GOOD END.

I am VERY DISSAPOINTED that we did not get to explore the other-verse.

Take what you can get though.

This quest was exceptionally well done in a myriad of ways. My highest congratulations to you for creating it, Lagotrope.

Aww, now I'll never know what happened to Chee's Sword-staff.

one of the best, no, THE BEST quest ever

Smoke a bold
bitchin' quest

SUPER amazing quest! All the time spent following this quest was definitely worth it!

The first quest after RubyQuest that I've completely saved to my drive. Epic work, Lagotrope!

>>353445
Weeeell, we might just get to explore it in another quest.
>"The advice souls are free to guide him, as well."

But I probably am wrong though.

So sad that I now have no other quest to check daily. I eagerly await Lagotrope's next quest.

It's been a joy participating in this quest.

I am still terrified by your update rate.

That was amazing. I only came in at the very end, but even that was great.

CheeQuest: In which a kobold fights the universe itself and wins.

>>353456

yeah.

I cried. Real tears.

This was one great quest. If I had 5 internets I would give you 20. ;w;

Anonymous 2011/09/30(Fri)21:02 No. 43683 ID: 3aaf60
File 131744176489.gif - (1.98MB , 120x99 , WlOAd.gif )

I have a lot of feelings about this quest and I think this gif summarises most of them.

Well, somehow, I actually finished a quest. Somehow, despite wondering more than once, 'how in christ can I continue this'. There were rough patches, to say the least.

>>353483 I'm glad this GIF was posted, just so that I can say that it also summarizes my feelings in terms of writing the quest. It was ill planned and what plans I did make I hardly ever stuck to, and I am surprised it made a lick of sense to anyone past, say, two threads. I'm pretty amazed (and very pleased) that there was anyone who actually followed it with me through the end, and enjoyed it, let alone as many as there are. So, despite the issues and how much I would change if I did the quest over again, I can't find much room to complain about how I did it.

Overall, I'm quite happy with how it turned out, and to everyone, thanks for playing/reading!

What were your origional plans for the quest? I take it you didn't originally plan for it to end up as The Matrix x Gurren Lagan?

>>353487
... huh, I'm having an incredibly difficult time typing out a response to "what were your original plans."

I didn't really have any, to be honest. It was meant to be open ended. I guess what I'm saying is that if someone told me, when I first started the quest, that Cheelop would punch a god in the face, I'd probably say "what are you talking about that's silly." But while I didn't plan on that happening, I didn't plan on that NOT happening either.

>>353489

Was a lot of the world originally planned? Like did you start knowing that it was all a dream, or did that just seem like a cool effect of overdosing on anti-illusion potions?

>>353491
The 'all a dream' part didn't get thought up till later along in the quest, but still before the anti illusion potions were even mentioned. Overdosing the potions just ended up being a convenient way to make that revelation.

>>353489
The idea that punching gods is silly kind of made me start thinking about how you took silly suggestions a lot, even when they didn't really receive any support, and throwaway events or gags sometimes became relatively (in the context at the time) major elements. What effect, if any, do you think those fun and weird and silly decisions actually had on where the overall story went? When you took a silly suggestion, how did it affect further suggestions?

Lagotrope 2011/10/01(Sat)08:06 No. 43708 ID: c811c4
File 131748156465.png - (21.83KB , 379x462 , notaccordingtoplan.png )

>>353499
Generally speaking, I had a tendency to take silly suggestions and run with it, but still write it so that what could've been a throwaway gag would still add to or further the plot. Or simply change it. Pic possibly related. The character you selected could've changed the direction/view of the story significantly. It's hard for me to say how precisely further suggestions were affected, but easy to say that they most assuredly were.

Of course the silly ideas weren't always expanded on. The cat sequence during the party, for example, had no real impact to the story, nor did I ever intend on it to.

>>353508
That reminds me, did the catbold get reawakened again in the real world?

>>353513

Yes. Somewhere in the land, there is a cat-cutebold abomination running around.

I don't think we saw the catbold's lower half, does he have a tail?

Is Ears and his town capable of defending themselves though? Without Chee, they never learned or gained great power.

>>353515
Yes, his tail is still cat like.

>>353516
They can't defend themselves so well, but they're back under the protection of the southern lich (with a non-Chee phylactery). It's no lavish existence, but the lich did treat them well enough as long as they gave him the bodies of deceased friends and foes.

Wah I forgot to ask Momo about her eyes when I had the chance. Any chance you could spill the beans on that? It's basically the final mystery.

I think it'd be fun to have a quest where we mess around with Tom during his stint as the god of chaos. Probably a bit too directionless though. It's not like there'd be any conflict. If anything it'd be like those miniquests that Rand does about Tory doing something completely off the wall and non-canon.

>>353521
Her eyes were lost in an battle a good several years before Fen's story started. Instead of getting mopey about it, she focused her magic to specialize in illusions and magical sight. Since she became masterful on those subjects, she started focusing on things she didn't have by the time Fen met her, i.e. resurrection/necromancy.

As for Tom/GoC quest, yeah, if I did that, it would be one-shot/joke quests. Of course, the rules of the archgod would involve minimal direct interaction with mortals, so without breaking canon, the actions you could take would be limited and restricted.

If you're familiar with Dungeon Crawl - Stone Soup, it would be like a quest where you are Xom, and some poor sap just prayed to you. And from that point on you begin doing things like giving him the best helmet in existence, and Mutation: Horns/Frills.

...actuallyyy... I will keep this idea in mind.

>>353514

you mean d'awwbomination.

if we chose to say no and attack that final god we saw, could Chee have beaten it? could Tom have eaten its soul? what would've happened?

>>353527
I don't even want to think about if that happened. If I even let it happened, I'd probably have to spend a couple of days thinking of what would happen. I wouldn't want it to be "Chee gets her ass kicked BAD END" automatically, but it very likely would have been less than ideal. Or maybe not. As I say, it's a question that hurts my head just thinking about it!

Given your experiences here: do you think you would conduct a future quest similarly to CheeQuest with its bear-rolling-crazily-on-the-ground writing, or would you be inclined to plan it more carefully and maybe even impose – dare I say it – rules?

>>353565
I would probably feel mostly inclined to try to try to plan it more carefully and make some attempts at sticking to aforementioned plans and - should I feel extremely lucky and dedicated - have some almost concrete or at least wooden rules.

Haha! I can hardly wait.

>Tom, eventually to be replaced by Chee, can barely influence the world, both in term of rules and actual power limitations
Man, Chee accepted such a bum deal. :B

AveGaruda 2011/10/02(Sun)05:34 No. 43773 ID: d3ccca
File 131755888531.gif - (12.14KB , 270x355 , cannotunsee.gif )

:|

>>353573
I was wondering when someone was going to point that out. Clearly I am pro at spoilering.

>>353573

More like =|

Okay two more questions
Was Momo pregnant, even though we pretty just used that as an excuse to justify Fen to not kill her and jumped on that assumption
Since original Chee didn't exist in the Real world timeline, who is Kradis's grandmother of varying greats?

>>353650

Momo is a fictional character. She does not actually exist to be pregnant.

>>353650
Though the chance was real, Momo did not actually get pregnant.

And Lich/Original Chee did exist in the real world (and is Kradis' great grandmother). She just led a different life, and ultimately had nothing to do with the Chee the quest was about. Aside from having the same name. So when Kradis assumes it's a coincidence that another Cheelop comes around with a straw this time it really is a coincidence (except not technically, but as far as anyone's concerned.)

>>353653
What? I know that, who wouldn't know that? What do you think that I'm that stupid to think these people are real? Where did you even get that I thought fictional characters were real from? I was just curious if that was an actual thing since we just sorta pulled that from nowhere and Momo was like, "Yeah, there's a chance." and I'm like, "Really? Cool is there gonna be a new Momo descendant in the timeline?" and it never came up again.

Also what never came up again was Chop's origin. Maybe Lagotrope is saving that up, I dunno. YOu just don't leave a strongbold storythread like that hanging loose like a coolkid down the street smoking a bold

>>353658
Oh whoa Lagotrope you just done strolled up in here while I was responding. Thanks for the clear-up.

I'd like to run another quest as a sort of epilogue for a character, though it will be ran independently of chee quest (other than being in the same universe.) As such, the vote is this:

Who would you like to have a quest revolve around, Fen or Clamp? Write-in's are still welcome, even at the paralyzing fear there's going to be a 'Kip's Cat Quest' on the wiki.

>>354723
Clamp.

Actually, I changed my mind. Let's do Kip's Cat Quest.

>>354731
Chop Quest
Otherwise Fen man

so if Chop is getting shit votes, change mine to Fen

Wait, Kip's Cat is the Catbold, right?
Shiiiiiiiiit that's legitimately interesting. But not as much as Chop beating all the bad guys.

Fen

Chop!

Fen!

Chop, maybe we can even find out what's up with that size.

>>354723
As interesting as Catbold Quest sounds (seriously, that is a very tempting option), I'm voting for Chop, aka the world's greatest muscle-wizard!

>> Clamp. Fen. Kip. Chop. Kip's Catbold.

All of these must be done. In any order. I dont care. But I want them alllll~

Catbold.

catbold

Alright then we're going to do... chop? Allllright then. Chop. With catbold as a close second.

You guys.

ONCE AGAIN MIGHTY CHOP DESTROYS THE COMPETITION

A Kip prequel would be more interesting than an epilogue.

Of course it would possibly have the prequel problem.

>>354817
If a quest followed Kip, that's exactly what I would do, now that it's mentioned. Otherwise, the closest that Kip would get to an epilogue is being a major character in Fen's epilogue.

That said, I don't know what the possible prequel problem you mention is.

>>354825
The "prequel problem" is that the prequel might conflict with the original story. And this time around, since you don't have the Earth God anymore, you have to come up with yet another deus ex machina to explain the inconsistencies.

>>354827
That's simple, Kip just can't die and neither can anyone established in the future. You just avoid contradictions, like in Deus Ex Human Revolution.

>>354827
A fair point, but since the world was rebuilt from scratch, it actually does allow some liberties, within reason, to be taken. More importantly though, there's plenty to Kip's past that was barely touched on, that can be made into an interesting story while avoiding playing dangerously close to messing with what is established.

I hadn't given it much thought, and I may never, but I'm still sure it's possible.

Yeah, prequel problem being that you know he can't die, most significantly. Of course, if this somehow is after he is "killed" by his brother and "cursed" by the War God [if that still happened] then the issue isn't whether he dies but whether he fails. Which he could do just fine in some cases.

Also, a lychee in black robes or straw hat+loinwrap.

Also Kragnar.

I cannot help but think that the current quest is going to end with the kobolds being attacked, and all Chop's students needing to go out and use Chop's teachings. Our teaching of them seems lighthearted right now, but if they start dying when that happens it would give seriousness whiplash.

>>354947
That is why we need to train them into badasses.

Punylocks is so cute. :3 We'll have to be extra hard to make sure she doesn't get smooshed by whatever comes along.

...something must have happened to Chop in the past, I'm thinking. But if we will ever penetrate that wall of thousands of percentages of diamond-hard muscle to find out what, we may never know.

Man, no one's DISCUSSed this stuff in a while. :V

Anyways, just wanted to point out that Hilt is pretty darn untrustworthy, and we shouldn't be ~too~ taken in by the CuteGnoll act.

What do we actually know about him?
- He kidnapped a cutebold to "play with"
- He used the first injury he got as an excuse to get out of searching
- He wants certain members of his tribe dead
- He sees Kobold lives as expendable in his goals
- He witheld information from us on where Punylocks was

Maybes:
- He probably killed Stream (not provable, but fits the facts)

Everything else is pretty much questionable. Any reasoning he gives for his actions should be taken with a grain of salt. For example, the blindfold issue with Stream? He could have easily taken that off after the fact. Or he could have taunted her, interrogated her, etc. We really don't know.

We only have the facts and what he's told us to go on, and what he's told us is questionable. He might very well continue to try to find our base to turn it over to the Necromancer after we've helped him. Betraying his allies is obviously not too much of a heartache for this guy.

Of course, being overly paranoid may be bad, too, because this could be an opportunity for some decent help. This is just an appeal to reason to make sure we don't automatically go "CUTEGNOLL GOOD". :)

Just because a compulsive liar occasionally says "I'm a liar, don't trust me." doesn't forgive him for what he's done, make him a good person, or guarantee he won't do it again in the future.

Also, when considering whether or not we should attack, keep in mind that we're mostly a bunch of trainees with only a few truly capable people with us. Most of the gnolls we'd have to take out are large and powerful warriors, even for their species. Even isolating them one-by-one and playing defensively won't guarantee us a victory without losses.

I apologize for being somewhat super-serial, but I would rather not have this turn into "oops we just killed half our protagonists and set up our base for attack"-quest. :)

He said he killed Stream, and any other gnoll around would've tracked us down.

Now, I agree that taking on the other gnolls might be beyond our abilities... which is why we kindof need to figure out how much time we have.

Then again it's raining and that is supercharging Punylocks. She could use water magic to great effect in battle I think. If we can take advantage of the rain in this way we might be alright... but then, how long will it take for her to recharge her mana? She said she was low.

>>358277
>- He sees Kobold lives as expendable in his goals

I'm afraid I'm getting nitpicky here, but I disagree. He said:
>"I think, even if it were four kobolds and Lumei and myself, it would have been worth it for Stream's death."

His statement was meant to show that he believed Stream was so horrible that incurring losses would be worth it if it meant killing her (even if he himself was among those lost). It show's how ruthless Stream was, not how expendable Hilt thinks kobolds are. In fact, the opposite seems to be true. Hilt loves kobolds and hated Stream largely because of the way she mistreated kobolds and other creatures.

[/nitpick] :I

>>358287
Agreed. I get the feeling this guy is actually a 'bold sympathizer and possibly wanted Stream and the others out of the picture because, as we saw, they seem to have no qualms with just slaughtering them because they can.

Hilt's lying might be a part of that: how else would he survive in such a group? But still, we have to figure out how he wants us to believe him.

When it comes to dealing with Hilt, my point is simply that we have to be careful to avoid falling into circular reasoning. We need to evaluate the evidence to make sure his stories match up with what we've seen.

>>358287
>His statement was meant to show that he believed Stream was so horrible that incurring losses would be worth it if it meant killing her (even if he himself was among those lost). It show's how ruthless Stream was, not how expendable Hilt thinks kobolds are. In fact, the opposite seems to be true. Hilt loves kobolds and hated Stream largely because of the way she mistreated kobolds and other creatures.

That was obviously the way he *intended* us to read it, yes. But just because he said it doesn't make it true. We only have his word to go on, although the evidence can be read in such a way to support this assertion.

For example:
Stream and the other gnolls were obviously all for forcing the Kobolds to do their dirty work, and Stream admitted to killing some kobolds at some point, although it wasn't confirmed to be during this expedition. However, it seems safe to assume that it was, since Hilt only joined the group about a month ago and Stream's chat implied that Hilt had at least seen/heard of the gnolls in the group killing 'bolds, and might have had a good idea of how many kobolds individual gnolls were killing.

Does Hilt really like kobolds? The evidence seems to point to yes (treatment of Lilu, testimony from Stream, demeanor towards us), and we haven't seen anything in general to dispute that yet *except* his willingness to lie to us and use us as assassins.

So, while some of what Hilt has said can be easily confirmed true, much more of what he's told us falls into a grey area. He may be a good guy, but we need to think through the evidence and not make rash assumptions or put too much trust in him. We still don't know exactly why he wants Chomp and Clanker dead - we can only go on his explanation or speculate.

Regardless whether or not he's telling the truth, for right now, we've chosen to fight. Once the fight is finished, we'll see whether or not Hilt's really as good as he tries to act.

Elephant Guy 2012/01/25(Wed)12:07 No. 48680 ID: 807ed3
File 132752202057.jpg - (27.81KB , 555x445 , icame.jpg )

>Your name is DURK NUUK'ERM.

>Your occupation is BERSERKER PACKIN' BOLD AND A HALF.

>3 sticks of chewing gum
>2 marble chewtoys (steel)
>Wagon Wheel Spinning Rims - 1 c each wheel

Nice job wrapping up Chop's Dojo! The ending was way better than I could have hoped for when we headed off to the Gnollpocalypse.

I have to wonder whether or not Chop showing up was a bit of last minute Deus ex Machina, or if it was planned all along. :)

Since this setting appears to be getting a lot of love and likely won't go away any time soon, it'll be interesting to see what effects our choice to 'adopt' Hilt will have on the settlement.

Out of curiosity, for the The Oremor Trail, how hardcore Oregon Trail are you going?

>>358500
Chop showing up was more of a last minute 'this quest is supposed to be about Chop and there have been almost 100 updates with no Chop', and also not wanting to drag out the fighting too long.

As for how hardcore OT this will be... well, don't get too attached to any characters. That said, I'm not going to pull out a BAD END QUEST OVER at the drop of a hat.

>>358502
What
the bad ends are what people play OT for, and seeing how far they can get before they die the fuck off.

No one finishes Oregon Trail. Intentionally. At most, maybe really close to the end intentionally while the Player Character, the last and only survivor, is dying from diarrhea. You got to make those silly tombstones for the other people in your elementary computer lab to find.

>>358502
OK. And yeah, I totally get what you mean about Chop - I definitely noticed it. But in the end, I think we got just enough Chop that his... interesting mannerisms... ended up being funny instead of eventually getting on our nerves. ;)

As for OT, the last time I played through the classic Oregon Trail, I actually managed to get everyone to the end alive. It doesn't seem to be that hard as long as you follow the formula of starting early, resting often, and saving your "grueling pace" and shitty ration stints only to areas where it's really necessary. Oh, and being careful about fording rivers and all that.

That said, this is obviously its own unique beast, and I plan to suggest things that are out of the OT norm - at least until I get a better feel for the quest.

Thanks for answering. :D

 

Everything you need to know.

>>358517
LULZ! That guy should write for family guy.

a kobold just got payed the worth of four big ass animals plus extra for having sex
my god

>>358538
Hail to the King baby.

Is that elf we just talked to Eliye Leafburrow? They have the same hairdue man.

>>358559

goddamn treefuckers all look the same anyway.

If we have another adventure and Flava Flav dies (God I hope not), since Flava Flav's Bi's name wouldn't make sense anymore, I propose a rename to Mik Daawson

I would like to place my bets now that Clamp is inside the box.

SO!

The necromancers- or at least that one construct- know the events of at least the beginning of the first Clamp quest. This suggests they have the soul of someone that was there.

Or the construct was made using one of the original gnolls' souls.

OR! And I'm reaching here. They know about us. And all we've ever done. And they want us.

I think we're still advice souls, but it's pretty vague. We haven't seen Tom in a while, he could have just sent us down here willy nilly after he got enough power, figuring we're decent servants and shit. Or it could be for non-chaotic based purposes. Who knows. Maybe we got sucked down here after we changed a bunch of lives by the necromancers or liches and now we have the effects of being heard as part of our user's mind now instead of direct interaction again, like in the time travel dreams. Small detail though so forget that.

We tend to black out a bunch, technically forget things that have happened. Supposedly, wee were always with Chee, before we legitimately met her. This coincides with other quests but that's besides the point. During of the black-out periods we could have been swiped by a lich and have our memories read. Then, probably an experiment got us kicked out and moving from friend to friend because that's how we previously worked.

I think WE are the necromancer artifact. Because the previous Necromancer artifact in the kobold caves was made by Lich Chee, however, the original Chee was blessed with having a normal happy life and never became a Lich anymore so she couldn't have made another kobold construct and whatever else was there. Notice how now, there's no real mention of the kobold caves anymore and we're not there anymore. No one is concerned about it so far in the current quest. We're with Clamp. Clamp has been getting attacked consistently just before we managed to arrive, but only just before. We went with Duke (I'm guessing we must have made friends with him by proxy of another friend so we could get into him) and then got transferred by being at least somewhere near Clamp. Won the Oremer trail and only got an epilogue of Duke's quest instead of going all the way back with him with details and shit. So we blacked out again for a little bit and then woke up again with Clamp at the peak amount of ambushes. The Lich was planning on us switching to him before the quest even started and is going to go for the souls of anyone we made friends that he is aware of!

The catbold, Tae(human bigtits for those that forgot), Ears and Kip will all be in danger if I'm right! The bird lich is just biding his time with Ears since he's right at his front door. No idea what Northern Lich is doing.

Anyone notice this vampire chick looks like Rachel/Raital?
It's the hair mainly, she's missing the beauty mark beneath her eye.

Lago, not sure if you want to answer this right now, but in ClampQuest, are we the Advice Souls again, or some other kind of external force guiding Clamp, or just Clamp's internal monologue (with no real external presence)?

From what I've seen so far, I'm leaning towards monologue, but it never hurts to ask. :)

I also totally understand if this falls under "secret stuff the players will find out later."

Just a plain old inner monologue, this time.

>>359219
oh well then
that shot down my theory
Clamp's just got a powerful or cool soul then. Well, it was fun making the theory that Lorkim wanted us and we were attached to Clamp's soul.

I have successfully modded Kobold necromancers into the newest version of Dwarf Fortress.
This quest made me do it.

>>359334
Awesome. I'd actually like to see it uploaded, or just a pastebin of the modded portions of files, so that I may hijack it myself when I find the time to play some DF.

The changes needed are fairly small, though somewhat unintuitive.
My experiments with the secrets of the secrets of life and death are documented here:
http://www.bay12forums.com/smf/index.php?topic=100707.msg3014071#msg3014071
The list of the things that need adding are in the Summary section.

Man. I get such major crisis 2 vibes from this quest. Like how chee is really a dead-man-walking, how she becomes stronger by sacrificing more of herself and taking on the abilities of her enemies, and how she (un-purposefully) replaced her previous body with another's and transferred the echoes of her personality into it.

Major crisis 2 vibes.

>>125722
"It all comes down to how much you're willing to sacrifice"

>>125725
Chee was a great quest, very popular, and one that led to a lot of great stuff after that's still going now. But it's generally considered to be not the done thing to dig up a thread for a quest that's been completed for six years.

>>125729
Eh, there's a reason dis threads don't normally get locked or archived like quest threads. If new readers want to discuss completed quests, or share their reactions or feelings, or express appreciation (or criticism, etc) it's the most appropriate place on the board to do so.