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88035 No. 88035 ID: c9673e

Hi! My name is Nails! And I'm nailed to the wall!
Please help me!
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No. 88037 ID: c1b520

No, your state fits your name and therefore you must stay there to satisfy our lust for irony.
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No. 88039 ID: c9673e
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88039

I think I'm dying.

...but I don't want to die.
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No. 88043 ID: 697b23

>>88039
You shoulda thought of that before you told us your name.
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No. 88044 ID: 34470e

>>88039
Can you read what's on the sign?
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No. 88049 ID: 632862

Erm... Try pulling yourself off the nails.
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No. 88051 ID: c9673e
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88051

Voices! From somewhere! So there are those out there who can help me from nightmare!

I remember not but my name and that wherever I come from I was deeply loved. Who would do this to me?
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No. 88054 ID: dda9dd

>>88051
Depends, who do you know?

Also, what the hell are you?
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No. 88059 ID: c9673e
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88059

>>88044
If I turn my head just enough I can make out what it says.

>>88049
Impossible. I'm in enough pain as it is and I don't want to hurt any more than I have to. I've already tried pulling them out hours ago.

...I feel something at my back.
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No. 88061 ID: 34470e

>>88059
Is it big? Little? Hot? Cold? Hard? Soft?
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No. 88062 ID: 632862

>>88059
Rub your back against the wall.
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No. 88070 ID: c9673e
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88070

>>88054
I don't remember anyone...
Oh, but how much time I've spent here wandering who I must know. Who could torture me like this.

I... I do not know what I am.
Perhaps I used to know.
Maybe you voices know. Surely you voices must know more than I.
Of what race would you call me?
And furthermore, what shall I call you? Surely you voices must have a name?
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No. 88071 ID: 34470e

>>88070
I, uh, would say... a, um... kobold? Do you enjoy noserubs? And you can call us voices. We're ok with that.
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No. 88072 ID: 45be60

>>88070
you may be a duckman
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No. 88073 ID: dda9dd

>>88070
It's uhhh... its kinda hard to tell, I mean I think you've had some work done. Long lopsided scars aren't a normal feature of your kind are they?
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No. 88074 ID: 632862

>>88071
I really doubt this is a kobold. Looks more like a salamander thing.

Call us Bob.
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No. 88078 ID: c9673e
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88078

>>88061
Ahh... there's some kind of backpack behind me.
It's tied to me around my right arm.
If only I had a free appendage to open it up with.

I say, I'm much happier now that you voices are here. The pain's not as bad now. Thank you.
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No. 88079 ID: 34470e

>>88078
That's a long tongue you have there. Can you use it like you can use your hands?
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No. 88080 ID: dda9dd

>>88078
Your eyes appear to be practically amorphous sir. I too ask if that tongue is prehensile, it could aid in investigation of the bag.
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No. 88082 ID: 34470e

>>88079
>prehensile
That's what word I was looking for!
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No. 88090 ID: c9673e
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88090

>>88079
A long tongue? Oh, yes, I apparently do have one.
But... I don't really remember having one.

Good suggestion let me see if I can find anything.

>>88071
Okay. Then I shall henceforth always refer to you as the Voices.

Kobolds? I have no idea what those are. And I... can't really remember ever having my nosed rubbed.

My body feels really strange. But... especially my face.
It's like it... moves. It's unsettling.
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No. 88092 ID: 632862

>>88090
It is moving. Your eyes are all changing shape.
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No. 88102 ID: c9673e
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88102

Oh. There was alot of stuff in that backpack.
A crowbar and a hammer (no doubt what was jabbing me in the back), a note, and some sort of... something, I don't know what it is.
...
...
...
I fe el re ally st r a nge.
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No. 88104 ID: 632862

>>88102
Your left arm has grown a bit, it seems.
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No. 88105 ID: c9673e
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88105

I ca n t fee l m y ar m> .
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No. 88106 ID: dda9dd

>>88105
EverythingisgettingkindatrippyinhereI--a-m--n-o-t--s-u-r-e--w-h-y--.
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No. 88107 ID: 632862

>>88105
It's sticking into the wall... Can you control it at all? Try grabbing the hammer or crowbar and prying those nails out.
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No. 88115 ID: c9673e
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88115

>>88107
wh...what? What's sticking into the wall?
I think I lost consciousness for a second there.

Um, what was I telling you. Oh yes! I found a crowbar and a hammer (no doubt what was jabbing me in the back) a note, and some...

Wait. Did I tell you this already? My head hurts.

Let me see if I can get those nails out with the back end of the hammer. I'm not sure if my tongue is strong enough to pull the nails out, but I'll try.
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No. 88117 ID: 632862

>>88115
Your eyes are messed up...
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No. 88122 ID: 9a1ca3
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88122

What the fuck is going on here?
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No. 88133 ID: c9673e
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88133

Yes. This will work. I can hold it steady.
It shouldn't be long before I pry it loose.
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No. 88136 ID: 34470e

>>88133
When you're done, I think you should examine the hole above the door that you made.
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No. 88138 ID: c9673e
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88138

OH GOD THE PAIN!!!

! ! !
...it FEELS so... AMAZING...
such. ecstasy.

hah. hah. hah.
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No. 88139 ID: 632862

>>88138
Stick your tongue in the wound. Explore the sensation.
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No. 88141 ID: f44349

>>88138
Okay you are creeping me out. :I
>>88139
And so are you.
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No. 88142 ID: db9ea3

Voice to half-insane creature-thing.

Pain should not feel good. Pain is a vital indicator for when something is wrong with your body. Its existence in living things is meant to encourage actions that does not result in further pain. In other words, something is wrong with your mind or body if it feels -good-.

You now have a hand free. Free yourself from the rest of the nails.
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No. 88143 ID: 9832f9

>>88142
PAIN IS WEAKNESS LEAVING THE BODY PUNY MORTAL!
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No. 88144 ID: c9673e
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88144

Hah. hah. ha. haha.
F re e.
h a.
d e vo ur . ye s. a ll of t hem.
hah a.
YE S. DE V O UR. C ONS UM E.
RE ND AL L FL ES H
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No. 88145 ID: 34470e

>>88144
Hey you! Yes, you! Go in the corner until you calm down!
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No. 88147 ID: db9ea3

Devouring, consuming, i.e. eating. Eating fulfills the desire that is hunger. Hunger exists to tell the body that it needs to replenish its primary fuel source...Food.

Open the box. Food could be inside.
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No. 88150 ID: c9673e
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88150

Huh! What!?
Somehow I'm not nailed to the wall anymore.
...I don't remember pulling the nails out, but I guess I must have??

...maybe I'm just hungry. Yeah, that's it. I must be malnourished. I should get something to eat. But where?
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No. 88151 ID: c50a92

>>88149
Looks like you're possessed or something there, buddy. Try to stay away from any new friends you make if you start feeling weird again.

Anyway, try and open that, uh... bleeding box over there. Oh, and is that a key in that pool of blood? Check that out too. In fact, it may open the box and/or door.
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No. 88152 ID: 34470e

>>88150
I believe you have a split personality. You stated freaking out and saying that you'll devour them all and stuff like that.
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No. 88153 ID: db9ea3

There's something in the blood.

Study the paper you have.
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No. 88154 ID: f44349

>>88150
I think the box over there says you fell.
Also you are kind of insane.
But only sometimes.
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No. 88155 ID: c9673e
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88155

>>88152
I... did?
I don't... why??

>>88154
What? It just says box. I... don't think I'm insane...
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No. 88156 ID: 34470e

>>88155
What is that spiderclock thingie?
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No. 88157 ID: f44349

>>88155
It did. It said "He fell" on the side for a second there.
Also it's okay if you are a little crazy, I don't mind.
But anyways there is a nice shiny key over there in that blood!
Go snag that shit, keys are ALWAYS good.
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No. 88158 ID: c9673e
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88158

>>88153
...this doesn't make any sense at all.
Was this note intended for me?
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No. 88159 ID: c9673e
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88159

>>88157
Ah, yes. There is a key in the... blood...
Let me get it.

>>88156
I have no idea. It appears to be a clock of some sort though and there are numerous cracks arising from within and around the clock. There is also a small circular indentation below the clock.
Maybe something goes there?
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No. 88160 ID: c50a92

>>88159
Oh, yeah, about that circular thing. It was an eye earlier, back when you were going batshit. It was kind of... watching you. Seems to be full of blood now, so no reason to worry.

Anyway, try putting that round thing you found in there, then see if there's anything you could do with that key.
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No. 88161 ID: c9673e
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88161

>>88136
For some reason, this thought came echoing back to me, though I had never heard it spoke before.

I had not noticed that hole before now.
...but I'm too short to reach it anyway.
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No. 88162 ID: 34470e

>>88161
No, YOU made that hole.
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No. 88163 ID: 277821

>>88161
There sure is a lot of blood coming out of that box, you might wanna open it.
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No. 88164 ID: c9673e
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88164

>>88160
I put the circular... whatever it is into the indent but I don't see any kind of reaction from the clock...
!...??
...
. . .
ha. th e c lo ck rea ds...
ni ne < th ir ty thr ee. .
an d u nde r se ven.
ha. haha.
a lo ng wa y to g o...
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No. 88165 ID: 34470e

>>88164
Quit going crazy or I'll give you a spanking!
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No. 88167 ID: c9673e
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88167

ha........
I... hear another voice.
Unlike yours. And it frightens me.

For although your voice is near,
it's voice is even closer.

When I said I didn't remember what was happening to me and what I was doing... I lied.

What am I!? I hate this body! A constantly shifting mass of useless flesh! And what of my thoughts? They aren't even my own. Or are they?
And what's with this box!? And people watching me? What the fuck is going on!?

This room... is getting to me.
I must find a way out.
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No. 88169 ID: 34470e

>>88167
Awwwwwww, now you made me feel bad. Look, do you think you can bear with it a little while longer? We need you to open the box.
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No. 88173 ID: c9673e
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88173

>>88147
>>88151
>>88154
>>88163
>>88169

The Box! The God damned Box!
The fucking thing is taunting me!
Even the Voices can see the fucking thing!
And they all say, "Open the box, Nails!"
...
..
.
...Should I open the box? Surely with the crowbar I would be able to. But I fear whats inside. I just want to leave... that's all I want.

But... I am tired.
I shall give you voices time to think. I do not think I am in complete control of myself at the moment and cannot myself make a sound judgement.
Voice, please help me.
Think deep about all that I have said and you have seen. And ask any questions you would like to ask me or say anything you would like to speak to me about.

For I am sure when I awake from my sleep
your voices will come echoing back to me.
They always do.
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No. 88174 ID: 34470e

>>88173
It's alright. If you're too scared to open the box them don't. Try using the key in the door.
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No. 88176 ID: c50a92

>>88173
Go ahead and try the key on the door. I doubt it'll work, but it's worth a shot.

As for the box... well, I have a feeling that, whatever's happening, whoever's fucking with you, they probably won't let you leave until you open that thing. If you're feeling up to it, then go ahead and open it. Don't be afraid; you'll be fine. We'll make sure of that, Nails.
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No. 88416 ID: 632862

>>88173
Use the key on the door.
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No. 88535 ID: 51d0f5

>Hi! My name is Nails! And I'm nailed to the wall!
OH THE TERRIBLE IRONY OF IT
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No. 88578 ID: c9673e
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88578

...I dreamed.
I dreamed of a world long gone.
Filled with all kinds of wondrous flora and fauna.
But there was one animal that stood over all of them.
They could manipulate anything and everything they wanted to.
They built shelters that rose into the sky and beyond. They built bridges that crossed into other worlds. Time and space was not but inferior concepts to these beings as they had overcome all limitations of their physical selves, save but one: Death.

They had mastered everything that life entailed, but they knew nothing of the afterlife.
And they ached for the knowledge that was gained when they would inevitably die.
Where would they go?

I have the same dream every time I close my eyes to sleep.
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No. 88585 ID: c9673e
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88585

Ah. I feel much better after having slept.
As you can imagine it was rather hard sleeping when I was nailed to the wall.

>>88535
...

Anyway, I slept on top of the box.
You know, so that if anything was inside, it wouldn't get out.

I must have been out for a long time because
...I've got a little something to worry about besides the box now.
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No. 88586 ID: 632862

>>88585
Are you nailed to the box now?
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No. 88597 ID: c9673e
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88597

It would seem that the entire room is now flooded with blood seeping from the box and the blood level is still rising.
Oh, and my left arm is stuck in the wall. I can't seem to pull it out.

...If I don't get out of this room quickly I'm going to start to lose my calm composure and start FREAKING THE FUCK OUT!
! !
Voices, help!
I'm gonna drown!
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No. 88602 ID: 632862

>>88597
First, grab the disc and put it over the eye again.
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No. 88603 ID: b71223

>>88597
try adjusting the angle at which you pull to pull your arm out and don't freak out. think calm soothing thoughts like kittens.
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No. 88604 ID: 34470e

>>88597
Um, shit. Uh, see if you can get the thing that's floating on the blood.
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No. 88606 ID: 51d0f5

Use CROWBAR on WALL GLUE
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No. 88614 ID: c9673e
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88614

>>88174
>>88176
>>88416
Looking at the door I realize that there is no keyhole. Or knob. Why didn't I notice that before? I thought there was a doorknob there...

>>88603
It feels like someone is puncturing my hand with something... That guy looking at me must be doing it from the other room!
It really fucking hurts!....!........
...
...
ohhhhhhh. ha. it fe els re a lly go od. ha.
haha.

>>88602
>>88604
yo u mea n th e Z y ph en i c al D is c ??
w hy wo uld I wan t tha t ? ?
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No. 88621 ID: 632862

>>88614
Punch the eye.
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No. 88623 ID: 34470e

>>88614
Hey you! Evil voice! Go the fuck away! You're scaring Nails!
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No. 88635 ID: c50a92

>>88614
Hey, as long as you're in batshit demon mode, could you try putting a few more holes in the wall in the direction of that eye? It'll drain out some of the blood, and you may be able to get to the fucker before he nails your arm to another wall.

In other words, PUNCH FUCKING EVERYTHING.

...erm, failing that, grab the Zyphenical Disc and try to either cover the eye or gouge it out. That eye is starting to piss me off.
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No. 88641 ID: c9673e
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88641

>>88621
>>88645My mind opens to clear voices crashing through my inner one.
For whatever my inner voice had to say, the weight of these ones are much greater.

Punch the eye. This thing must be the one doing this to me. It must be what nailed me to the wall. It has to be. I will do more than punch it's eye. When I get out I will find it and torture it as it tortured I! And when it is weak and at Death's door, I shall devour it!...
...
Well, that was an... aggressive thing to say.

I notice that my backpack is actually missing along with all the items I thought I had, save for the four nails I have.
To make up for this, I'll take this... whatever it is, floating on top of the blood, as suggested.

Now, with that out of the way. How should I damage the eye?
Should I punch it? Kick it? Try to bite it?
Maybe I could make some use of these nails, hm?
Any way would be tremendously satisfying after all this.
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No. 88650 ID: 34470e

>>88641
Try using the Zyphenical Disc to cover the eye. If that does nothing, then just punch it.
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No. 88655 ID: e0499d

STICK LETTER OPENER IN EYE...
wait... I meant nails... put nail in eye...
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No. 88742 ID: c9673e
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88742

>>88650
I pull my arm back to make sure I hit the eye with all my strength.
Oh, I'm going to enjoy this.
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No. 88751 ID: c9673e
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88751

As soon as my fist slams into the eye, I hear a squishy sound as a multitude of veins in the eye pop in sprays of blood.

I can feel the grip on my left hand loosen a bit.
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No. 88774 ID: c9673e
File 126033171411.png - (69.89KB , 947x638 , 29.png )
88774

A shrill cry escapes the creature as I plunge my arm through it's eye.

It's grip goes limp and I pull my left hand out of the hole.
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No. 88788 ID: 632862

>>88774
Try smashing through the cracked wall.
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No. 88791 ID: 34470e

>>88774
I think the box has disappeared.
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No. 88794 ID: 632862

>>88791
Naw, it's under the level of blood now.
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No. 88804 ID: c9673e
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88804

Ah, sweet revenge.
Oh, how it felt to plunge through it's eye!
I felt it's brain turn to mush through my might!
ha. I had no idea what strength I possessed. I feel as if I could knock a hole in anything.

Well, looks like I'm free now.
But what should I do?
Should I really try to break through the wall?
What about the door?
Can I drain the blood at all? And would I even want to?
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No. 88810 ID: 34470e

>>88804
Um, try breaking through the door.
>>
No. 88812 ID: 632862

>>88804
Well, alright. Give the door a shot.
>>
No. 88862 ID: c9673e
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88862

With the success of destroying my captor in mind,
I focus all my energy into leaving this place.
As my fist connects with the door, I knock it off it's hinges and blood begins to filter through the doorway.

...I'm free.
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No. 88864 ID: 34470e

>>88862
And we didn't even have to open the box! Let's exit the room!
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No. 88880 ID: 741901

This won't end well.
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No. 88885 ID: c9673e
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88885

...
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No. 88894 ID: 34470e

>>88885
==>
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No. 88896 ID: e024d0

>>88885
Methinks those eyes of his, do distort in more ways than one.
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No. 88899 ID: 632862

>>88885
It seems as though Nails is hallucinating quite badly. The eye seems to have been real, though.
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No. 88913 ID: e024d0

>>88899
Consider his hand had a nail in it. It could very well be his own blood.
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No. 88920 ID: c9673e
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88920

...and that's enough for tonight.
Feel free to discuss about the quest.
Any feedback would also be greatly appreciated.
Do you like where this is going?
Would you change anything?
>>
No. 88921 ID: 34470e

>>88920
If I could give Nails a hug, I would.
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No. 89396 ID: c9673e
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89396

After giving it some thought, I think the story would flow better if I ended the chapter here.

Let me explain a few things.
Having never done a quest before, but quite intrigued by them, I decided to make my own.
This actually started out as sort of a joke:
A one shot where the main character dies horribly after opening the box. Nothing serious. This is why the character was poorly drawn in the opening post.
Shortly after my second post though, I changed my mind (who knows why.) and started making a real quest out of it.
I'm quite happy with how it turned out.
Thanks to everyone who took part so far.

Nails will most definitely return.
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No. 89490 ID: 34470e

>>89396
I'm glad you decided to continue this quest :D
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