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Lucky Sea
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It's been a long time since we've had a comic! Very nice to see again. The habit hasn't left me, however. There are a few possible corrections.
Pages 1 and 2, the pictures of neumono on the screens are a bit inconsistent with ear type and clothes sleeves, but that might just be the AI responsible for producing them being lazy.
Page 7, panel 2, Three Stripes is missing the under-neck stripes that he has elsewhere.
Page 10, panel 2, the belenosian’s ears have disappeared.
Page 12. panel 3, the girl’s eyes aren’t inked in.
Page 14, panel 3, Giant is missing any teeth on the ear Three Stripes is licking. Panel 6, belenosian guy has no eyebrows and it looks a little odd.
Seeing Modern's confusion, I have to admit I'm a bit confused myself. Did Three Stripes end up doing some mind work after all, off-screen and without it being mentioned or alluded to, while the overseers were meeting? Is it supposed to be implied that Giant changed her mind on that one idea of what to do that Three Stripes had earlier? When did the tagged "implied light mind control" happen?
Still very enjoyable, though.
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