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Harmony Stone
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Hey Larro, I don't really read your quests, but I have a bit of constructive criticism regarding how you manage them. Specifically, your images. Right now, you basically draw nothing but headshots of the characters, showing us very little, if anything, of their environments. You're basically running a text quest, with headshots to identify your posts.
You should probably pull back the camera a little, show the room things are happening in. Let people see what's going on a bit. Right now, you're stuck in the classic comic artist's trap of the close up. Don't be afraid to draw some new things. It'll help enhance the experience.
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