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The thing is, the setting is currently running on porno logic / porn movie logic.
The problem is that is boring and doesn't make for a satisfying story. There's no drama, no conflict, no real story. This is detrimental to the existing story, especially compared to other erotic quests, like Dragon Romance, which includes more story building and conflict and uncertainty and so on.
The sooner the big twist(s) come, the better! It ideally shouldn't be just a 'big reveal', and instead be woven throughout the story, too.
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