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48633 No. 48633 ID: 0a1dbb

okay, you can dump your criticism here. And if you don't have crit- i also accept fanart. And if you don't have fanart, then discuss my crappy quests. And if you don't have anything to want to discuss about, you can't talk to my crappy quest characters. And finally, if you don't want any of these, then go somewhere else.
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No. 62835 ID: 12c19f

Does that mean the cringe-inducing author-insert segment will get a re-glazing?
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No. 62837 ID: 34cbef

>>62835
it is currently being worked on, the new dis thread is up.
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No. 63323 ID: 34cbef
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63323

trying a new art style, since it's one of my quests it's chances of survival are the same.
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No. 63324 ID: 98378e

>Inb4 package is a baby.

Ha! I'm psychic!
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No. 63403 ID: 34cbef
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63403

Alrighty, So it's thanksgiving/christmas time and due to the holidays i'll be putting the creepy pasta on hiatus until the holidays are over. I will still be updating ayam and kingsmen, and depending on when current engagement is over there may be holiday related events in kingsmen coming up.

Keep an eye out for the updates.
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No. 63408 ID: 1e72ae

>>63403
Wow, king's quest has been going on for 3 months and like 10 days. Nice job keeping at it Chirps. It's pretty fun.
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No. 63623 ID: 34cbef

mkay, so my questing career as come to an abrupt end following the the destruction of my computer.

Yesterday my laptop, which is my main source of the internet, had stopped working. I checked it out and it turns out the battery doesn't take a charge anymore, and the power adapter has broken soldering. I'm currently using a throwback laptop- but this one is worse off then what I was regularly using.

What all this means: I can no longer author quests, or even go on the internet on a regular basis anymore. This leads to my no longer being able to update or participate in quests until I have a new computer... which will not be likely based on my current situation. If I can get money for rent first I'd also be very happy.

But anywho, it was nice tagging along with tgchan again. If I can get my cash loots to work themselves out to pay rent and get a new computer I'll be back.

If you wish to help me get a new computer you can donate by using this garble of a link:

https://www.paypal.com/cgi-bin/webscr?cmd=_donations&business=HXP4TH4Q9MUMQ&lc=US&item_name=Bamump%20stuff&cur
rency_code=USD&bn=PP%2dDonationsBF%3abtn_donateCC_LG%2egif%3aNonHosted
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No. 63627 ID: 70c0f2

Well, that's unfortunate to hear. Good luck with raising funds and making rent, and we hope to have you back someday soon. All the best, buddy.

If you're fortunate enough to meet your other needs but still can't afford to replace your machine, you could always buy a new power adapter (or attempt repairs, if you feel like splicing wires), and do without the battery. I made do that way for a while a few years back.
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No. 66156 ID: 34cbef
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66156

this is that guillotine list i wrote up.
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No. 66158 ID: bf54a8

>>66156
so...
KILL FRENZY
CLEAN ALL THE THINGS!
MONEY!!!
i can't find sex weird enough for me!
i cant throw anything out!
HURT ME MOOORE!
DIIIICKS!!
FIRE YO!!
uhhh... hair... something...
can i taste you?
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No. 66159 ID: 8b749a

>>63623
Why not just buy a new charger? And if that didn't fix it, buy a new battery? Or, unless you're using a mac, have it sent to the manufacturer to have a look at? All cheaper than buying an entirely new computer.
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No. 66161 ID: be7fd9

>>66156
Huh. You know, the vast the majority of those are things that might have come from us, anyways. XD

But how does this guillotine thing work, anyways? There's a roll to see if it triggers, then a roll to see which trait kicks in, and then we do something crazy and impossible with the selected deviancy?
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No. 66166 ID: bf54a8

naw i think one was picked at start. doesn't have greed cause otherwise 'gold' would of set them off.
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No. 66172 ID: 34cbef

>>66159
old issue is old, i have found compromises

>>66158
you got the gist of most of it.

>>66161
>>66166
yes, the quirk was already picked at the creation of the character.
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No. 66176 ID: be7fd9

Oh, so the fun is going to be guessing the quirk, or trying to put her in situations that would set her off to test.

Yeah, not wanting the gold rules out greed. Probably not homicidal maniac either, or we'd have just killed the librarian when he gave us shit. Pretty much everything else is still on the table, though.
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No. 66185 ID: 81723b

>>66156
Guessing now based on the last few posts: Phallic obsession.

This could also explain her hat, and how her teleport mishap landed her atop a tall spire..
not to mention dat Polymorph.
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No. 70154 ID: 34cbef

so i've been busy lately, i've been lucky in actually finding a decent amount of time to use a computer. Lately i've been trying to do all sorts of stuff, but in my spare time i think about quests. When i get something situated i wanna work on some of the quests i've done, specifically hunter. I want to rework most of it because it... is sloppy. I'm not gonna restart it, but what i'm planning on doing is restarting the story right after the Hunter thread.
So the actual canon parts will be the first thread: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/437229.html
And the second thread: http://tgchan.org/kusaba/questarch/res/447334.html
Everything else is being scrapped and redone once i come up with a more solid version that doesn't have wishy washy story telling.
Yes you are still going to be the 5 eyed creature.
No regina will not be dead or kill herself.
Yes the harold story will be scrapped and redone.
I will try to avoid doing huge time skips unless it is interractive character backstory.

I don't have much planned out for what I'm redoing, but alot of it centers around the background info on the mc and all things related to that. This isn't a notice saying that i will update soon, but it's a notice that Hunter 2 through 4 and nightmare factory is no longer being considered "actual events."

It looks like it will be a long while before I can actually update, but don't expect hunter to die out as badly as it did.

I hope to settle my issues and get back to questing asap
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No. 70160 ID: d6ef5d

Sounds interesting!

Yeah, the weakest part of Hunter was the pacing- the sudden time and premise skips. It felt like you had good ideas, but weren't giving the quest time to grow between one and the other, or for us to maneuver at each step. (Okay you're bounty hunting, no you're actually hunting demigods, nope you're dead, nope you're a bunny, nope spiritual stuff everywhere, now choose how your friends die D=<). Like, maybe we should have got a normal bounty or few in before we moved up to hunting demigods.

The characters were pretty interesting and fun, and really felt like the strongest aspect of the quest. But we kept skipping past interactions. (Never found out what happened to the bee girl, Regi skipped practically right from first meeting to death- we saw almost no friendship or working relation, we didn't really get to see Rerk and Quint work together, didn't get a chance to see what happened to the 'rescued' bunny cultists, Plipper and Rerk and Abel grew up too fast, etc).

The other problem was with information. Either we had no clue what the was going on or even how to function (Regina and the Shadowman) or we were told everything way too quickly. (For instance, you didn't need to spoil all the demigods and reincarnation stuff as soon as it came up- you could have let the information trickle out slower and more organically in quest. We buy into the story more, sometime, if we have to struggle to figure it out). Fixing pacing would probably go a long way towards fixing this, but it's something to be aware of.

...hopefully that came across as constructive criticism and not a bunch of whining. :p I really did enjoy Hunter, and would be glad to see it return.
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No. 70162 ID: 91c1b3

I really liked the characters too. The only issue that I felt was a big problem was the wishy-washy part. (back pedaling when the readers didn't like the consequence of an action they chose) It would have been nice to have the general goal of what we're doing the same for more than two chapters. (ex. being a bounty hunter and killing a guy each chapter) The tone changed so fast it was confusing.
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No. 70300 ID: 34cbef

So I finally realized that I have a usb drive, and most libraries have computers with mspaint. So expect updates.
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No. 70743 ID: 34cbef

sorry for the long pauses between updates, i've been busy. And I just can muster up alot of motivation to work on the updates. It's getting harder and harder to get excited about updating...
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No. 71973 ID: 34cbef

i'm in your main board, ruining all your fun with a julia quest

just distracting myself with something til i can get motivated with the main story
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No. 72624 ID: 34cbef

put peep commander banter here, that is all
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No. 72631 ID: 34cbef
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No. 72633 ID: 19b3c3

>>72631
It's okay, the pointless silly star trek parody is fun. No need to try and force serious stuff!
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No. 72636 ID: 34cbef
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72636

part 2, and that's my routine on /quest/
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No. 72637 ID: 735f4f

I like your quests Chirps. Both the silly and the edgy. So keep up the good work.
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No. 72650 ID: bf54a8

run two quests, edgy quest and silly quest. if you want silly then update the silly one, if you are feeling edgy then update the edgy one.
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No. 72653 ID: 34cbef

i just made the comics cus i feel kinda silly about making the edgy quests... turns out i can't do edgy very well, it's very abrasive to my personality. i'm still trying to find a way to transform all my hunter things into lighthearted funtime quests- it's just... soooooo course, it rubs against my brain so hard I can almost scream
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No. 72654 ID: 735f4f

Don't try to force yourself to be "edgy" or "silly". Just go with the flow and write the characters like they would act.
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No. 72673 ID: 2645fa

>>72654

yup.
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No. 73989 ID: 34cbef

so peep commander updated, wohoo
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No. 74128 ID: 34cbef
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74128

the 3 different bun races in any of my settings

Poplebuns are sorta the throwbacks to the other two. With black eyes and feet similar to elephants they are the most durable and hearty of the 3 bun races. Because they have a higher body temperature they opt to not wear clothing. Males and females are on equal levels in poplebun culture. Poplebuns isolate themselves away from the other bun societies due to different gender beliefs.

Bunbuns are the second prevalent species of bun in number of population on their world. Evolved from poples they have a dominant pair of front teeth used to slice up vegetables and on some occasions have been known to grow canines if a high meat diet. Similar to the poples they have elephant like feet, but unlike them they have claws for toes and on their hands. The clothing favor ability is similar to that of humans. Bunbuns are socially dependent, meaning that if they were to be isolated for a long period of time they will suffer and maybe die. Their society is based on their social dependence and they have created sentient creatures to cater to the needs of the populace. Due to strange genetic composition the populace of bunbuns are a high majority of females. The species is also highly impressionable due to the social dependence which inadvertently makes them gullible. Male and female standings are on equal level in this society, though their society is flimsy and lead by many.

Curebuns are the most prevalent of the bun species, with fingers and toes they can manipulate tools more easily then either bunbuns or poplebuns. Their genetic structure has shown that females are less prevalent in populace, but more muscular then the males. Curebuns are the strongest of the three species aswell as more proportioned. The curebun culture is deep and rooted in the belief that female curebuns are a separate and more perfect race. Due to this belief the order is maintained and governed by females, all forms of legislation by females, generally any important roles are taken by females. Males are not on the same standing as females due to the curebuns belief causing the males to become treated as interiors, often treated as pets and slaves. Due to the strange 'dominatrix' like culture curebun society rarely recieves outside influence from the other two bun species.
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No. 74143 ID: 01531c

>>72653
You are really good at grimbright storytelling.

Everything seems good or at least alright at first glance, but there's so much amoral fuckery underlying everything that happens and everyone's personalities it feels like a living universe with real people.

Thanks for writing them!
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No. 74207 ID: e1609c
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74207

Woah look I drew something by hand!!!
Harold is a good villian character, and his story is equal parts horrific and tragedy.
Good work, m'man. I have no clue what quest he is from, but that sordid tale holds up incredibly well on its own.
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No. 74210 ID: c95833

>>74207
Harold's story is a side story to Hunter. ...which has a lot of side stories, actually.
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No. 74216 ID: 34cbef

thanks guys, it actually helped to read some of this- having lotsa mental issues lately
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No. 74330 ID: 34cbef

welp, i'm going crazy- but hey at least i'm still coherent. trying to update quests as well as i can
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No. 74342 ID: 91c1b3

Crazy is kind of a sliding scale. What do you mean by going crazy?
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No. 74344 ID: 34cbef

>>74342
well i had a minor stroke, not even really that just some bad brain thing thats really set me awkward. I'm fine physically and all my functions er function- but my mental health is kinda waning due to certain circumstances. Ii'm told if i eat right and get a better sleep schedule i'll be just fine, but the worst the doctors said is that i'll just have a few moments of jumbled up thoughts- my deductive reasoning will be slower then it normally was
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No. 74346 ID: 91c1b3

A stroke is way over my head. I've had messed up logic-ing from something I've taken before and it really sucks. The only advice I can give on that is to speak out loud trains of thought you are having trouble with. I hope you get better man, and feel free to take some time off if you need to.
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No. 74511 ID: e1609c
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74511

>>74346
This. I have SEVERE adhd, and talking out loud really helps me keep my thoughts in order.
Also, I drew lil miss crazy for ya. Get well soon, dog
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No. 74845 ID: 34cbef

wohoo, i've started yet another quest
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No. 74846 ID: beeca1

And it is awesome.
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No. 82608 ID: df793f

Listen all ye faithful, however few of you there are, lets us vote to see which of my deady dead quests i will update!

any by me chirpsp, and old bamumb stuff. Vote vote vote, nya vote
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No. 82619 ID: c3ad33

HUNTER. HUNTER. HUNTER.
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No. 82620 ID: e1609c

Buoyant reality, as if I'd say anything different :v
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No. 82634 ID: befc95

BR please
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No. 82648 ID: 0ee153

>>74845
Apparently I liked whichever one this was, so voting for it.
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No. 82685 ID: df793f

i don't even remember
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No. 82686 ID: 50338d

[+] !
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No. 82691 ID: 2fc3e9

>>82685
Doobie quest, then. The one with Spessdood and Arduubien.
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No. 82692 ID: a36601

[+]
Cute as fuck.
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No. 82750 ID: f7aa74

so 2 for [+] and 2 for buoyant reality, the two will play an epic game of rock, paper, scissors to see who will be updated
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No. 83032 ID: df793f

so i have an update ready for these, but i'm gonna wait til gamuch is done with before I update anything else
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No. 83050 ID: df793f
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83050

the update that everyone was hoping would happen.
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No. 83066 ID: 6b7ea4
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83066

i want a gamuch of my very own
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No. 83068 ID: df793f

>>83066
i love it
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No. 83384 ID: df793f

glub glub, been busy with work and such.... oh yeah, i got a job!

also was wondering if people were still interested in buoyant reality, since i only got one response in the update... if not i had another idea in mind
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No. 83386 ID: ef7fd2

>>83384
finish buoyant u butt
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No. 83424 ID: df793f
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83424

you sure? I've got these two interesting peeps in mind
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No. 83425 ID: ef7fd2
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83425

>>83424
the left one puts me in mind of this
(but seriosly man, please finish buoyant. You tend to let a lot of quests die, I dont wanna see that happen to BR, you feel me? Like, do whatcha wanna, but please)
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No. 83478 ID: df793f

hrumph... i've had no time to update... hopefully i'll find some soon
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No. 84076 ID: df793f

i just had my appendix removed, try to update sometime soon... when i can
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No. 84078 ID: ef7fd2

shit dude, for real?
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No. 84084 ID: df793f

tis true, felt a pain in my gut and they found it to be early appendicitis or whatever... it wasn't too bad since it was caught early, but i'm on a weeks worth of bedrest
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No. 84971 ID: dff0a8

i'm finally updating again, my job seems to take up my free time so i haven't been able to until today- might go back to being quiet til the next day off i have
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No. 85126 ID: dff0a8

dang, i keep getting distracted
not sure when i'll update next
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No. 85818 ID: dff0a8

lets assume i have died and this is my ghost typing from beyond the grave. not sure when i'll get back into the swing of thigns again, but it might be still pretty far off
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No. 85828 ID: 61771b

>>85818
oh no, RIP Chirps.

It's cool to take a break for a bit man. Will be waiting for you when you get your groove back.

(also you have/had so many things happening to you that I didn't see/comment on. Just hope you're doing well overall man.)
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No. 87071 ID: dff0a8

so, there's not gonna be any rhyme or reason on when i will update next. Basically i work a lot, and to get my motivational art juices flowing i need a day where i am not working... but get inspired to doodle stuff... i guess what i want to say is that i'm lazy and need one of my days off to update. Not knowing when this amazing blue moon will rise but when it does i'll make an update.

I guess keep your eyes peeled for one.
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No. 87525 ID: dff0a8
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87525

guess who's finally got a scanner again!!!!
*points to self* THIS GUY RIGHT HERE, now i can get all my doodles done even faster and don't have to murder my hand using the mouse anymore.

though... maybe i'll still use the mouse
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No. 88204 ID: dff0a8
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88204

Horse Notes
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No. 88205 ID: dff0a8
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88205

More Horse Notes
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No. 88206 ID: dff0a8
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88206

Not Horse Notes
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No. 88210 ID: 5f402f

>say no to mark
>get killed
>mark comments on changing tactics
>instant new quest, kid in mark-faced mask offers unspecified gift
I think I see a pattern here.
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No. 88211 ID: dbe554

>>88210
Though mostly at this point I'm pretty much against helping that 'god' at any point, he's such an infuriating beeing.
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No. 88349 ID: dff0a8

just a reminder that any questions about my quest settings and suchersuch go here.

Also requests for any revivals of my quests can go here, if there is a large clamoring for a particular one i will take care of it.
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No. 88352 ID: a19cd5

update buoyant reality you butt you left us on a cliffhanger
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No. 88353 ID: b8ceae

Revive JusticeQuest, because that was fun.
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No. 88368 ID: dd4ed3

[+]

Slimes forever.
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No. 88489 ID: dff0a8
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88489

i'm drawing and editing pictures for the next 7nth update, goddamn did it take me forever- not just to draw them but to scan them, do simple autofill, crop the images, resize, etc etc etc... I'm dead, my eyes are bleeding. And I haven't even uploaded it yet- alright folks, this next one is a long one and it might have to wait til tomorrow if i don't get the motivation to do it tonight
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No. 88679 ID: dff0a8

don't worry, updates are coming hopefully soon
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No. 88762 ID: dff0a8
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88762

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH
UPDATES TAKE FOREVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR-


updating coming up soon after this posting, after i download them to my computer- re-size the images, separate the panels, add color to a few, and than jimmy up a decent script that goes with the notes i whipped up a long time ago.


I'M GOING TO DIE- AAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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No. 88767 ID: 9ddf68

>>88762
it's ok chirps, the updates are amazing and I can wait if I must, Just hang in there chirps I know you can make it.
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No. 88949 ID: dff0a8

ther is a hiatus on 7nth since i'm moving this week. Bought a trailer suddenly and hopefully getting it all moved in by this friday.
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No. 88966 ID: a19cd5
88966

>>88949
S'cool. Good luck with the move chirps!
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No. 89074 ID: 324890

blugh, still looking for time to update anything- so far i've got nadda time. i'm doing the best i can to scare up some time but a new house is a lot of work itself
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No. 89202 ID: 324890

it's my day off tomorrow and i don't wanna do nuthin, not even update- i've worked hard and now i'm gonna laze hard. an update will come at a later time, ffor now i willl do jack-diddilly.
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No. 89209 ID: 5d2f8c

>>89202
Enjoy that rest bub. You've (probably) earned it.
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No. 89317 ID: 324890

i have the day off monday, i will be working on cleaning and doing the update. So get ready for an update... that'll... be... something?
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No. 89364 ID: 324890

remember when i said there'd be an update, well i lied... and i don't have one whipped up yet....this is taking a lot longer than i though.

I dunno when there will be an update.
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No. 89678 ID: 324890

so yeah hey, it's me again. Remember that thing that I do, you know- the thing where I lose motivation in continuing a quest that i've started? Well the 7nth has caught that too now, i'm getting alot of work lately because my job is merging stores. These few weeks have been just me doing full week, six hour shifts with only one day off- and my next day off isn't until the 28th. Not only that, but I need to come up with an easier way to manage my expenses- i have gob awful sums of money but since we bought a trailer and need furniture I have to plan out my money and save a lot. Than there's... blugh... I want to do a webcomic someday, like an actual long term thing, but I don't seem to have the focus to do one.

I've got my pockets full of mud and I can't seem to do anything right now... But hey, i've gotten addicted to magic- bah enough blabbering for me.

So the skinny of it is that expectations should be low on me updating anything, I may throw out a new quest that also goes nowhere... or I won't... maybe I need some pills for this lack of focus...

well that's all from me for now, you guys have a good night and to all the new quest authors out there- Don't end up being like me in that you should finish your quests and be preemo coolio cus you did and get all the fans and whatever.

g'night
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No. 89684 ID: 52a46d

Aww whaaaaaaat
Noooooooo
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No. 89691 ID: cf91e4

>maybe I need some pills for this lack of focus
Take it from me that pills don't help with that kind of focus. The only thing that helps(and I'm still shit at it too) is discipline. I don't really know how to fix that but hopefully we both get it eventually.

For expenses you could set them into wants, needs, and savings. Depending on how much free cash you have, put a certain amount of your paycheck into savings each check you get and dont touch it for anything. Mine ends up being like $30. It adds up kinda quickly. Whatever's left ends up going towards whatever; bills, car repairs, or it just sits there.

Goodluck man!
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No. 89801 ID: 324890

my two best supporters, you two are awesome. Sorry i keep lettin you down
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No. 92555 ID: 324890
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92555

so, it's been a bit without a trace from me.
Welp, i'm over on 4chan committing pony suicide, if I survive this phase i'm going through I should be back will a good helping of renew bamump and demon do
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No. 92574 ID: 3009b4

How does one commit pony suicide?
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No. 92602 ID: 324890

>>92574
well first you grab an mlp unicorn by it's hind legs, then you jab it's horn directly into your stomach and drag sideways- kinda like seppuku
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No. 92765 ID: 3009b4

>well first you grab an mlp unicorn by it's hind legs, then you jab it's horn directly into your stomach and drag sideways- kinda like seppuku

Wouldn't it be easier and more effective to grab it by its front legs?
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