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16726 No. 16726 ID: 63f46a

So yeah. Discussion-thread. Opinions, questions, feedback are welcome.
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No. 28682 ID: 9b6c31
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28682

Boredom does wonders.
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No. 28714 ID: 6040f7

I was bored until you threw this J guy in, now it looks pretty interesting. I'm excited to see what's up with him.

It's already been said, but it feels like some updates don't advance the plot and beget other suggestions. We don't want to spend 2 updates sorting thru the filing system, unless there's some kind of danger or intrigue. I think you are starting to get into Tory's past and his secrets, which is interesting, but that feels like it progresses a bit slowly - maybe start dropping a little more info about that and it will pick up.
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No. 28725 ID: 9b6c31
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28725

>>338514
Thank you for your feedback! I will try to make things interesting and skip unfunny and boring stuff from now on! ( what was I thinking with that filing this urgh )
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No. 28730 ID: 1854db

>>337446
RIP Drillworm, you were glorious ;_;
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No. 29565 ID: 9b6c31
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29565

Bad news everyone!
Due computer-problems ( bastard refuses to boot ), I am unable to access my tools and files.
Tory's Tower will be now on hiatus until I get my computer fixed.

Also, feedback, critique, comments, theories, planning and fanstuff accepted.
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No. 29577 ID: dad664

>>339365
Could be a BIOS issue. Tried clearing the CMOS?
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No. 29610 ID: 967cde

Bet it's the power supply. I've had so many power supplies go bad on me.
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No. 29984 ID: 9b6c31
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29984

Bad news again. My computer died now. I cannot get it to boot at all.
Getting a new motherboard brb.
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No. 31086 ID: 9b6c31
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31086

Good news everyone! I got my computer working once again! Oh joy!
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No. 31091 ID: 76915f

>>340886
I noticed. Good stuff! What was the problem?
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No. 31248 ID: 9b6c31
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31248

It was the motherboard.

Attention. I will be away from computer 20.2-27.2
So, I logically cannot update Tory's Tower during that period.
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No. 31251 ID: 71f984
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31251

Also, I would also like to apologize and correct my huge error in previous update.
Tory talks about 0.90kW laser, while I meant 90kW laser. I don't even know why it slipped there like that.
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No. 31262 ID: fe21b4

>>34105
Yeah I thought 0.90KW seemed a bit low.

We'll be anticipating your return and more TT.
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No. 32822 ID: 6ba8b3

Hey, I was reading the archived chapters and noticed that the flash files don't work. Since they seem to work for other quests I'm guessing they don't work for other readers either?

Just letting you know if you weren't aware of it already.
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No. 33408 ID: 9b6c31
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33408

I redrew some of Tory's creations.
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No. 33409 ID: 9b6c31
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33409

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No. 33411 ID: 9b6c31
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33411

Maybe I'll do more tomorrow.
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No. 33511 ID: 9b6c31
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33511

Megamanta.
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No. 33524 ID: 9b6c31
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33524

Aaand TD-01. All finished.
For now.
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No. 33971 ID: cf244d

Dude Tory should totally get a rockband to play his themesong.
Also he should get a themesong.
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No. 35571 ID: 951401

tory is so adorable oh my god
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No. 36591 ID: 9b6c31
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36591

Art-evolution!
Or something along that line.

I wish for some feedback. I am planning to start [thread 9] on sunday or monday. I am well aware that I have barely improved questing ( read: boring situations, things take fucking long, not-so-well-placed-timeskips )
But hey, I've tried to flesh out characters.
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No. 36599 ID: cf65c1

The art is much improved, thank you.
But I am too much of a smartass to not give you this as a response for your request for feedback:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Audio_feedback
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No. 36635 ID: 369a62

I reckon things are pretty good now. Tory has been building up a master plan and I'd like to see how it all unfolds. Possibly with the nukes finally seeing some glorious use.

I think the art right now is superb and perfect for the quest. It was kind of spotty at the start and looking back at thread 1 it wasn't all that good. I'm glad you've been improving it constantly.
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No. 37323 ID: 9b6c31
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37323

Tory's Tower is now one year old!
It has been a long trip!

Anyway, I got a new HUGE tablet which will take some getting used to. During the summer you can expect more frequent updates due more free time.
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No. 37377 ID: f9092d

Liked the new tablet superupdate. Feels like things are really kicking into gear.

What's Doc up to when he's not doing odd jobs for Tory or repairing Tory? We don't really know much about his motivations.
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No. 37969 ID: 9b6c31
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37969

Regarding spotty update-schedule. I've been busier than I thought I would be. More exhausted etc. And I find myself playing one particular game instead of updating.
I try to update daily.
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No. 37974 ID: 5f0943

>>347769
What game would that be?
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No. 37983 ID: 8f32a4

>>347774
Never played Cave Story, eh?
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No. 37997 ID: 5f0943

>>347783
Nope. Can't say I have.
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No. 38015 ID: a6dd15

>>347797
Rectify this, immediately.
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No. 38062 ID: 0d7a83

>Read this thread
>Download Cave Story
>Play it for 5 hours straight

WHY HAS NO ONE TOLD ME ABOUT THIS GAME?
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No. 38123 ID: a27764

Where were you in 2005 when the entire internet loved this game for a few months?
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No. 39338 ID: 178c80
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39338

Sorry, I kinda lost my wind with Tory's Tower. You cannot believe how hard it is to draw right now. The quality has gotten pretty ridiculous to maintain. There have been several nights when I have drawn something, then disregarded as shit and continued next day. So, I am trying to keep up now, but I cannot promise too consistent update-schedule.

Also, on other news, I just finished that long-named quest, Kaustinen's Pretty Short, Unamusing Quest to Attain Alcoholic Beverages, Punch People He Hates and Escape Some Sort of Surreal Alternate Dimension. I would like some thoughts on it. It wasn't anything too serious, but more of a time-killer.

And lastly, I have started in my boredom ANOTHER quest on MSPA's adventure-forum. To Hell and Back which is about a boy who ventures into underworld to save his bro.
Now now, yes, I have been focusing on it a bit more because the idea feels fresh and it is bit more fun to draw than HUGE-ASS COMPLICATED SPIDERLORD.
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No. 39339 ID: 07416a

>>349138
THE ROMANCE SUBPLOT WITH GREEN GHOST WAS UNRESOLVED OTHERWISE EXCELLENT CAN WE HAVE AN EPILOGUE A SEXY EPILOGUE
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No. 39341 ID: 178c80
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39341

Haha I forgot to post the link.
http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?40317-To-hell-and-back/
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No. 40495 ID: cfa9cc

Tory's Tower was a great quest. It has been one of my favorites from start to finish. Thanks for providing.
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No. 40496 ID: 0bd0b0

>>350295
I completely agree.

The ending seemed really dependent on what we had suggested. I wonder, how different could it had been with different suggestions? Tory maybe would have succeeded or something. I am glad at least we did not get a bad ending.
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No. 40498 ID: 0d7a83

>>350295
My thoughts exactly.
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No. 40690 ID: 180ec2

I felt like this needed to be posted from the IRC:
<Insomnia> I thought you said Huey Freeman
<sleepRand> Huey Freeman, who was Gordon Freeman's cousin was one day in nucluar powerplant, watching over fuel rods
<sleepRand> He was looking at his monitor, but then Tory Sinclair came inside from the door and said
<sleepRand> "I will steal the fuel rods and build atom lasers!"
<sleepRand> Huey Freeman tried to fight him, but his robots stoppeded him.
<sleepRand> Tory Sinclair went out of the powerplant into his copter and flew off.
<sleepRand> Huey Freeman was thinking that he should get the fuelrods back so he went to the garage and went into his monster truck
<sleepRand> He arrived in Tory's lair, where Tory was building atomic laser-robot from fuel rods.
<sleepRand> "You are too late" said Tory. Robot began to move and began to fire its atom-lasers at Huey.
<sleepRand> Huey dodged and rushed to the robot and kicked into the stomach and the robot fell.
<sleepRand> "Curses!" said Tory but Huey said "Not so fast!"
<sleepRand> "Too late" said Tory and activated intruder-throw-away system, which picked up Huey and threw him out from top of the tower.
<sleepRand> Huey took his shirt and made it into a paracute and flew off into safety
<sleepRand> The tower disappeared in flash of teleportation, and everyone was happy.
<sleepRand> Later Huey went to participate in Freeman family meeting.
<sleepRand> The end.
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No. 40691 ID: 28e94e

>>350490
Canon.
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40692

>>350490
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No. 40714 ID: 24b747

Now that Tory's Tower is wrapped up maybe we can get some questions answered...

Did Doc have any agendas or did he stay with Tory?
What was the deal with the void reflection?
Did the mining outpost in the desert world successfully mine a lot of minerals?
What happened to the Ancients?
Was the Armipotent being on Earth up to much or was it just lounging about in general?
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No. 40717 ID: 178c80
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40717

>Did Doc have any agendas or did he stay with Tory?
Stayed with Tory, corpses etc., studying alien species etc.

>What was the deal with the void reflection?
What?

Did the mining outpost in the desert world successfully mine a lot of minerals?
Some. Tory did fall asleep during construction of one of the robots, and that robot malfunctioned when he was gone, rendering it useless.

>What happened to the Ancients?
They are still few around. Remaining ancients are running out of time anyway, so they might not stay for long.

>Was the Armipotent being on Earth up to much or was it just lounging about in general?
Almost all armipotent beings are not sapient, so yeah, if you are talking about that water-thing, just lounging about.

I misread suggestions and made this image, herpa derpa.
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No. 40741 ID: 0bd0b0

>>350517
Could you answer >>350296 too, please? Specifically the asking of how different the ending could have been if we made better/different suggestions.
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No. 40749 ID: 4531bc

I have a question for you.


Organist?

Yup. That's it. Please explain. :)
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No. 40806 ID: b6ca92
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40806

>>350549
Have you ever tried to play a real motherfucking organ? You have to be as nimble with your feet as with your hands, and twice as dexterous with your hands as a normal pianist, plus being able to keep track of several different sets of keys at once, individually manipulating each appendage independently of any other.

Look at this image! THIS is a motherfucking organ! Capistrano?
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No. 40807 ID: 3de1c3

>>350606
This should be the control panel of a spaceship.
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No. 40834 ID: 178c80
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40834

Here is a wallpaper I was requested to make. 1920x1200 etc.

Enjoy.

Does not contain Tory System hijacking software.
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No. 40840 ID: 1444d5

>>350607
IIRC, the ship control boards from the Lensman series were described as akin to organs that, instead of directing air through pipes, directed superheated gas through thrusters (I think that even with the Bergenholm, they stilled used reaction drives... Better go reread them!).
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