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No. 285232 ID: 75d7a9

accept call.
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No. 285244 ID: 370692
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285244

You multitask, and view the, "other," commands while accepting the call. It seems that you are now speaking with the man that you are currently viewing through the camera.
"Oh, thank god. Listen; do know what's going on? Where's my daughter?" he asks.
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No. 285245 ID: ad379a

>>285244

>Command Prompt
"Beep boop" Cause it's a computer without vocal recognition, right?
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No. 285247 ID: 75d7a9

uhh, tell him what you know and that a key or something is on top of those lockers. then tell him to hold on while you look and then switch CAMFEED through all 8 cameras for other living people/his daughter.
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No. 285249 ID: 8d8786

Inform him that you don't know what's going on, then follow >>285247
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No. 285250 ID: 46c430

>View Map

Then this: >>285247
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No. 285267 ID: 370692
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285267

You tell Langer what you know; namely, that you are currently at what would appear to be a security console and that you are currently safe. He responds,
"Well, that's fucking great, but what about my DAUGHTER."
You tell him that you'll flip through the security cameras to find her. He says,
"Okay. She looks a little like me... but also a little like her mother.... Uh... She works here, so maybe that'll help." You tell that there's a key or something on top of those locker before, on a hunch, you flip to Camera 1.
Something certainly seems wrong with that equipment...
Langer asks,
"Well? Do you see 'er?"
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No. 285272 ID: 75d7a9

possibly, she is on cam one, where that is feeding from you don't know, but the door directly in front of you may be it.
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No. 285275 ID: 46c430

Well... How old is she? There's somebody we're looking at in camrea one, but... ...Well, she looks... Off.
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No. 285338 ID: c71597

>>285267
Ask him if his daughter is a grown woman and has whatever haircolour that lady has.
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No. 285450 ID: 370692
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285450

You ask Langer some clarifying questions on the identity of his daughter. He responds,
"Well, she's maybe, uh... fifteen years younger than me, and, uh... I'm... maybe fourty? I'm shit with ages, dates. Look, she's old enough to work here."
"She has the same hair color as me, uh, coarse blond or somethin'."
You tell Langer that you see a woman that might fit his description, and that she might be behind the door down the hall from him.
"Fuck, yeah?! Great!" Langer says. Quite suddenly, the woman that you viewing from camera 1 is surprised by something coming from the door behind her.
You tell him that something also seems, "oof" about her, to which he replies,
"Of course, she's got her dad's spookish but good looks! Now open the damned door, you cocksucker!" Langer yells at you.
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No. 285455 ID: 75d7a9

open door, tell him to grab her and move back, something seems to be in the room with her. then close the door again as soon as she is clear.
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No. 285537 ID: 370692
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285537

You tell Langer to prepare to whisk the to safety, to which he replies with a mixture of and ,
"What?! She's in there?! Open the godamned door, you motherfucker!"
You enter the command to execute your carefully orchestrated attempt at a daring rescue.
Something certainly seems wrong with this equipment...
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No. 285542 ID: c71597

>>285537
Probably because of that exploded equiptment. Tell Langer that you can't get the door open and he's going to have to find another way to open that shit.
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No. 285548 ID: 75d7a9

tell him to try that key. the door isn't responding to your signal.
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No. 285594 ID: 370692
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285594

You tell Langer that you are unable to open the from your end, and to try using that key you him about. To this he ,
"Wh-- Ah-- Buh--," obviously struggling for words, "What the fuck are you talkin' about?! This isn't some normal door! This shit doesn't have a keyhole! This is future shit! This shit slides!"
Langer a deep breath before continuing, "What the fuck is goin' on in there? Is is my daughter okay?!"
Something is .
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No. 285596 ID: 46c430

...Technically she is right now, but... ...Uh... ...There's weird, creepy shit going on, and I don't know if she will be in a few seconds. Hang on, going to try something.

>Security

>Access PA

"Turn around!"
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No. 285597 ID: c71597

>>285594
Probably not for long. But he doesn't really need to know that right now. Tell him to fucking use his head then and go find a crowbar or a prying bar or something then. Because that shitty door doesn't open from your console.
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No. 285598 ID: 75d7a9

>>285596
yes yes! use the PA to at least give her a chance.
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No. 285665 ID: fb10df

>Fuck you
>Death comes so // make me much

We gots sum ghosts up in this hea computa
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No. 285952 ID: 370692
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285952

You say to Langer, "...Technically she is right now, but... Uh... There's weird, creepy shit going on, and I don't know if she will be in a few seconds. Hang on, going to try something." You quickly add a suggestion to find a tool to pry open the door with along with an insult before accessing the PA system and, before Langer can say something, shout,
"Turn around!"
Langer is alarmed by this, saying,
"What?! What?! What the is on in ?!"
He seems to be breaking up.
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No. 285969 ID: 8d8786

This facility sucks. Someone hire an engineer or technician or something. Regardless, we shouldn't be looking at this guy at the moment; switch back to camera 1
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No. 285992 ID: 8c73c8

switch to cam2
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No. 286010 ID: 1854db

Switch to camera 2 and check on the guy that's breaking up.

Tell the lady to keep watch; something weird happened to that capsule while she was looking away from it.
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No. 286012 ID: 8d8786

SWITCH TO WHATEVER DAMN CAMERA HAS THE SCARY GHOST
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No. 286031 ID: 370692
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286031

You say through the loudspeakers to the woman that she should keep an eye on the equipment because something strange seems to have happened to the capsule. Your line with Langer is dropped, as you are typing the command to switch to his camera.
It seems that he is experiencing technical difficulties with his device.
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No. 286035 ID: 8c73c8

wait, shit. the 'fuck you' has turned into 'access denied' looks like WE may be the ones seeing shit...

amyway loudspeaker to him that you will try your best to guide him with this. it seems she is fine now, whatever it is in there can't just try the door north.work when being looked at, or something.
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No. 286043 ID: 1854db

Tell our bro that the door's password detected and there may be some sort of virus in the system. Tell him we're gonna check the other cameras real quick.

[switch to camera 3]
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No. 286178 ID: 370692
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286178

You broadcast through the speakers to Langer and tell him a lot of things: that you can't open the door, as it is password-locked, but that the woman inside seems safe from whatever was in there for now. You tell him that there may be a virus or problem with the system but that you will do your best to guide him using this. You then tell him to go into the northern door as you check what these other cameras monitor.
You quickly switch to camera 3 and find that one of the light fixtures has come partially loose; the other is not lit.
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No. 286183 ID: 8c73c8

switch to 4
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No. 286222 ID: 1854db

Inform our buddy that you just saw a body in one of the rooms that was split in half at the waist. He should probably be careful. Ugh.

[switch to camera 4]
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No. 286224 ID: c71597

>>286178
Damn, those doors close fast and hard. Tell him the security measures on the doors have ben disabled. They will cut you in half.
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No. 286292 ID: 370692
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286292

You broadcast through the facility's PA system to Langer that he should be careful of the doors, because it seems to you that the safety measures have been disabled; you've found a body that you think was cut in half by one.
You then to camera 4. The in this seem to very ".KKKKKKKKKFFUUUUUUUUUUUUJKCLDDDDDAEATHMMAKEEEEEEEEEEEESMEMEEEEEEEECCCCCCCOOMESOOOMUCH""""""""
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No. 286316 ID: 1854db

Oh god. Who are you? WHAT ARE YOU?
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No. 286317 ID: 8c73c8

hmmm, seems to be a ghost that is getting off on death.... god dammit.

yo, protagonist. you know any priests?
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No. 286371 ID: 2ea108

Oh no, Japanese Ghost Story! We're doomed!
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No. 286903 ID: 370692
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286903

>>286316
"KKKKKKKKKKKKKIAM
FUCKINGH
CRAZY""""""""""

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No. 286908 ID: 370692
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286908

"rememberthisfacebecause it will watch you die"""""""""
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No. 286909 ID: 370692
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286909

THe feed for camera 4 is now displaying nothing but static.
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No. 286911 ID: 8c73c8

... okay then. cam5
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No. 286927 ID: 370692
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286927

You switch to surveillance camera 5.
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No. 286930 ID: 8c73c8

loudspeaker on and talk calmly. hello, can you with the gun please calm down. the man you are shooting at is not gonna hurt you.
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No. 286934 ID: 1854db

Also say that someone in the room that Cam 4 is viewing is likely now possessed by a malevolent ghost. Long coat, looked like female shoes. Possibly dreadlocks?
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No. 287073 ID: 370692
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287073

You say into the loudspeakers to the man with the gun that he should not be firing upon Langer; the real threat is a woman with dreadlocks that has been observed as being possessed by a malevolent ghost through surveillance camera 4.
The man turns, startled, to the camera and quickly scrawls a message on his notepad, which reads, "Call 0003"
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No. 287074 ID: 8c73c8

call 0003
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No. 287153 ID: 370692
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287153

You connect to the man's number. He puts away his notepad and snatches the vibrating communication device from the shelf.

"Merde! Dites-moi ce qui se passe ici? Pourquoi cet homme est toujours ici?"
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No. 287155 ID: 1854db

Ah, my French is not so good, let me try...

Il essaie de retrouver sa fille. Elle est coincé derrière une porte verrouillée.
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No. 287274 ID: 8d8786

Writes in English, talks in French? Odd. Anyway, what he says is... uh... ROUGHLY "God! Tell me what's going on here? Why... something... here today?"

Yeah I'm good at this. ENGAGE TRANSLATOR.
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No. 287278 ID: 259738

>>287274
Merde does not mean God.
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No. 287284 ID: 8d8786

>>287278
Well excuuuuuse me for trying to keep it appropriate for all audiences
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No. 287403 ID: 370692
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287403

You note what Cody seems to be carrying before you say to Cody, "Il essaie de retrouver sa fille. Elle est coincé derrière une porte verrouillée."
He responds, "Vraiment? Ensuite, nous devons lui extraire. Mais, je pensais que sa visite à Mme Renard était terminée. N'était-il pas escorté par la sécurité? Mon Dieu, où est la sécurité!?
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No. 287741 ID: 370692
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287741

i suppose i should translate that
if it's not too much to ask
tell me if that (forcing you to try to understand another language) was a bad idea

Cody has agreed that his colleague should be extracted from the locked room, but he considers how Langer should have been escorted from the facility by security, before being alarmed, apparently by the fact that he has not seen security recently.
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No. 287810 ID: 815cd1

It's probably for the best if you don't rely on making readers translate things in order to move the plot along, yeah. Even if it's a language that can be mostly translated correctly by an online translator like French. It's fine to use as flavortext as a nod to those who know it or if it's used in a multiple choice option, but that's about it.

To Cody over his communicator: "Je ne sais pas. Laissez-moi lui demander."

To Langer over the PA: "Do you know what happened to the facility's security? And who's this 'Madame Renard' that you apparently had a meeting with?"
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No. 289012 ID: 370692
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289012

You tell Cody, "Je ne sais pas. Laissez-moi lui demander;" You do not know where the security is, but you will ask Langer about it.
You access the PA and say to Langer, "Do you know what happened to the facility's security? And who's this 'Madame Renard' that you apparently had a meeting with?"
You can hear Langer say, faintly, through Cody's communicator, "Hey, asshole, the guy wants to talk to me. Give me the phone."
You then hear Cody reply in a thick accent, "Very good, but, do insult me not, please."
"Yeah, okay," Langer says as he is handed the communicator, before directing his attention back to you.
"Asshole. Anyway, listen, this dick is totally fuckin' crazy, I think. Shot at me, pretty much as soon as he saw me. I really wanna get that gun outta his hands."
"Anyway, I'm only here to visit my daughter. She's alaways said she wanted me to see where she worked, and then one day, I decided why the hell not. Last I saw of any security was the guy that was takin' me to my daughter. I met my daughter at the exit of the elevator, signed in to their database thing, walked around the place with her. But then Abby said that she had to do some important shit and left. Security guy found me alone and was walkin' me back when he told me to stay in that room while he went and checked somethin'. He was gone awhile, and the door he left through was locked, so I looked in a locker and found that little phone piece-o'-shit. Then I just punched some random numbers, and bam. I called you."
"By the way, what the fuck were you talkin' about, a fuckin', 'ghost?'"
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No. 289228 ID: 815cd1

>shot at me; wanna get gun outta his hands
That's understandable, sure. Apparently something bad went down here, so Cody here's a little on the jumpy side. But he's calmed down a bit now, so don't act on that impulse just yet.

>left alone
Well then, apparently something happened while you were waiting for the guard to come back. Might have something to do with that ghost thing.

>GHOST
Well, first this thing suddenly appeared and was sneaking up on the person who appears to be your daughter, but then disappeared when she turned to look at it. Then I ran across it again on one of the other camfeeds. It issued a verbal threat and then the feed died. Whatever it is, whether ghost or otherwise, is certainly quite the malevolent type. Probably killed all the guards and is working on killing everyone else here: you, me, your daughter, and your French-speaking friend there.
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No. 289499 ID: 370692
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289499

>>289228

You tell Langer all of this, and he responds,
"Well, fuck, that sounds pretty grim. And completely believable. Listen, I don't want to be rude when I say this, but do you realize that I haven't seen any shit as crazy as ghosts and bisections happen here? I mean, I listened to what you said to do earlier 'cuz I assumed you were some sort a' senior staff member, but now I think you're just trollin' me. All I know is; something happened to the locks, I'm with some crazy, trigger-happy baguette-bitch, and someone on a computer is fuckin' me. Gimme some reason to believe your ghost shit."
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No. 289922 ID: b6c6fc

tell him "because we're the ones who're going to help him find his daughter"
and if he doesn't want to listen to us, he'll be on his own
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No. 290029 ID: 1854db

Tell him he can see it for himself when we find the room we saw. How about we head to the armory?
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No. 290124 ID: 370692
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290124

"Because I'm the one who's going to help you find your daughter, and if you don't want my help you're on your own" you sayd, tooofwhich
he respond"Hey, chickenshit. I already KNOW where my daughter is. You fuckin' TOLD me. All I need is a fuckin' tool or somethin' and--"
you interrupt, "How about we head to the armory? Then, you can see the ghost for yourself when you find the room I saw,""
Langer pause and say hten
"... oKAy let's go to the armory. Where is it?"
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No. 290461 ID: 815cd1

"I'm not exactly sure. There was a door on the left wall of that room, so maybe through the door with all that stuff in front of it. Or you could try asking your new friend there; see if he knows."

[CamFeed 6]
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No. 290501 ID: b6c6fc

yes let's ask frenchy what he knows
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No. 290598 ID: 370692
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290598

You to camera 6 before you Langer, "I'm not exactly sure. There was a door on the left wall of that room, so maybe through the door with all that stuff in front of it. Or you could try asking your new friend there; see if he knows."
"oKAy i wILl ask the french amn about it."
You hear Langer to Cody," hEy, buddy, lisen; what is Armory"
"There are two armory; One by the entrance of the establishment; and one by the stock of product chemical."
"yEs, but what is in direction of relation to HEre is it in behind those boxes in Front of tdoor"
"no the box were put by Dr. Ivy who alarm me by run through say to run. closest armory is bakc where you from, near the elevator of entry"
"wHAt the
KKKKKKKFUCK""""""""""
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No. 290720 ID: b6c6fc

Langer come in!, Langer! LANGER!!
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No. 290740 ID: 370692
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290740

youd idnot switchange to camra5
istead tu di "Langer, come in! Langer! LANGER!!"
KKKKKKKKKKKKWHOSSTHEODfuckISSSTHATWITHTHHHTHEGUN"""""""""""
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No. 290742 ID: b6c6fc

uh switch to camera 5?
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No. 290744 ID: 28e94e

>>290740
>Reboot
>Cam 5
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No. 290758 ID: 370692
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290758

You reboot the computer before viewing through camera 5. There are bullet holes in the floor.
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No. 290814 ID: 28e94e

>>290758
Resist urge to say "I told you so", instead try to open every door connected to this room. Tell them to retreat.

What's in the software update? Could be useful once we've dealt with this guy.
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No. 290826 ID: b6c6fc

shooting ghosts rarely does much good, so getting out of there might be the best plan
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No. 290881 ID: 370692
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290881

You access the PA and yell at Langer and Cody to run. They both look, startled, at the security camera. You open all of the doors in the room, and Langer and Cody duck through the doors on their respective sides of the corridor. You attempt to learn more about the available software update.
The operates the pump-action on the shotgun, ejecting an empty shell from the chamber.
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No. 291028 ID: b6c6fc

switch monitor to the room Langer just ran into
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No. 291029 ID: 28e94e

>>290881
Seal the doors behind them. Quickly check on the French guy, then switch back to Langer.
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No. 291331 ID: 370692
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291331

Aafetr some trial And error, you manage to lock every door in the room. You do not know what cameras are connected to which rooms, so you guess at where you might find one of the men.
Your first guess, camera 6, yields the location of Langer. It would seem that the cameras are not all oriented in the same direction.
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No. 291461 ID: b6c6fc

flip through cameras and try to find Cody
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No. 291466 ID: 815cd1

>>291331
"So how was your trip, Langer?"

[CamFeed 7]
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No. 291617 ID: 370692
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291617

Your direct line to Langer's communicator was dropped when you rebooted the computer, so you access the PA system and say, "So how was your trip, Langer?" before viewing camera 7.
This is apparently some sort of break room or cafeteria. The TV is showing some sort of news program.
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No. 291636 ID: b6c6fc

is that Cody back there?
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No. 291639 ID: 815cd1

>>291636
Seems like it might be. Hairstyle's similar, at least.

If it is, maybe now'd be a good time to install that update.

Oh, but first switch back to CamFeed 5 to see if Mr. Squiggles is still in the hallway.

...Hey, wait a minute. On closer inspection, that is indeed not a ghost at all. It's one of those scientists with a weird face surrounded by black energy or whatever. Guess I owe someone an apology.
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No. 292064 ID: 370692
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292064

You switch to
"KKKKKKKKKKKKEKEKH
THISSSSISFUUUUCKINGFUNNYNY
OPENTHTTISFUCKINGDOORORIIIII
WILILILRIPWOMANAPARTANDBRINGONEHALF
WITHMETHROUGHONE
SOTELLME
YOUOPNEWITCHDOOR""""""""

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No. 292078 ID: b6c6fc

. . . let's switch back too Langer
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No. 300878 ID: 370692
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300878

You switch bakc to langer but your head starting to hurt.
you also hear something calling to you
It's coming from the elevator, the one that is the entrance to the facility. That one that's crashed, into a great heap here. I believe that you've seen it on the monitor, haven't you?
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No. 301013 ID: 370692
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301013

What are you doing? Get off that monitor and come down here!

You rise from the chair. You still have a headache, but it doesn't hurt too much. What will you do?

if it's not too much to ask
i'd like to know; is this worth continuing?
if it isn't, i'd really like to at least give it an ending

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