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95002 No. 95002 ID: 67d5dc

Hola, author of Notquest here. http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/634390.html
Making some time to put another update up, but I wanted to talk about how completely I wiffed the introduction and character creation bit.

Maybe I should have been a lot less meta in my first quest, but even in hindsight I don't understand why the collective missed my point so bad.
Should I have called it out more directly earlier, like I did in >635712?

Heck, they haven't even realized that we still have two protagonists.
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No. 95076 ID: 149da0

I thought the whole negative commands was a fun gimmick, but it did get kind of confusing when the second character got introduced, and how/if we were supposed to control her or both.

>Heck, they haven't even realized that we still have two protagonists
Monster-teeth and crystal hair, right?
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No. 95089 ID: 67d5dc

I wasn't looking for reverse commands so much as reverse character traits, or reverse facts about the world. I expected the reversal to cause some confusion and screw up the mary-sueing effect I was sure would happen if I stated it clearly.
I'm very happy that the very first post just so happened to not be reversed. I might have just killed the thread if the protagonist was going to be a giant penis, heh.

>Monster-teeth and crystal hair, right?
Yup. Crystal hair was intended to be a throw-away that teeth would eat, but then the very last command teeth got was to eat her, so she didn't.
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No. 95630 ID: 67d5dc

Started a new, poorly named quest. http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/675824.html
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