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294242 No. 294242 ID: 6fdb61

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No. 294253 ID: 6fdb61
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294253

AAaa!

... Go back to sleep Goldie...

Erehwyreve saw it!

It was just a dream... go back to sleep.

>The black girl huddles up tightly against Qwern, pressing him against her chest. The young dwarf sinks into her body a little.

yrros m'i

That's fine...
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No. 294254 ID: 07416a

Take your pants off.
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No. 294257 ID: 8c73c8

what? no, time for that later. how you holding up qwern? still captured by stinking elves eh?
(also why he shouldn't take them off, elves should not even have a chance to see his majesty.)
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No. 294290 ID: 4e6eaf

can she leave the cage? or is she stuck to him?
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No. 294292 ID: 8c73c8

>>294290
((should read the first thread. he CAN'T leave so she WON'T leave. not because she can't leave him, she just won't.))
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No. 294342 ID: c71597

>>294253
Well this is kind of freaky. Lets try to get up and see what's going on.
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No. 294353 ID: 644ca1

So where have the elves taken you? Or are you still being transported?
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No. 294362 ID: 337b51

>>294253
Stay awake.
Talk to her about the dream. If we can put her at ease, she may be able to handle later bad dreams on her own.

Besides she's a being of mysterious power, there might be something Important that triggered it.
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No. 294467 ID: 6fdb61
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294467

>how you holding up qwern? still captured by stinking elves eh?

Well I haven't slept well since I got in this cage. Goldie keeps waking me up every time I get some shut eye. I've been in here for two days now. The elves feed her, and luckily for me she like's to share. I don't get to do much during the day, if I'm not consoling her and comforting her, she's all over me and wont let me do much under the pretext that she's "protecting me"

>Lets try to get up and see what's going on.

>Shortly after the young thing falls to sleep Qwern learns up through her. the slimy flesh dripping from his body, her tiny snores are buried by the clopping of hooves.

It's night. I don't know where I am.

>So where have the elves taken you? Or are you still being transported?

I'm still being transported. I don't know where I'm going every time I try to talk to the elves Goldie stops me. Says they're bad men.

>Talk to her about the dream.

Well she's asleep now, but yesterday she told me about some of her dreams... "Killing. Blood Everywhere. Screams. Smiling Rabbit. Scared. do not want." Those were the only words I could make out.
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No. 294478 ID: 8c73c8

we;; now that she is asleep you can ask the elves what is going on. need to sync yourself to her schedule.
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No. 294488 ID: c71597

>>294467
Well lets go take a look on what's going on outside of the cage.

Need to observe how many guards there are, how they're acting and stuff like that. Otherwise you can't plan an escape.
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No. 294539 ID: 6fdb61
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294539

>Well lets go take a look on what's going on outside of the cage.

It's dark... The night sky is full of stars. We're on a road somewhere. I Think I can see a forest up ahead.

>we;; now that she is asleep you can ask the elves what is going on.

Sounds good to me. Eumm... Excuse me. Mister?

Oh? Look who's talking.

Don't get me wrong... I've been meaning to, I just didn't have the opportunity to. I've got nothing against elves honest.

hahaha... I trust yah. I've nothing against dwarfs me self, I even married one.

Heh? Oh well... Just where are we going?

Hakudai Colosseum. That monster's gonna be the new moch-battle. Sorry about the predicament your in though.

Well let me out. She's asleep what are you waiting for?!

Sorry little lad. Old Haku really wants this gall. If anything goes wrong it's more than my pay that he'll take away from me, he'll take my head to. But don't worry, We'll see what we can do when we get there. If your still alive I'm sure we can get you out.
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No. 294558 ID: 8c73c8

sigh. may as well get some sleep while you can then. just lay in the puddle that she is and see if maybe sleeping while touching you will make her stay asleep, yaknow?
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No. 294565 ID: 00d3d5

>>294539
"Still alive? Colosseum? This thing's terrified, and I'm pretty sure the only guy she killed drowned from a hug. 'least that's what I figure from all the cryin' and 'pologizin'. Ya won't get much outta her. Hey, couldja toss a bit more food back here 'round mealtimes?"
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No. 294637 ID: c71597

>>294539
Ask him what she will be fighting.
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No. 294667 ID: 337b51

>>294539
"She might be dangerous but not on purpose. She's just different. And scared. And lonely, without me... Making her fight would be cruel beyond reason."
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No. 294767 ID: 6fdb61
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294767

>I'm pretty sure the only guy she killed drowned from a hug. Ya won't get much outta her. Hey, couldja toss a bit more food back here 'round mealtimes?"

That's what I thought two, But yesterday I found out that you can breath her like air... I know she didn't mean it... But I don't see how I can forgive her for what she did to Guss. Furthermore I'm still curious about how she did him in...

I seriously don't think you'll get much of a fight out of this one. And could I have some food to?

Sorry... We have preplanned rations. Giving you more now would mean having you starve later. And I agree with you... I don't see the "Black Widow" doing much in the ring. But that's not my job.

Black Widow?

Hey don't look at me. I don't come up with these names.

what she will be fighting?

Slaves, champions, fighters. Gladiators mostly.

>Making her fight would be cruel beyond reason.

Don't you think that making a little girl fight gladiators is wrong?

I do. It's sad how cruel men can be. But it's just my job. If I don't do it some one else will.
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No. 294818 ID: 8555c2

Crap. Try to get some sleep. Nothing else you can do.
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No. 294820 ID: 00d3d5

>>294767
"Two quotes come to mind:
'There are hardly any excesses of the most crazed psychopath that cannot easily be duplicated by a normal, kindly family man who just comes in to work every day and has a job to do.'
Also, 'All that's required for evil to prosper is for good men do nothing.'

Can't go judgin' you 'cause I'm attached to my head too, but your boss is an ass. Don't 'spect people would think much of it if he fell in a monster pit."
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No. 294822 ID: 8c73c8

yep, looks like you are up shit creek without a paddle.
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No. 294918 ID: 016565

well at least we know that YOU'll be alright, but we need to see if there's a way to save her. how much time do we have? ask about how far the colosseum is
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No. 294959 ID: c71597

>>294767
Doesn't seem like you can do much else right now. So you can probably go back to sleep.
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No. 295127 ID: 6fdb61
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295127

>>294918

Hey. Just when are we getting there?

Eight days... The mine is very far from anything... Count your self lucky. My home is sixteen days from there. I'll have to take the motor-horse... Ehh... Damn thing always makes me sick.

>Eight days... This is going to be very long. Well I guess I'll have plenty of time. I guess I'd better get some rest... I lie down in Goldie, close my eyes and try to sleep but just as soon as I slip out of consciousness the wagon stops, waking me and Goldie up... I always woke up to easily.

What's wrong?!

>Goldie leap's on me and covers me with her body.

NETSIL TNOD MEHT OT KLAT TNOD... NEM DAB... DAB.

>The elves go back to poking about they're map.

There's a fork in the road. Which way do we go?

Map says we go around.

Here take the reins... Wouldn't it be faster to cross the forest?

six days faster... But it's the forest of no return... It's safer to go around, besides that was part of the plan.

why would we go around when it would only take a few hours to cross it, We'd be out by sun rise and only two days away from our destination. Yep lets go through.

I don't know. I've head no one ever made it out...

We're elves! Don't tell me your afraid of a few trees... If we get attacked by anything I'll cut them down.

But...

No buts! I'm the captain here. If you don't like my plan you can go ahead and walk the rest of the way.

*sigh*

>With a crack of the reins the wagon is put back into movement. trotting briskly into the forest of no return.

ESOLC YATS. REGNAD NI ERA EW...
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No. 295128 ID: 8c73c8

... while she calls the elves 'bad', has she ever said you were in danger before? if not then i think that means it's serious. stay close and be ready to dodge anything.
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No. 295154 ID: 00d3d5

>>295127
Say this out loud: "If nobody goes in because nobody comes out, then why is there a trail at all?"
This will comfort them, thus making them lax and unprepared for their subsequent horrible demises.
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No. 295200 ID: c71597

>>295127
Ok, that sounds like a stupid decision on the magnitude of putting your dick in a sausage grinder after reading a note saying "Danger, do not put in fingers and dicks!", well whatever, if the elves want to commit suicide then they're free to do so.

It sucks that you have to follow after them though. Ask Goldie if she has any camoflauge tricks. Something to hide the two of you as the elves get killed. If that happens that is.
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No. 295735 ID: 6fdb61
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295735

>>295128

>Dodging may prove difficult in a cage. But then again we do have a good amount of space...

>>295154

If nobody goes in because nobody comes out, then why is there a trail at all?

See... The dwarf agrees with me. Now quit your whining and steer

>>295200

>I agree, hopefully the elves can go die and what ever does it can leave us alone.

Goldie, Can you hide us? Camouflage maybe?

>She looks at me with confused eyes

EGALFUOMAC? TAHT TA DOOG TON MI ON.

>As we enter the forest the mood changes... Dark branches riddled with shadows play tricks on my eyes. less and less of the moon light can be seen, but the road grows cleaner and cleaner as we progress... One of the elves seems very nervous, the other exited... A loud *CRACK* sounds in the forest. Probably just a dead branch falling I though... But the noise hits the elves a lot more than I. The captain Leaps to his feet, sword at the ready. a smile deforms his once elegant face into a devilish smirk, murderous intent emanates from the elf. I get the feeling that every thing's going exactly as planed, and that saving time had nothing to do with it...

>Suddenly a whipping whirling sound comes and out of nowhere followed by a heavy crushing noise, like a watermelon getting smashed... The vehicle stops...

NO! Don't stop! Said the elf with his eyes shut tight. Cracking the reins as hard as he can

Stop it, it's no good .Open your eyes
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No. 295739 ID: 6fdb61
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295739

>A large scythe has embedded it's self in the poor horse's neck. Most of the head now rest's on the ground. Blood pours endlessly from the gashing wound.

Show your self monster! Show me just what you are!

What I am? Said a distant voice... I am the who when they call: Who's there? I am the wind blowing through your hair... I am the shadow on the moon at night... Filling your dreams to the brim with fright!

>The monster appears against the moon, on an arc. It has the shape of a person. and the voice of a woman. Guarding a cemetery just around the bend.
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No. 295743 ID: c71597

>>295739
Well that was predictable. Make a bet with the driver that the monster will kill them all for trying to indtrude on the cemetary that it guards.
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No. 295744 ID: 6fdb61
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295744

>With one powerful leap, the monster swoops in the air. And land's ever delicately on the tip of the weapons handle.

I am Niflheim. The ender, The killer, The one all fear... And now, puny elves... You have the honor of dieing by my bear hands... Complete with claws, she snicker's as her sleeve ripples and whirls away, reveling her deformed hand.

>Shaped like knifes, silver and sharp, her fingers have changed into lethal weapons.

Any last words? Mortals!
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No. 295761 ID: 00d3d5

>>295744
To the elves: "You should probably run."
To the girl: "Hey, Miss! D'ya think you could get us out of here?"
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No. 295774 ID: 8c73c8

just say "we're prisoners back here, we are not with them!"
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No. 295794 ID: dc01be

"Why us? We didn't do anything!"
She's clearly stronger than you, try to talk your way out of this. If things really gets serious, open the cage, hopefully the monster can kill her.
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No. 295825 ID: fe2097

>>295794
I doubt the cage can be opened from inside sadly
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No. 295837 ID: dc01be

>>295825
Well, you could tell the elves to do it. Besides, they're hired, they won't throw their lives away just for the sake of completing the mission.
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No. 295866 ID: 00d3d5

>>295774
This is wrong.

>>295794
This is wronger.

If you act like she's supposed to be rescuing you then she'll be more likely to think that's true. Conversely, if you act like you're afraid of her then she'll be more likely to think you're supposed to be afraid of her.
Just be respectful and polite.
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No. 295901 ID: c71597

>>295744
Ask Goldie if she can slip out a small tendril to steal the key while they're distracted.
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No. 296158 ID: 6fdb61
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296158

>>295901

Even if she could. The entire cage is locked to the floor. With the key we could escape, granted... But not unnoticed, We'd have to lift the entire cage to get out. But using her to get the key is not a bad idea.

>>295866

You might be right... She doesn't look quite... Stable? maybe we can manipulate her. Or maybe Goldie can... Birds of a feather?

Only three... Die! He yells pulling the sword from its sheath.
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No. 296162 ID: c71597

>>296158
Well they're either going to be dead or have very many other things on their mind soon. So now is a very good oppurtunity. Get the key and escape.
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No. 296163 ID: 6fdb61
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296163

I CONCUR!!!

>Wailed the monster leaping to her prey, weapons at the ready.

I meant to send these in succession but my computer crashed.
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No. 296164 ID: 00d3d5

>>296163
Ok, yes, lets get the key, then walk back to the tree line and watch the fight while relaxing against a tree.
I don't think running from this girl would work, and she seems feral enough that trying to flee could trigger some sort of hunting response.
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No. 296165 ID: 6fdb61
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296165

>>296162

>Duly noted. whispering in Goldie's ear I suggest stealing the keys... She nod's and slides across the cage... a long an prehensile tendril slowly spring out from her arm and rolls around the key ring tied around the elf's belt. Riddled with fear he's unable to notice the pilfering.

>Niflheim dashes across the dead horse's back and slash's her abominated fingers at the captain. *Clang!* His sword rise's fast, her blow deflected she springs backwards tumbling to find her footing.
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No. 296168 ID: 6fdb61
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296168

>Left flat footed Niflheim slash at the elf, Dodging effortlessly he brings his tool down on her. The monster dashes backwards in a desperate struggle, but in vain... The swordsman leaps past the girl grinding to a halt his weapon extended outwards, The woman falls to her left, but her head doesn't follow. His quivering smile lets loose a crazed giggle.
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No. 296169 ID: 6fdb61

these were supposed to be a .Gif but after several hours of failure I just posted them...
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No. 296177 ID: 8c73c8

well crap. sit tight with that key until the skilled elf is asleep or something.
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No. 296178 ID: 00d3d5

>>296168
Ok, NOW you can run.
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No. 296191 ID: e1c6cb

Ask the elf how they're gonna reach the Coliseum.
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No. 296502 ID: 4d6045
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296502

>>296178

>Running now would not be very wise in my opinion. What ever it was, That thing scared me half to death and he killed it. I don't want him as my adversary... >>296177 This sounds like a better plan.

>>296191

Hey how ar-

>Goldie grasp's me and repeats her famous lines. Pushing her away I manage to get a few words out.

Just how are we gonna get to the coliseum now? The horse is... Not so healthy.

DAB DAB DAB! DAB YREV SEH NETSIL TNOD!

>The frightened elf turns to face us, his skin is pale, eyes wide, mouth hanging with fear... The faint smell of urine emanates from him.

I-i-i... D-don't know... Old Rusty's been... He was always... He's... I-i don't suppose we could... sew it back on... W-we-e'll n-need a m-m-m-ount. I'll use my r-ring to c-charm one... I hear there's some... Some elkbirds near by... Maybe...

DDDAAAABB DAB DAB! EKAC KCUF UOY! NAM A ROF ESUCXE ELBACIPSED ELIV LIVE!
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No. 296511 ID: 8c73c8

okay cool. sit tight while they go try to find a new thing to pull the cage with, then when they are a ways off you open the cage and run.
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No. 296533 ID: 4d6045
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296533

HEEeeelloo... Sang a voice from within the trees.

What's this?! A new monster... Have you come to fight?

nononooo... I'm just a spectator... euhmm... Just saying, It'd be a shame if you died to fast so don't make the same mistake as the others...

What nonsense do you speak monster!?

You might find her a little harder to kill than that... But hey I'm just saying...
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No. 296536 ID: 8c73c8

oh. dang. seems being decapitated didn't kill her.
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No. 296537 ID: 4d6045
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296537

Harder to kill? But it's...

>He turn's just in time to dodge. The decapitated head giggles and laughs in the mud as the headless body flings arms and blades at the elf. They dash, run and jump in all directions. Frightened and confused the captain struggles to keep his defense up. With out a chance to counter he take's a hit. dodge's, parries takes another hit, and another...

>Shit... Just when you get a plan going... Gonna have to consider other possible outcomes... Or just sit back and wait...
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No. 296538 ID: 00d3d5

>>296533
She's not dead? Ok, yea, get out of the cage then wander off to sit under that spectator's tree.
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No. 296543 ID: 4d6045
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296543

>Finding an opening he strikes hard... But it's for not, the elf fell for the feint. effortlessly the monster counter's with a mighty kick that sends the elf flying back a good few feet. rising to his feet only to witness the last moments of his life passing before his eyes, Niflheim lands on the elf impaling his head on her claws. He lets out a horrible shriek before falling to the ground, motionless.

hehehe... Face it!
>Said the head
You don't have the brains to fight me... Should of quit while you were ahead... hiheehee... HAHAHAHA!!!

>The remaining elf trembles... Crying and stuttering gibberish, he mumbles "no" amongst other things... The sent of urine is even more present.

>>296538

>I'm considering it... The thought of removing what little defense separates me and that thing horrifies me. But I can see why your plan would work... Can elves fight without they're head?... Just saying...
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No. 296545 ID: 8c73c8

no elf that we know of. and whatever the girl is, it is clearly not a normal creature.
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No. 296550 ID: 00d3d5

>>296543
She just shoved her fingers straight through somebody's skull. Your cage doesn't keep her away, it keeps you there.
Seriously, go sit with the spectator and strike up a conversation. They aren't worried, and they've said outright they've watched her kill things before. You're safest sitting there; just act like this sort of thing is a regular event for you.
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No. 296611 ID: c71597

>>296543
Really, you thought it would stay down just because the head wasn't attached anymore? If it was that easy then people would have cleared out this place long before now. Elves have a harder time to fight after someone stabs them in the brain though.

And do you think that cage would stop her for even a second? If she decides to kill you then there's not much you would be able to do to stop her. But it would be better to be out of the cage, gives a bit more options.
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No. 297607 ID: e43834
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297607

>>296550
>>296611

>Ok I run over the plans with Goldie... She nods and starts unlocking the cage. Niflheim's Stumbling towards her head when she gets them unlocked... Goldie tilts the cage just enough for me to crawl out. The elf is paralyzed with fear, unable to follow us we make an expeditious retreat... Niflheim's decapitated body rises her laughing head and places it on her bloodied shoulders, still laughing she walk's crookedly towards the cage... Fortunately we managed to escape her deranged gaze...

>leaned against the tree that hold the spectator, I take a large and long breath... Now I just have to feel at ease. Goldie seems to be good at this. She cuddles up against my arm, resting her head on mine...

nrewQ uoy knaht... enoyna truh ot tnaw tnod I

>I've never heard Goldie speak so softly... I try to strike up a conversation with the spectator... But his gaze is transfixed by the monster. mesmerized by her laughter...

Hello?

>He snap's out of it... Ok, but what to say? I'm just not sure.
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No. 297610 ID: 8c73c8

"so does this happen often?"
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No. 297614 ID: e43834
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297614

>>297610

so does this happen often?

... No... Not anymore... She used to have fun like this every day. But now no one ever comes though here... It's nice to hear her laugh...

>She grasps the last elf's head and slams it into peaces against the cage. Grinding whats left against the coarse bars... The gruesome sounds are just barely covered by her amusement.

Are you gonna fight her?

NO! I'm not planning on getting my self killed.

wise... As much as she loves to fight... I'd like there to be less... Death.
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No. 297619 ID: c71597

>>297614
Ask if he has ever tried to move her? There should be places where she can have fun and the death will be... say more deserving maybe? Or atleast less disturbing. Should be arenas where she can fight against monstrous animals and the like. Should still be amusing for her as well as for an audience.

Oh, and I guess you could ask what and who he is.
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No. 297620 ID: 8c73c8

nice eyes.
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No. 297758 ID: e43834
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297758

>>297620
I like your eyes.

Thanks

>>297619
Has she ever considered leaving here? joining a Colosseum maybe? I'm sure she'd be more than welcome.

*sigh*... Yes as a matter of fact she has... Niflheim wants to leave, she wants to explore the world... But she can't... She's bound to this forest. Until someone can beat her and become her master, she's stuck here... Oh but if she asks, I didn't tell you. She never tells anyone about her wanting to leave. I only know because I spy on her when she sings... If she found out She'd beat me black and green.

I see... Say, just what are you? I mean... What's your name? Mine's Qwern and this is Goldie...

hehe... I'm Ukobach, pleasure to meet you two... As for the first question, well it may not look like it, but I'm in fact a flame eater...

>wouldn't be able to tell even if it did look like it... Oh speaking of flames, once I get out of here I have to look for Cunny. Maybe she passed through here?

Say you wouldn't happen to have seen a bold though here would you? About this tall, female, Red shirt... Probably on fire... Blue fire.

hmm... Nope, but maybe someone in town did... You can stay the night if you want. It's just a short walk from here.
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No. 297763 ID: c71597

>>297758
Inquire about what sort of town that is. Also, ask how one beats Nifleheim? Might be handy to have her along if there is some weakness we could exploit to beat her. Or if she could just talked into surrendering the fight and that would still be good enough.

Oh, and you could probably also ask what a flame eater is.
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No. 297767 ID: 8c73c8

>>297763
doubt it, challenge her and she kills you before you can say anything. so let's not try. ask about non-combat challenges. like would beating her at chess count?
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No. 297771 ID: c71597

>>297767
That's why we ask this guy about weaknesses and chances to talk her into surrendering before issuing any challenges.
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No. 297823 ID: 45503e

>>297758
Become less certain of your sexuality every moment you look at him.
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No. 297827 ID: 00d3d5

>>297758
"S'yer sweet on 'er? S'pose yeh already tried challengin' her ta somethin' 'sides fightin' then.

Err... Should we go an' introduce ourselves, or wait in town f' her ta calm down first?"
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No. 297929 ID: 47d1aa

Whats our goal? Do we have one

a mainquest would help dirrect us so we dont go off running around town doing nothing. like in that other story...
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No. 297936 ID: e43834
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297936

>>297767
>>297763
A town? What kind of town?

It's a small place... Just for monsters. Most of em folks are real nice.

A monster town?

Yup, Niflheim built it years ago. Since then lots of retired monsters came to visit, but never left.

Say, just how does one beat her? She got decapitated but that didn't do much. Can she give up?

no... She can't. As long as she without order to do so, she has to fight... Until she looses.

But does it have to be fights? could I... errr... someone challenge her to a game of chess of a battle of wits?

I don't know... I don't think anyone's ever tried... Most folks that come by are either not interested in her or come for the treasure.

ahhh... Say, Just what is a flame eater?

We're just like any other typical demon, tall, strong, horned monsters... We flame eaters hail from the burning mountains of dormoun. Well They're all like that, I'm about two feet smaller than the rest and only have three horns. Still, I eat fire like any other of my kind. A trait unique to us flame eaters.

>>297823
>Nah I'm pretty strait.

>>297827
>... Wut?

>>297929
>Goals... Right now I'm looking for a place to rest. But Cunny is my quest. By the power of love I will find her. Also I always keep my promises... And I promised her ale, so that goes on the list. I'm not sure what to make of Goldie... Just where does she fit in all this and what do I do with her. I am how ever, very curious about who and what she is.
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No. 297958 ID: c71597

>>297936
Well that town sounds like a decent place to rest for a day or two. Ask him if Niflheim is talktative, or if it's generally possible to talk with her.
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No. 297967 ID: 00d3d5

>>297936
"How about you try challenging her to a flame-eating contest?
... Over dinner, since those elves weren't the best hosts."
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>>297958
>You think? Staying with monsters worries me, but its your call... You've never steered me wrong before.

How talkative is Niflheim? Can you get a few words in, or does she just kill you on the spot?

Ask her your self...

>Just then I noticed the looming shadow. Niflheim stood there smiling, blood coating her neck and hand.

HI! You were in the cage right?

>Shivers run down my spine, I nod in worry... Trying to pretend she's not there I keep talking to Ukobach.

>>297967
How about a flame eating contest? You could tell her over diner, since those elves weren't the best hosts. Not like she'd have a chance. hehee...

>Gosh darn it! I just said that out loud... I can't keep my mouth shut when I'm worried.

Oh hey! They were talking about something like that.

The voices again?

Well they're gone now... But just a moment ago we talked about stuff... They suggested the claws.
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No. 298114 ID: 8c73c8

her to? well then now you have something in common. you BOTH have voices in your head telling you to do things! let's be friends on that basis.
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No. 298130 ID: 00d3d5

>>298110
"Nice to meet you, Niflheim. I'm Qwern, and this is Goldie.
Er... Think you could clean up a bit? Goldie's not so good around blood."
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No. 298147 ID: c71597

>>298110
She has headvoices as well? Actually that's not too surprising. She seems a bit crazy after all.

Looks like she wants a high five. Don't leave her hanging bro. And thank her for saving you from those elves.
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No. 298279 ID: 8ac290

Hmm....

Niflheim: Wipe your bloody hand off on your coat. Then shake hands with the dwarf and introduce yourself.
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>>298279
>Are you trying to tell her what to do? Hmm... Might work, You did ask Cunny to help back then didn't you? Let's watch... Niflheim stares in awe at Goldie, confused and intrigued by her. Goldie hide's her face against my chest in fear. She doesn't seem to notice your commands.

>>298114
>>298147
>I guess being friends is better than getting on her bad side.

Thank you for saving us from those elves. It was really kind of you.

My pleasure! Shame they didn't give me any trouble though, would have been nice to actually have to try.

hehe... yeah... Y-You know I have head voices to, so you're not alone here.

REALLY! wow... does that make us voice buddies?

If you want...

>This is going better than expected... At this rate we'll be out of here in no time.

>>298130
My name is Qwern and this is Goldie. It nice to meet you. Er... Think you could clean up a bit? Goldie's not so good around blood.

Ahh... Sorry...

>She wipe's the blood off on her coat, looking embarrassed she stare's at Goldie.

Just what are you? I've never smelt anything like you before. And I know my monsters...
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No. 299380 ID: d83f11

>>299378
"We aren't sure. Goldie may be one of a kind. I'm not sure if she's a monster, though. She can be dangerous but she's not malicious."
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No. 299381 ID: 00d3d5

>>299378
"I was kinda hoping to know myself.
Maybe somebody in town would know?"

I'm kinda wondering why Ukobach hasn't challenged her to a fire eating contest. I really want to see that happen. :D
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>>299380
We aren't sure. Goldie may be one of a kind. I'm not sure if she's a monster, though. She can be dangerous but she's not malicious.

I seee... Hey Ukobach, how you keeping?

I'm ok
>He say's jumping down from the tree. Just as soon as he hits the floor however the young girl grabs him by the neck and grind's her knuckles against his skull.

Hahahaha... You're so weak I wanna just crush yah.

Ow! Stop it Niflheim...

>Maybe I can change the subject?

>>299381
I was kinda hoping to know myself.
Maybe somebody in town would know?

Oh good idea... But it's a bit late, oh well you can sleep in my house. You'll ask around tomorrow.

eh? wait shouldn't they stay at my place? It's big enough for all of us and besides where would you sleep?

I saved them, they're my guests so They have to stay at my place. I'll just sleep with you...
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No. 299401 ID: 8c73c8

hahaha. she likes him so much she just refuses to admit it. anyway, finally some sleep sounds good.
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No. 299417 ID: d83f11

>>299397
There's something childish about Niflheim. Of course combined with her abilities this makes her very, very dangerous. Teasing about them sleeping together could be a bad idea.

That said, ask about the rules in town/her home. No point getting run out of town or eaten over little things.
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No. 299439 ID: c71597

>>299397
Accept her offer. She can survive decapitation, she can do whatever the fuck she wants and there's not a god damn thing you can do to stop it. So smile and accept.

Once you're there you should try to get some food in you, and maybe some booze as well, and then get some sleep. Last few days should have been rather stressful and some real rest and relaxation should be welcome.
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>>299417
before we go. Are there some rules in town I should know about?

Not really... Treat it like any other little village, respect the villagers, don't break or steal anything... you know...

And don't touch the treasure! If you so much as look at it funny I'll rip you a new one!

ok... I'll remember that.

oh! Now that I think about it, the villagers might not like the sight of you at first... Just stick with us and you'll be fine, just don't wonder off without us.

>>299439
>the two demons lead us through the forest towards a little village, the entire town in centered around a stone well. Three buildings tower above the rest: a large construction with long windows resides to the north of the well, inside there's plenty of tables and chairs, it looks like and inn of some sort and a market can be seen in another room, atop the windows large letters spell: Hell's half acre.

I work here... Monday through Friday I work the fryers.

>to the south there's a solid looking place, The door is lined with bars and no window can be found...

This is where we keep all the treasure. It's not mine, but I'm in charge of keeping it safe.

>to the west there's a clock tower. painted purple it marks 1:27... There's only one hand and it doesn't move, the entire face turns counter clockwise... Niflheim show's us to her home, it's small... Nothing's strait on it, the walls are made of wooden planks that seem to have been cut crookedly. The entire house creaks with every step, But oddly enough it seems quite stable.

make yourself at home. I'll see you tomorrow

>looking for some eat and drink I quickly stumble into the pantry, it wasn't hard to find... there's only four rooms in this place. Dried meat and various unidentified jams and liquids adorn the shelf's and cupboards. Couldn't find any booze but I helped myself to what I presume is dried lizard.
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>>299401
>Sleep is what I'm really here for... Niflheim's room is surprisingly normal... No blood or skulls... There's a table with books and pens, shelves and lockers. Her bed resides just under the window where little plushies sit. The cover's down and hand stitched. Every thing about this whole house has a homemade feel to it... Goldie get comfortable as soon as we enter the room. I strip down to my pants and get under the covers... Ahh... the feel of wool mattress after three days of sleeping on a metal floor... No more than three moments before I'm out like a light... drifting slowly to the dreamland...
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No. 299763 ID: 8c73c8

good night qwern.
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299772

I meant to post this right after the last, but things got in the way

Chapter-2 day-2

character select

~Goldie
~Qwern
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No. 299777 ID: 8c73c8

well, let's go with goldie now. qwern seems to be doing fine now that he isn't tired and captured by stinking elves.
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No. 299792 ID: 00d3d5

>>299772
Goldie, since I want to see if she hears everything backwards.
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No. 299795 ID: 3e7d65

goldie could be interesting
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No. 299859 ID: f9fd46

Goldie.
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>The morning sun brings warmth to my cold body... Chirping birds sing from all directions... My precious dwarf is still asleep... His subtle breathing slowly pulsates his body... Oh what shall I do as I wait for him to wake?
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No. 300040 ID: 0bd0b0

>>300038
Contemplate your relationship with Qwern.
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No. 300041 ID: 0e3714

Play with a plushie.
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No. 300048 ID: 8c73c8

yes, those toys look fun to play with. and you can use them to act out what you wish to be.
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>>300040
>My relationship with Qwern? What of it?.. He's been by my side since day one. He's special to me. He promised to protect me and I'm going to protect him to. Qwern's like a little brother to me... Or maybe more like a big brother... But these days I feel something more... Like a spark that wont go out...
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No. 300072 ID: 5327bf

>>300063

He's your first friend, as far as we know, so that may have something to do with how you feel.


I hope this isn't a downer to ask but: Do you remember anything from before Qwern rescuing you? Perhaps why you were there?
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>>300072
>yeah... we're, just friends... Silly me, such a great person could never love a viscous monster like myself...

>I remember blood, bodies... I remember killing mercilessly... Crying... I wasn't moving on my own... A puppet to my master... I don't know who he was... It's all so blurry... There was another, like me... He was a rabbit. I still see his grotesque smile in my dreams. I remember his laugh, he loved the strings that bound us to fight... To slaughter... Innocent women and children... I would cry and moan for it to stop, but in vain, my body simply did what it was designed to do... It's almost as if my fear and sadness powered the killing... I remember when we paused... A windmill... It was important... A song gave us rest... And comfort, like a mother singing our favorite lullaby... Try as may I simply cannot remember the words... or the tune... It wanders in my head like a song firmly stuck, but I know nothing of it... As if I've never heard it... This all confuses me so. But its all just... Bad memories... I'm safe here with Qwern... He'll protect me from it all... I know it.
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No. 300988 ID: 00d3d5

>>300983
Viscosity is hardly a problem; if you were less firm then he wouldn't really be able to hold you at all.

He likes you, and has been trying to help you. I don't know if he like-likes you or just normal-likes you, but he thinks of you as a person that happens to physically be some species of monster. He doesn't think you're very monstrous at all; those elves were the stuff of nightmares compared to you.

Also, you're not responsible for things that happened when you had no free will. You didn't do any of that stuff; it was somebody else and you are simply cursed with the memories of it.
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No. 300989 ID: 8c73c8

also, he has kinda was too busy freaking out in that cage to think about romance. maybe now that he doesn't feel like he is gonna die at the drop of a hat he could be persuaded.
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>>300988
>I guess I should be at least thankful I still have some solidity...

>how could he like-like some one like me..? Granted I'm nice... But I'm a vile monster... A murderer... I'm on the same level as that Niflheim... At least she's normal looking most of the time...

>Maybe so... I don't feel, I can ever clean my blood stained hands... Nore can I bring back my victims...

>>300989
>... True... But still, I can't speak to him... My words are twisted and warped into slurred nonsense... I can't even understand what I say... Well... If I speak slowly maybe it's worth a try...

hmmm... *Sigh*

>Qwern wake's slowly, his eyes peering hazely into the unfamiliar room.
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No. 301051 ID: a4c0ff

>>301039
Hug him.
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No. 301053 ID: 8c73c8

could try talking backwards.

"doog gninrom"
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No. 301055 ID: 7f017c

>>301051
agreed, everyone loves hugs.
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No. 301139 ID: c71597

>>301039
Now now, the vile monster was never you. That was the one controlling you. You're a pretty sweet girl. And he can learn, it's still language, he will learn to understand it eventually.

Now cheer up, he's been through a lot as well and I'm sure he would be happy to wake up to you smiling.
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No. 301157 ID: 00d3d5

>>301039
"on the same level as Niflheim"

Now that's just a bald-faced lie. Niflheim relishes slaughter, but you're horrified by it. Niflheim feels no guilt or regret for things she chose to do, but you're overcome by both for things you didn't choose to do. People are defined by their choices; you're not a vile monster at all, you're just a sort of slime creature that's no less a victim than the ones you feel guilt over.

Now, try saying this:
"Love"

If it comes out backwards, than say
"evol"

If that doesn't sound right, then try
"vuhl"

We'll figure this out yet.
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>>301157
>>301139
>Your right... I didn't want to do anything wrong, I'm a good person at heart, and that's all that matters. Thank you for being here for me.

>>301053
>>301051

GNINROM DOOG!

>Wrapping my arms around Qwern I hold him tight against my chest. His skin is warm and soft, he sink's into me slightly... Odd I meant to say doog gninrom.

ehh! Goldie... Your... eum..

>He seems a bit nervous... I wonder why?

Evol

what?..

Evol evol

>hmmm... well that is quite the predicament... I tried saying it all the ways you said, but it's always the same... This curse is odd... AHH! I remember now, its a curse... That rabbit said I talked to much and put it on me.
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No. 301240 ID: 8c73c8

can you write? maybe someone in town knows how to break curses? for now slow it down and enunciate very slowly.
try asking if he is feeling better after sleeping.

also he is nervous cause your boobs touched him.
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No. 301242 ID: c71597

>>301224
You're just going to hope for him to learn to understand you the regular way. Might take a few weeks, but it should definately be doable. You don't have to rush things. You're both free now and both of you are safe, let things move at their own pace.

Now let him go and lets go look for some food.
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No. 301261 ID: 00d3d5

>>301224
There's always body language.
Get in front of him, put his hand where your heart would be and your hand where his heart is, then move in and kiss him on the forehead.
Then say "I love you, Qwern"

Dya know how to break the curse?
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>>301240
>Ohh Writing. Good idea... I'll look into that, Hmmm... Yeah maybe some one here knows how to break the curse... I sure don't...

Peels llew?

Ehh... Yeah... It's nice to sleep in a bed.

suovren? Ym stsaerb?

...

>He doesn't look like he got all that

>>301261
>Ok lets give this a try... I turn Qwern around and grab his arm... Placing it on my bosom I pull him in. His hand sink's through my breast and into my body, he look's very nervous. His little fingers fumble around inside me, it tickles... Ok his hand is where my heart should be... I think putting my hands where his heart is may be a bit dangerous... either way... I glide my hand to his chest...

*Grumble!*

ahh... You're hungry. Why didn't you just say so? You can be so odd at times.

>Qwern slip's away quickly and stumbles out the door.

>>301242
>hmmm... We really have communication problems here... But we'll learn to understand each other with time. He's right though... I'm hungry.
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No. 301451 ID: c71597

>>301435
So lets get some food then. And you can talk with him along the way. Doesn't have to be meaningful conversation. Just talk with him and it will make it faster for him to learn.
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>Walking down the rickety stairs, a singing voice is heard.

♪Tender lumplings everywhere
Life's no fun with out a good scare♫
♫It's our job but we're not mean
In this town of Niflheim♪♫...

>Qwern and I walk into the kitchen to find Ukobach... Cooking? Fire, eggs and bread dance around in mid air as he sing's and dance's. A wave of delicious breakfast smell hits us as if sealed inside a bubble.

♪Ni-Fl-Heim is queen of our little town
Everyone hail to the mon-ster queen now!♫
this is♫- oh! Didn't see you there... Did my singing wake you?
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No. 301469 ID: 00d3d5

>>301455
"No. When will you challenge her to a cooking contest? Or a fire eating contest?
Oh, and can anybody here break curses?"
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No. 301476 ID: c71597

>>301455
Say that you woke from being hungry, and point out that his buttcrack is showing.

Ask if there is anything you can do around here to help after you have had some food.
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No. 301626 ID: 8c73c8

hmm.. shortest way to say it would be "dress nice for her?" saying he dresses like that to try and catch Niflheim's eye. anyway yes you are hungry. over breakfast ask "anyone break curse?"
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>Wow wait I'm naked. And here I thought I was alone here with Qwern... I quickly pull up my dress... heeh, if you think about it I'm still quite naked since my clothes are only my body shaped differently... Oh well its the thought that counts.
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>Ukobach walks over and give's us the food, reveling the large bruise around his eye.

ouch... What happened?

Niflheim woke me up with a few punches... Sleep well?

Yes, thanks

Sserd ecin rof reh?

what was that?

oh she doesn't talk right... Not sure why.

ESRUC!

What did she say?

I think she said curse

Enoyna kaerb esruc?

anyone break curse? euh... Can anyone around here break curses?

Tabitha twitch maybe? Eat up first, we'll look around for your girl and twitch when you're all dressed up and ready for a walk on the town.

Knaht
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No. 301741 ID: c71597

>>301735
See, he's learning. Also, try to talk a bit slower, gives him more time to sort through what you're trying to say.

And it seems they have a witch, or a twitch, whatever the difference is. Might be helpful, just make sure you learn of all possible side effects of the curse-removal, and also about what effects the curse has aside from the speach impediment. Might be set up so that removing the curse would kill you. A few of the more diabolical ones are set up that way.
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No. 301788 ID: 8c73c8

okay cool, let's eat up and get ready for exploring and curse breaking.
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>>301741
>oohhh... I never thought of it that way. Good thing you told me, I was just gonna rush into any method offered. I hope nothing bad happens.

>>301788
>Qwern and I look around town asking passerby's if they had seen the Cunny. Qwern speaks pretty highly of it... Wonder what it is? Peoples in this town are really nice... But they have sharp teeth. It's like its a trend or something...

Have you seen a bold?.. About this tall, yellow eyes, red shirt?.. She has blue fire sometimes. Her name's Cunny... Have you seen her?.. Excuse me?..

>I don't think peoples here are used to dwarf... They look a little jumpy...
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302876

Blue fire?
>said a voice not to far off
The blue fire? Ogamorai, the one that burns only cloths?

>Qwern noticed the raspy voice

ohhh... I remember the first time TorasKeshan played that one on me

>I turn to see the source of the rant... It's an old haggetty man... Woman... I'm not quite sure... It's green skin is littered with boils and warts... Wonder if it knows anything?
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No. 302889 ID: 00d3d5

>>302876
Walk over to her!
"Hello! You seem to know about curses, so can you tell me anything about this backwards-talking one I have?"
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No. 302901 ID: b35ac3

>>302876
Let's ask her about curses. Something short, like "Break Curse?" and pointing at yourself should make the message clear.
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No. 302935 ID: f0e3ae

where is Qwern 1 quest? I can't find a link in this thread, nor is it in the wiki... and searching for threads by title doesn't seem to be an option
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No. 302970 ID: c71597

>>302876
Hey, that's probably the twitch. Oh, clever name, sort of.

Anyway, ask it if it knows about magic.
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No. 302971 ID: 8c73c8

get qwern to translate for you.
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No. 303004 ID: e43834

chapter 1: http://quest.lv/kusaba/questarch/res/248501.html
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>>302889
>>302901
>I jolt over to the twitch... witch... what ever...

Esruc kaerb?

What was that dear?

ESRUC![/i]
>I yell pointing at myself

esruc? Why hello Esruc. What can I do for you?

>>302971
>*sigh* I get Qwern to talk for me...

[b]Esruc kaerb


euh... Break curse...

your cursed? Well what's wrong little man?

oh! Not me, her.

ohhh I see... Well whats wrong?

She talk's backwards... She says its a curse of some kind...

I see well lets take a look. Open wide miss Esruc

>The witch pries my mouth open and fumbles her lanky fingers in it. Her sour skin nearly makes me hurl... She quickly inspects the saliva off her fingers, smelling it, feeling it and finally tasting it...

Ahh... Simple simple! It's a gen4 curse. Easy little buggers to undo. All you need is true love's first kiss... I know, kitsch isn't it?
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No. 303008 ID: 8c73c8

oh, well then, simple enough. don't just go smooching anyone now. do you think qwern is that true love or are you unsure?
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No. 303010 ID: b32bed

>>303006
Pull Qwern to you and give him a big kiss on the lips.
Just trust us on this.
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No. 303039 ID: c71597

>>303006
Ok, remember what we said. Before you do anything now, ask if that love has to go both ways and what effects of breaking your curse would be. Side effects and so on. These are important things to know before you do anything.
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No. 303045 ID: 980ade

>>303039

Nice thinking. You can never now with these witches.
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No. 303222 ID: f0e3ae

blush, furiously.
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>>303010
>I pick up Qwern and bring him to my lips. His beard tickles my face as I lock our mouths in a long kiss... I figure a simple kiss on the lips would do the trick, but I'm not risking anything... His warm breath flows into my mouth as I press him in against me... I feel like I'm melting... Qwern meld's effortlessly into me... I can feel him... inside of me... I love this feeling, I want to keep kissing for ever...

>>303008
>Yes! Qwern... I love him... I know it, I feel it... Unsealing our lips, her gasps for breath...

*pant*... Uoy evol I...

...

>>303039
>FUCK. I should have listened to you before doing that! It was just the first thing to pass through my mind!

>Qwern look's at me with shocked eyes...

>>303222
>Done...
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No. 303359 ID: 00d3d5

>>303354
Look at the witch with concern and say "It didn't work!"
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No. 303376 ID: c71597

>>303354
Well you're not dead and he's not slimey. Try saying something and getting him to talk. Might be one of those curses that are transfered to the one that solve them.
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No. 303433 ID: f0e3ae

mmm... actually I think it needs to be mutual love.
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No. 303444 ID: bc502e

attempt to inquire about what the hell just happened
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>>303359
>I ask the witch about the kiss.

Krow t'ndid ti?

hmmm..? what was that? you probably just aren't in love... It needs to be true loves kiss

>Love... I'm not in love?.. Then what am I? What do I feel? What is this?

hmmmnnnn... Well in my experience true love is just a word given to love of someone who loves you

>So its Qwern who doesn't love... Or maybe I'm not in love... Maybe I'm the one ruining all this... No... I'm at fault... Qwern doesn't love... How could he?.. I'm nothing more than monster... A demon... I'm repulsive... How could he love me? I even killed Guss... He fought to save Qwern and I killed him... I don't deserve his love... I don't deserve to break this curse...
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No. 303656 ID: 8c73c8

NO, no moping. you will figure out why qwern doesn't love you the way you love him and fix it. h isn't afraid of you but until know he probably didn't even think about you like that, probably thought of you as a sister or something. i mean, you called him brother, remember?
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303660

>>303656
>It's no use... He doesn't love me because I'm horrible... It would be best if I just disappeared... Never to be seen again... I don't deserve friends... I don't deserve to live... All I do is cause sadness... All I can do is... Horrible...
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No. 303665 ID: 2104b8
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>Why does all this happen to me?.. Why can't I just be happy?.. What's wrong with me... What's... Wrong... every thing's... always...
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No. 303668 ID: 2104b8
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>I just... I... I... Just...

... *sniff* ... I... Tsuj...
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No. 303674 ID: 2104b8
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303674

Ahh... Simple simple! It's a gen4 curse. Easy little buggers to undo. All you need is true love's first kiss... I know, kitsch isn't it?

>Goldie pick's me up and presses her lips against mine. our mouths lock in a kiss... Her cold skin sends shivers down my through. She's pulling me closer, I can feel her... Inside of her. her frigid breath tastes like garlicky bread. The saliva... Its so cold and thick... Our mouths unseal. I'm gasping for breath...

*pant*... Uoy evol I...

>She looks at me with sadden eyes... Blushing furiously...
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No. 303683 ID: 8c73c8

i am pretty damn sure there is no ifs ands or buts about that, she loves you qwern, now, do you think you could love her? if you aren't sure then tell her "i'm sorry, i never thought about you like that before. i don't know what to think"
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No. 303685 ID: 00d3d5

>>303674
She's thinks your her true love!
This is complicated! YAY!
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No. 303687 ID: c71597

>>303674
She attempted to break the curse. Didn't think things over before jumping ahead though. So it didn't work, and she's really going to need a friend now. Don't let her get away, stay with her and assure her that you don't think she's a gross monster.
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No. 303813 ID: f0e3ae

>>303674
>>303687
The poor thing is freaking out, probably because she feels you hate her and that's why it didn't work, you need to do something...

I... I like you, but true love takes a lot longer than that to grow.

And remember, you can love more then one woman!
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No. 304254 ID: 2104b8
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>>303687
>I see... I'm confused but you seem to understand. I'll follow your words.

hmmm..? what was that? you probably just aren't in love... It needs to be true loves kiss

>>303685
>Indeed.

hmmmnnnn... Well in my experience true love is just a word given to love of someone who loves you

>>303683
>>303813
>I don't know if I can love her... She's... So different... She killed Guss! But I... I can't hate her... I feel like I should but I can't...

I'm sorry, I never thought about you like that before. I don't know what to think... I... I like you, but true love takes a lot longer than that to grow.

>More than one?.. Hmmn... That could work out... Maybe...
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No. 304255 ID: 35e1a0

she still seems dejected, give her a hug.
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No. 304257 ID: bc502e

hugs cure all
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No. 304262 ID: c71597

>>304254
A hug is probably the best response right now. After that, just stay with her and talk a bit with her. Doesn't have to be hugely important things, you can talk a bit about how it was back a the fort or just a bit about whatever you feel like. Guss is probably not a good subject to bring up though.
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No. 304318 ID: dcc6e1

>>304255
>>304257
>>304262
Moar huuuuugs
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No. 304848 ID: 2104b8
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>>304255
>>304257
>>304318
>>304262
>I move in for a hug. Squeezing her tightly in my arms, I accidentally sink in quite a bit. I've never felt her so liquid. Her skin is cold and ery... But its warm inside... I've never noticed how nice it is inside of her...

You know it's not so bad... I could get used to you like this... Your cold body will likely be quite nice during the hot summer nights. And at least you're somewhat solid, otherwise I could never hold you. I remember back at the fort... The... The bedrooms were very small... And... Well actually I was only there for one day so I don't have much to talk about.

... *sniff* ... I... Tsuj...

You what?

>I look up to see her crying eyes. Scarlet tears drop on my face.
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No. 304852 ID: 2104b8
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304852

RETSNOM A EB OT TNAW TNOD I!!!

>Horrors unleashed. Her forms loose shape and lashes out in all directions.

THW?! EM YHW! REFFUS I OD YHW?!

>Her voice is loud and horrifying. Just like the first time we meet. Her teary eye cracks open on one side. quickly filling with red, eye... Stuff. What remains of her shape pulls and pushes me further into her, I struggle to escape but in vain. All is black, muffled sounds of crashing and breaking ring ever so slightly around me... I can't move... Every where is so... Warm... I could just... I could sleep...
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No. 304854 ID: 31f32d

>>304852
then you pass out and choke... tickle her, quick, then get your face out to breath
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No. 304867 ID: 35e1a0

yell, "if you don't let me go then you will prove you are a monster"
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No. 304871 ID: c71597

>>304852
Um yeah, don't fall asleep, bad things might happen if you do. Have to try to get her to calm down, and then still be her friend when she does, otherwise she won't get any better. Getting her to calm down, now that's a bit tricky. If you can still talk to her then say that you still don't think she's a monster.
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No. 304877 ID: 0d7a83

Goddamn it! She's messing up your beard! I dont care who it is you CANNOT just let that stand.
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No. 305080 ID: 2104b8
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305080

>>304867
if you don't let me go then you will prove you are a monster!

>... Were am I?... My head feels like it got smashed real hard...
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No. 305081 ID: 35e1a0

behind you. think you are in a dreamscape.
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No. 305115 ID: c71597

>>305080
Hey looks like you're dreaming, or rather you're in someone elses mind or memories. Bet that's Goldie behind you, lets go over and say hello.
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No. 305199 ID: 8ac290

THE MOOOOOOON no just kidding.
I think you are in Goldie's mind, and behind you is probably what she looked like before... whatever made her like this.

Go talk to her.
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No. 305311 ID: 2104b8
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>>305115
>>305199
>I approach the somewhat vivid Goldie. Her golden hair flowing ever gently in the wind.

Hi there. Haven't seen you around theses parts.

euh... Yeah... Where are we? Is this a dream?

Dunno, but the sun's sunny and the wind's windy. I like it here. It's nice.

I guess... You're looking... Colorful today.

Teehee Thanks.

>Talk... Talk about what? What is there to talk about?
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No. 305313 ID: 35e1a0

ask why you are here.
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No. 305315 ID: 8ac290

>>305311
Uh.... Feelings?

It seems this Goldie is separate from the Goldie you know, though, so, uh...
I have no idea.
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No. 305319 ID: c71597

>>305311
Wow, that's almost absurdly golden hair. So, stuff to talk about eh?

Guess you could start of with asking her something about herself. I mean now she's not talking funny or anything, so if there is ever a time to get information from her then it's now. So start asking her stuff.
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No. 305341 ID: 7dda9a

>>305311
This is goldie as she wished herself...
I guess...

Just talk with her.
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No. 305414 ID: 0bd0b0

"So, uh.. I think I'm inside you right now. But not in that way. Could you wake up before I die?"
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No. 306178 ID: b6ca92

>>305311
WARNING:
if she is in here, then who's controlling the outside? Unless I'm mistaken, she's gone into monster mode again...
In a town of monsters...
Welp, hope they don't kill you both during her rampage.
>>305313
Never ask 'why', silly. You always ask 'how'!
If you just ask 'why' all you get is the idea, but the 'how' of something gives you the reality, and then the 'why' is easy enough to extrapolate from there.
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No. 306314 ID: 2104b8
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306314

So, uh.. I think I'm inside you right now. But not in that way. Could you wake up before I die?

You wont die.

But I'm drowning!

you're not drowning. you're just inside me. You're safe there.

>>305313
why am I here? How am I here?!

I want to protect you Qwern, so I brought you here. Isn't it nice here?

ok but how am I here?

TeeHee! I don't know. The magic of friendship? Power of love maybe?

>>305319
So... You... You love me?

Yes... At first I only saw you like a brother. But now... Now I see you as so much more.

so that's the way of it...

How do you see me?

I'm not sure... I need to think about it...

>>306178
If you're here with me... The who's doing all the damage outside?

anger... anger and sorrow... Just stay here with me. when I'll be calm you'll wake up.
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No. 306326 ID: c71597

>>306314
Oh, you know you should probably ask if there's any way for her to rein in anger and sorrow. If Nifleheim gets involved with fighting Goldie then neither of you are likely to ever wake up again. And that would be boring for a variety of reasons.
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No. 306336 ID: 35e1a0

"just because something doesn't go just how you like is no reason to get upset. getting mad cause i was surprised is silly."
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No. 306768 ID: 2104b8
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>>306326
Hey... Could you... wake us up even though you're not quite calm outside? The way things are going, I'm afraid you won't ever calm down... Not if Niflheim get's involved.

hhmmnnn... You're right. Niflheim and I are unstoppable... If we fight. Goldie might never calm down... Hay! that means we can stay here! for ever!

>>306336
Listen, just because something doesn't go just how you like is no reason to get upset. getting mad cause I was surprised is silly.

I know, I'm sorry. Some times I get really really mad or really really happy just like that, just at the slightest thing.
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No. 306770 ID: 35e1a0

but holding something forever and ever isn't love that's fear and jealousy. afraid that someone else would take your thing from you, so you hide it from the world. and look, instead of trying to find a way to get me to fall in love with you you got angry. you could of just tried asking me out on a date or something.
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No. 307866 ID: 2104b8
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307866

>You stand next to her and place your hand on her shoulder.

>>306770
but holding something forever and ever isn't love that's fear and jealousy. afraid that someone else would take your thing from you, so you hide it from the world. and look, instead of trying to find a way to get me to fall in love with you you got angry. you could of just tried ask... *Agk!*
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No. 307867 ID: 2104b8
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307867

>searing agony! you're shrouded in darkness... The cold steel and burning pain, stings just like a few days ago... No... Worst, strait through your shoulder. Blood pours freely from the wound.
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No. 307878 ID: 35e1a0

grab on to the whatever it is and hold on. only idea i have.
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No. 307925 ID: bc502e

dont know what happenned but it seems to have knocked you out of goldie's little wonderland. try swimming out of her, if your body responds that is
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No. 307927 ID: c71597

>>307867
Ouch, you're going to need some magical healing for that one. Probably Niflheim who got a big stabhappy.

Might be enough to snap Goldie out of it.
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>>307925
>seems so...

>>307878
>you grab the steel as it trashes left and right, pulling you with it. Light engulfs you as you emerge from the darkness. the swinging force launches you to the ground.

HAHAHaaaa! Caesarean section Biatch! AHAHAHA!...

>>307927
ehhhh... Yup... well at least Niflheim's having a good time. But goldie's not showing sign of backing down. WE have to stop them. If not it could scale far out of control.
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No. 308302 ID: 7dda9a

>>308274
This is where you pounce her and kiss her
or hug her
and apologize
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No. 308314 ID: 35e1a0

i have no idea what you can do to calm her down, she is going nuts cause you don't LOVE her but you can't just fall in love like that out of no where. try "look at yourself, you have become that which you never wished to be, a monster!"
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No. 308420 ID: 585f92

Oh my, this looks... bad.
>>308314
Seconding this. Though you should probably try calming down the other crazy as well.
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No. 308424 ID: 00d3d5

>>308274
Jump up on Goldie's stomach and yell for her to come back to you, then kiss her.
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No. 308515 ID: b6ca92

>>308424
>>308420
>>308314
>>308302
Wait, what? No! Goldie can't even hear us! That's suicide! Is a split personality we're dealing with, and only one of them likes us!

>>308274
You, go get some medical treatment, and tell Niflheim not to kill her, and make sure someone knows she's temporarily insane.
God, this is a town of Monsters, you'd think they'd have ways of dealing with this...
Maybe if ol' Witchy s still about, you can ask her if she has any ideas?
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No. 308537 ID: 35e1a0

>>308515
35e1a0 here, yelling my idea and running away are not mutually exclusive.
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No. 309557 ID: 2104b8
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>You back away, clutching your shoulder. As you retreat you yell to her.

look at yourself, you have become that which you never wished to be, a monster!

>Confused and disoriented you turn to search for help. But help found you first, Ukobach, stands before you...

Qwern...

>Bloody tears run down his cheeks as he sobs words at you

I need your help Qwern... We have to stop them...

Yes. You have to get Niflheim to not kill her. While I...

No Qwern!.. You have to... You have to stop Goldie! Niflheim will never give up... She can't... All she can do is keep pouring hate into your girl... All she can do is make her stronger... I... I know Niflheim better than anyone... I know how to kill her... If this keep's up... *Sob* She'll die!

>He falls to his knees, at head level to you he grabs your shoulders... Stinging pain runs down your back when he grabs the wound...

Please Qwern... Please!.. I lover her!.. You... *sob* You have to save her... I'll do anything!.. Just... *sob* Just make Goldie stop... I know you can... Somewhere in you... You can make her stop... You have to...
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No. 309569 ID: 856690

Welp, It looks like you now have to jump right back into her.

That or proclaim undying love for her, so would you please stop?
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No. 309575 ID: a00b5f

Hurl yourself into the fray, grasp onto Goldie and hug for all your worth. Then search your heart and give her an honest rundown of your feelings. with any luck it'll snap her out of her sorrow induced rage.
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No. 310336 ID: b23f02

>>309557
-Turn around and look super awesome
-say: Ukobach. I got this.
-Then walk towards Goldie (whilst looking awesome)
-appear fearless and COMMAND Goldie to protect you
-get up close and kiss her on the lips
now here's the tricky part.
-image love. imagine undieing love for her. picture kissing her, embracing her, being with her, having sex with her (And Cunny). remember the great times you had together. Imagine the great future you will have together...
-try to sink into her a bit (chicks dig that!)
-then tell her you love her with the outmost sincerity
Do this and the job is done. She'll calm down, Niflheim wont kill herself on her. Ukobach wont loose a lover and the town (which I think is also called Niflheim?) will be saved.
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No. 310339 ID: 35e1a0

trick goldie into striking you?
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>>310336
>You step back and walk towards Goldie.

Qwern?!

Don't worry! I've got this...

>Your shoulder burns as blood pours out of the wound.

Honestly... Full grown demons crying on their knees, begging a dwarf to save some girls... What's the world coming to?

>The hulking beast bats off Niflheim with the simplest of gestures.
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>>310336
>Goldie charges towards you

Protect me Goldie!

>She stops right before you and howls her displeasure at you.
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>She stops, for only but a second to take her breath. But that's long enough for you. You leap up to her face and lock lips. Her face warps in surprise... The atmosphere loosens as you try to relax... You picture yourself with her... You imagine being in love... You even Imagine having sex.
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No. 310756 ID: 00d3d5

>>310699
Yes! Go for it!
[BRACE FOR IMPACT]
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>Her skin is cold... It's cold and wet... But I'm okay with it... As her rage subsides she shrinks... As we kiss she pulls me into her body... She cling's tightly as our mouths embrace... Her icy breath flows in my mouth, every time she breaths... *Ack* I think I swallowed some of her?! When I open my eyes... Her childish natures returned... The tension's gone... No more fighting no more havoc...

Goldie... I

>I stare into her crimson eyes, as I search my feelings...

I love you...

>Lies... I'm not sure how I feel about her... I don't think I love her... I just don't feel it...

Qwern...

>Surprised her eyes light up... I've never seen her smile so beautifully...

I love you! I love you Qwern!

>H-How?! It's supposed to be mutual love... D... Do I?.. *sigh* well at least she's talking right...
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No. 310833 ID: 2104b8

>>310831
I meant to post this right after the last but things got in the way (computer/coffee/social, issues) sorry for the delay
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No. 310834 ID: 35e1a0

seems you finally figured out you got a big enough heart to let in more then one person.
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No. 310858 ID: 00d3d5

>>310831
Well, if it worked then you DO love her.
How does this change things from simply being two people who like spending time together and helping each other out?
More physical contact, and maybe sex eventually if that's even a thing she can do.
She doesn't even strike me as the jealous type, so once you get your girlfriend back you shouldn't have much trouble working things out.
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No. 310892 ID: b23f02

~Cute
And yay you saved the town/Niflheim.
Now go get help before you bleed out
Also, try to find the twitch, she seemed to know something about the blue fire. maybe she knows something about Cunny.
>>302876
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No. 314059 ID: 2104b8

you know what... I'm gonna go ahead and call this chapter end. Until next time true believers
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