I actually just gave it a read-through away and am enjoying it. The art style is pretty cute. I've got no other feedback at the moment, other than to keep up the good work.

Definitely loving the "network" theme of this quest, the simplistic character design works well for the setting, and the bland rooms have a reason for lack of detail, which likely saves time both in your creation of and our analyzing of the images. It's a bit short and doesn't seem to have a clear focus yet, but I'm hoping for some excellent development in the near future.

I finally decided to dig up this old thread for feedback and/or voting purposes. If you have anything to swear at me for, do it here.

First vote: Johnny or Bartholomew?

>>322022
Consider this a vote for Johnny

>>322022
Uhh, Bartholomew, I guess?

Tycho 2010/03/09(Tue)10:42 No. 12229 ID: 5eea01
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[[I realize I should have explained further in case people see the feedback thread first. The one on the left is already named Nicky, the one on the right needs a name. Suggested so far have been Johnny (Five) and Bart(holomew), but you can make your own suggestions.]]

Bartholomew

Bart's a good enough name, methinks.

Bartholomew is most excellent.

Bartholomew it is. Voting closed.

how meta would it be to tell Tycho that i have a degree in computer/networking repair and maintenance? (i really do have one, it's framed and on my wall.)

>>322081
That would only matter if the Grid worked like the Internet or modern computing in general. It doesn't. But yeah, that'd be weird.

i finally figured it out! gridlock is like the RPG segments of Mr. Robot!

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