Your art has definitely improved. There's no doubt about that.

But you're right. It's not all about the art. And... I do hesitate to say this, and feel free to disregard it... but it seems to me that as the art got better, the writing got worse. In OQ 1, you put a lot of attention into details and mood setting through the writing. It feels like that same attention was missing from OQ 2. Maybe it was splitting the attention and time between the writing and art, or maybe you felt the art was supposed to handle that stuff and didn't want to include it in the writing. I don't know. I'm trying to describe it as I see it, but it's hard to put into words.

Anyway, take it or leave it, that's my theory. Hopefully it's either helpful or forgettable.

Keep in mind this isn't just for me, folks. post any ideas you have as well.

>>313962
I understand what you mean.

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Here's a more complete image of one of the enemies/allies.