also if anyone has a sketch request for a MSFC character post it and i may or may not get to it

Oh, is it cool to link other stuff here? like my tumblr and webcomic?

>>89061
Go for it.

>>89062
Alright, as a completely anonymous person I will take your word as iron clad.

My tumblr is at http://emperorwebrunner.com/ and I also have http://nsfwebrunner.tumblr.com/
I also do http://antihero.keenspot.com and did http://adventurers.keenspot.com
that's about it that's notable.

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>>89063

>>89063
Oh wow, I read AFH. I didn't know you were the same guy who writes that.

I... used to read those comics... back when I rolled around on keenspot in like... damn, musta been like 2003? I'm old. You're old. Fuck.

>>89064
>>89065
did the two of you plan that

>>89066

anyway wow. surprising amount of recognition here

>>89067

Add another dot of recognition to the tally, because I just got stomped across a curb on memory lane. Uh, in a good way.

Huh, aint gonna lie, I've actually read through that too, jeeze.

Oh wow. Adventurers was one of the first webcomics I ever read. Way back in high school. I didn't even know AFH was still alive.

Damn, keenspot! That brings me WAAAAAY back.
Anyhow, I'll try and do something greyscale then for the favicon, but I'm not 100% on how that will look so here's hoping the answer isn't "terrible"!

Also, you should get on the IRC sometime. It's #tgchan on rizon.net.

Holy shit I didn't know you were still active with webcomics.

Adventurers was like the first thing that got me to start drawing comics.

brb internet gonna archive binge tonight.

>>89072
Try pinkscale instead of greyscale, since that seems to be our magical girl's color. (Maybe that star emblem device thing?)

hoooo...WELL!
I can't say I was around to read adventurers back in it's day, but I do read Antiheroes, (and archive binged Adventurers so I do have some familiarity with your past works.)

did i accidentally stumble upon the home of my secret fanbase or something wtf lol

Anyway, so how are you guys liking the quest? Any questions? Requests? Thoughts?

Some information about the "Invasion" that keeps popping up would be nice, or is that something that will slowly be revealed over time?

>>89082
Most of it will be revealed at the beginning of chapter 2. Basically the Crimson Authority showed up and completely wiped the floor with everyone.

>>89083
oops that's me I'm just on a different pc

So why did you decide to make a quest about magical girls who fight each other on live galactic television?

Also, we may want to give the blue guy a nickname. How about Paranoia Instigator?

>>89088
I had the idea of an underground fighting league for magical girls a while ago, I can't remember how I came up with it, I was just thinking about it.

I also had an idea for a space-government-controlled gladiatorial giant mecha story. This quest is sort of the combination of those ideas.

Actually at one point the mechas *were* magical girls too but I like this idea better.

This is quickly turning into larama being flustered quest

God damn there's a lot of lewdity going on here

I would say we'd corrupted the hell out this quest except it sets itself up for it so perfectly.

>>89121
>>89129
Honestly I'm just trying to create situations that's just weird for her to be in. I'm trying to give as many set-ups and 'routes' as possible and make them as awkward as possible.

I also want to make every stupid and inappropriate decision and idea possible- hence the self control rolls and the 1 critical 2 fail

The only time I don't roll is if there's a major consensus that contradicts 'inadvisable' decision (like "tell b3" vs "don't tell B3") or if one path leaves another path behind (although I'm not against picking it up later if it's reasonable)

>>89132
I'd also like to point out that at no point has larama been comfortable about what's going on. She has a lot of self questioning to do. She might be curious about alien bug cock but she might not be to handle one staring her in the face. Also she may not be physically equipped for it.

>at no point has larama been comfortable about what's going on
Well geeze, there's some cold water on our silliness!

>>89140

Considering her sudden Heel bondage thought, pretty sure there's some substance there.

Though I'm just amused by all the awkward that went on both during and after the fight.

>>89140
she's not comfortable, that doesn't mean she won't become comfortable at some point. she just doesn't know what she's feeling and her mind is basically swirling with everything that's going on

it's almost like a bunch of message board posters are implanting stray thoughts into her head. funny, that.

Just stumbled across this. Seems pretty awesome. Though, I'll approve just about anything involving magical girls.

Still kickin' myself for not keeping up with my own magical girl quest from a long while back.

>>89206
Never too late, anon. 2014 was the year of lewd quests, maybe this year is the year of the magical girl?

Are there different classes of magic in this universe and if so what kind of magic does our character specialize at?

>>89239
It's more of a spectrum. Ellandra is sort of a balanced character(melee capable but with Variety of spells) but Shi for instance is a melee /str character focusing magic through her sword. In fact she is I've of the few that can actually damage a low level mahou without magic if she unsheathes since her sword is that good. It's possible its enchanted in a passive way.

There is also of course whatever the azure witch was.

>>89210
With this, maroon, and colorquest is looking like the year of the rainbow.

Speaking of which.. The mask would be a deep crimson with the lines and circles glowy red

a great/terrible idea
we actually already have, RIGHT NOW, a dildo that can spit egg shaped squishy pods. so them being in existence in the future is totally possible. turn one into a strap on and whip it out next time we beat Kith. :3c

>>89418
aaaah yes, the magnificent splorch from Primel hardwere. That would be hilarious, seconding this plan of action.

>>89418
>>89419
well she hasn't got a good look yet so it wouldn't be all that accurate

>>89426
is why i posted here instead of in the thread. its a long term idea. and the accuracy can be fixed by getting some alien anatomy books.

>>89418
good luck pitching that to lamara bro

>vs 30
>it should have been literally impossible at our current power
sometimes dice do weird(but neat) things.

>>89483
And even better, the impossible critical success of throwing a planetoid was only possible due to the critical failure of dropping it on ourself in the first place!

If we don't dump a ton of points into strength after a stunt like that I will be so disappointed.

Is it possible to use fashion star to make Larama in head to to camo. In this situation it'd probably be black.

>>89519
that is possible, yes. fashion star can in fact also change ellandra's skin, and aspects of her body as well. you can't gain or lose height or lose body mass, but you can 'add' stuff or whatever. rememeber: transforming already changes her hair length, that sort of thing is easy.

I think it's pretty weird that, throughout chapter 2 up until THAT GIRL's helmet was shattered, the only time a stat other than Self-Control pushed a failed roll into a winning one was during the handshake. Seriously, otherwise it's like all those stat upgrades did nothing!

Hopefully, stronger stats will have a more noticeable effect.

>>89566
Well, the rolls are d20s, and all our stats are less than half that. Our stat increases are on the order of a tenth of that! So yeah, it makes sense that the die roll is still the biggest factor.

Then there's the auto and crit fails / success (1 2 19 20), which mean the stats don't even matter a fifth of the time.

>>89566
you guys have also had some pretty dumb luck with these rolls- I mean, you keep failing the easier rolls and keep succeeding at the harder ones.

Dem Dice. No one who runs a quest dependant on them likes the dice after a few rounds. Very touchy, lady luck is around here...

i am EXTREMELY temepted to suggest she drunkenly stumble into her brother's room as ellandra in the middle of the night, wake him up and offer him some kind of sexual favor. as far as he knows you can't be in magical girl outfit on earth and it's the middle of the night, it will all be a wonderful dream.

Hey, is it possible to earn perks instead of skill points? For instance, Ellandra got drunk, so maybe she could learn how to aim while disoriented and hazy.

>>89628
What the fuck is wrong with you
He's like 10
They're related
Do u wanna put ellandra in therapy

>>89630
hmm, seems reasonable

>drunk target practice
I predict no ways in which this will go horribly wrong.

>>89628
>>89639
>>89641
he's older then 10 but younger then 18.

as for this actually HAPPENING.. if the dice roll that way. IT'd be PRETTY HARD unless she hits zero and the mechanic for that kicks in.

As for regretting that, if you want her to be fine with it, that's up to you guys:p I will say that, right now, Larama has no interest in Oden.

>>89641
okay I also think the "arrange drunken liason with a kid" suggestions are super grody but this is a disproportionate response

I'm still confused about the Self Control rolls. We succeeded on the roll, I thought that was supposed to have us choose the more self-controlled action (regardless of whether that was our suggestion or not, for some reason). But instead we're all "heyyyyy, shhe knows what sheeeeez talkin' 'bout." I mean, I guess we didn't take another shot ourselves, yet?

>>89658
Yeah, that confused me for a while, too.

Self control rolls appear to be kinda backwards. "Failing" a self control roll means we failed to overcome our self control. Which is what you'd usually describe as succeeding in controlling yourself.

Basically, look at it as our dumb ideas / bad impulses rolling to try and succeed and make themselves happen.

>B2 / Bro stuff
...it occurs to me, before we even get to the inappropriate age and incest questions, to ask if she's even interested in dudes. Our only data points for interest so far has been an alien gal, and (morbid?) fascination with porn of herself.

She is pan, but leans female. As for self control rolls I'm probably going to make them make more sense for day three.. Probably roll plus self control vs avg 20

>>89658
I feel like it's counter-intuitive myself but no, self-control successes are succeeding to BYPASS self-control. It's a failure of self-control that requires the success of an inappropriate suggestion to get through. In other words, it's a dice check AGAINST self-control. A failure means the self-control wins.

if anyone cares, I'm not going to offiicallyu pin down a location of B3's dojinshi store, but I was thinking very heavily of one of the K-Books on Otome Road in Ikebukuro- particularly, the one that sells non-yaoi porn dojinshi. So if you NEED a location for that store there you go

question about self control, if one poster gives a bad suggestion (kiss a random dude, grope our boss etc) and no one votes for it, does it still happen if we fail the self control check?

>>89672
All suggestions are thoughts that pass by her mind. The dc of the self control roll is related to how temping it is, how bad it is, and how many votes it gets, but sometimes she does one of the things and then nothing else is relevant or the thought is not relevant. She couldn't invite oden bc he couldn't get here anyway

>>89674
is there a threshold of how bad something is before you don't roll it? for example if someone makes a suggestion to randomly shoot someone, or something else with equally disastrous consequences and then the dice rolls a 20 the self control check are we screwed?

>>89680
If it makes no sense at all then i won't bother. But anything possible could happen if the roll is made

So, has the Crimson Authority banned "Video Poops" yet? Or does the Queen herself make hyper-weird parody videos for the public?

>>89790
The empress bans anything showing the authority in a negative light

webrunner-on-phone 2015/03/27(Fri)16:28 No. 89851 ID: 5181f3
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btw have a lewdrama

tenta-tastic.

In the future we need to make sure we spend more time with our ovi-futa alien girlfriend-slash-sex-slave because if we keep hanging out with our little brother his whining is eventually going to roll a critical versus our self control resulting in incestuous /ss/ statutory rape.

...how is this our life. Maybe we should just throw ourselves into alien gladiatorial combat with renewed fervor until we're granted a merciful death.

Maybe we should just get an apartment.

Happy international siblings day:D

id say some of you need jesus but nah even worse
we need to dig through the fucking smorgasboard of gods to find the specific ancient pagan god capable of dealing with this shit (my bet is on greece or egypt since incest/fuckuppery is very much their jam)
how does one accidentally incest bruh

On the subject of dice... personally I don't like crits at all when they override skill checks. I feel like if you want to make high/low rolls more bombastic you could give a bonus/penalty on top of the roll and maybe have huge successes or huge failures have higher effects. Like say if you roll a 1 or 2 you get a -10 or -5 penalty on top of rolling low, and if you wind up 20 below a skill check it counts as a critical failure. On the other end of things, rolling a 19 would be +5, 20 would be +10, and getting 20 above a skill check results in a critical success.

This way, the 19 would have resulted in a 14 after the self control penalty, falling short of the 20 difficulty rating. Even rolling a 20 wouldn't have broken self control, which would make sense there considering the situation. It would have been a near failure though, falling one point short.

If you want things to be more extreme you could make the adjustments higher.

On the other hand you could simply remove automatic success/failure and use a second roll to decide how extreme the success/failure is.

>should I break out the d30?
I dunno. The wild swings between things working and blowing up in our face make the combat a lot of fun, and pretty unpredictable.

...it's just a little frustrating that the same mechanic that can make us fall on our ass, or blow a spell up in our face, could also make us throw ourselves in bed with our kid brother on a whim. Which is somewhat exacerbated by how quickly self control depletes itself, so the threshold for massive disaster drops rapidly. After resisting twice or so we're in trouble.

That said, I'm not entirely sure it should be fixed / changed. I mean, it would be a relief to have things a little more predicable, but running on the knife edge of catastrophe does add to the tension, and our crazed planning. Plus some of the ways we've weaseled out of things have been pretty funny.

So, uh, mixed feelings?

>personally I don't like crits at all when they override skill checks.
Well, it was cool when it let us catch and throw that planet.

i do enjoy the swinginess. But making it a little bit harder for her to go against her best interests is probably a good idea.

Regarding the crit discussion...
Perhaps a roll to confirm of some sort?

Just suggesting because people are talking about it. I don't actually care either way. It's your quest. It's your rules. It's your decision.

>>90195
I for one am against this change. My dumb joke almost caused hilariously bad decisions to be made and I love how it can be that frantic out of nowhere like that

>>90216
Hind sight is 20/20, huh?

>>90216
I'd rather not have bad decisions happen on the roll of a dice.

>>90221
but that is what makes it fun!

How about keep crits or disaster rolls in fights but not in personal life? +1 planet toss -1 incest

>>90223
can't have the good without the bad, dude.

>>90225
That's only true in real life.

>>90226
And even then only sometimes.

Bad decisions are very different things then battle mishaps.

>>90287
yeah but both, from my point of view, are hilarious

It's all fun and games until somebody tries to sleep with their brother.

I don't even see why she would seriously consider incest. Isn't *her* Westmarck imprinting functional, or were they separated from each other during the first ten years of their lives, or is she brain-damaged? Sibling-lust generally does not happen.

>>90328
Apparently, little bro was thirsty even before the whole magical girl thing.

>>90333
Are you implying the possibility of environmentally-induced or inherited dysfunction of whatever part of a person's neurochemistry is responsible for the Westmarck effect? That would be some very specific and weird brain damage if so.

>>90328
He hadn't been born yet during the critical 6 year period that the imprinting would have taken place for her.

This doesn't explain *his* attraction though. Part of it might be his lack of a social life.

>>90339
How much younger is he? If she was off being a magical girl and never home that might explain it.

>>90383
Trying to be non specific about ages. But he was probably tweenish when she got the device

Sounds like he's got BRAIN PROBLEMS!

hi guys
http://tgchan.org/kusaba/quest/res/653071.html

>>92792
Who is this stranger?

Also, did you report the old thread as complete, or should one of us do it?

>>92796
i may have forgotten to do that