>>295098
Oh, right. Stupid distracting rabbit.

Franklin D. Pompadour 2011/04/09(Sat)10:01 No. 295226 ID: f7aa74
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[frank]you're honest, i like that. think we'll get along just fine. lets go grab a bite to eat, i'm hungry

[mechanic] a-alright

>>295226

Let's go to Lot 1 already.

Franklin D. Pompadour 2011/04/09(Sat)10:41 No. 295236 ID: f7aa74
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[sorry, haven't prefabbed buzz and his lot, took some time]

[frank] holy color

[mechanic] wow, cute

[buzz] ... holy hair, it's longer than i thought

yeah man, can see how a diet of hair tonic can effect someone.

Bunny rabbit likes it, time to not like it:

"yeah, whatever." Sit down at the nearest table, order up some Tonic and Carrots.

yes it's definitly time to act like your massive hair is no big deal

Your drink of choice is gin and tonic, right?

>>295236
Ask for some food for you and bunny babe.

>>295252
Probably gin and hairtonic.

Franklin D. Pompadour 2011/04/10(Sun)11:20 No. 295469 ID: f7aa74
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[frank] yeah whatever, bring me some gin and hair tonic... and get the bunny babe some carrots while your at it...

you know what, i change my mind, bring me a better chair first, i feel like a goddamn midgit

Buzz 2011/04/10(Sun)11:36 No. 295471 ID: f7aa74
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[buzz] i'd like to bring you a better chair... but i only have a ton of these goofy pot-stools.

Blue, who is the ovnianam, gave me these things when i asked for bar stools.
Since your sitting in one, you know how terrible they are.

can you do me a little favor? I need you to take one of these and set it on the ovnianams head... like a little hat.

And tell him that buzz needs better chairs, if you do this i'll give you something neat.

>>295471
Sounds easy enough. Tell him it had better be really fucking neat.

Bunnygirl 2011/04/10(Sun)11:42 No. 295475 ID: f7aa74
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[mechanic] what about me, can i help with something buzz?

Indigo 2011/04/10(Sun)11:56 No. 295477 ID: f7aa74
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[buzz] oh hey, i remember you, your cherry from the harem... yeah, i do have something, you can help put my computer together.

[mechanic]yay, you actually remember me, i'd love to help

>>295477

haha, i think we can trust buzz. take the thing and let's go hat someone.

>thisleadstosomething.png

hrmm... point. remind buzz that she is your mechanic now.

Franklin D. Pompadour 2011/04/11(Mon)11:42 No. 295661 ID: f7aa74
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um... yeah, sure dude, but it had better be damn neat, like uber flipping groovy neat.

for some damn reason, i'm a just a little parandoid of you buzz, so no funny business cus i'll be back

Franklin D. Pompadour 2011/04/11(Mon)11:57 No. 295662 ID: f7aa74
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alrighty, welp lets wander around then

>free roam, pick location
>_

oh hey, a sergal. ask him what's up. compliment him on his groovy decorating.

rolled 13 = 13

---

wander around, see if HIM comes up to talk to you on his own.

yes this guy seems like a pretty rad dude, make friends

>>295665
[HAHAAH OMG, you actually rolled sergal door anyway]

Just walk past HIM and see if he approaches you. We need to find the whatchamacallit and tell him about our inadequate bottom supporting devices.

>>295662
Go chat up the fuzzy dude and ask where the dude in need of a new hat is.

Franklin D. Pompadour 2011/04/12(Tue)08:21 No. 296026 ID: f7aa74
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[him] pinkskins over by the other lots...

don't distract me, i'm contemplating whether to pee on this guys inferior artwork.

Does it belong to Cloak? Because it looks suspiciously like a synx.

>>296026
Peeing on other people's things is something that you shouldn't contemplate. You should just do it reflexively.

Oh my god, the head sequence, this quest is great, indigo.

Just walk on by, Frank. No need to get involved.

Franklin D. Pompadour 2011/04/13(Wed)09:09 No. 296283 ID: f7aa74
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welp, i just walked by him... i don't want to get in no messed up trouble over wall graffitti.

>where to now
>_

oh hey, it's your target. sneak up behind him and hat-i-fy him.

27 looks like a happy place. Let's visit. Also, dude is hitting on your sex mechanic, beat him up.

Hat the fuck out of blue. Teach him a lesson for giving us crappy chairs.

>>296283
Go chat up that Tiny Deer.

>>296367
this

>>296283
Target has been located. Time to put the plan into action. Go hat the fuck out of that guy!

Franklin D. Pompadour 2011/04/14(Thu)10:28 No. 296688 ID: f7aa74
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[ovnianam] why frank, i did not know you had a sense of humor. So tell me, DOES MY GUN LOOK FUNNY TO YOU?

>frank is in trouble, what should we do?
>_

Actually yeah, it's all bent and dented. There's no way that barrel is straight and the Muzzle is fucked. I'm fairly certain if you tried to shoot anyone with that you're more likely to hurt yourself than anyone else.
I'm picking on your drawing style, don't I'm just joking around.

>>296688
The gun should be the least of your worries... look at your goddamn hair, mang!

OH MY GOD, WHOOPS!!!!!

sorry guys

Indigo 2011/04/14(Thu)10:52 No. 296693 ID: f7aa74
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>>296688
so this is the consequence of
<<
and i'm totally spacing out today guys, sorry

OH NO THE QUEST IS TARNISHED IT'S RUINED FOREVER report the post and have a mod delete it

Indigo 2011/04/14(Thu)11:07 No. 296696 ID: f7aa74
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>>296694

Like hell am i letting my Flagship Die so un-ceremoniusly.

Knock the gun away with your hair.

>>296688
No need to provoke him further. Apologize, and do what we really came here to do.

>>296688
"Buzz says he needs better chairs.
Also, you haven't even taken the safety off, rookie."

check hair for guns of your own

>>296688
Hairbutt the gun away.

I doubt he actually wants to do more than tell you not to mess with him. Provoking him further by trying to fight or resist could get you shot.

"Okay, didn't realize you would take offence. Sorry about that then."

Indigo 2011/04/26(Tue)08:38 No. 299357 ID: f7aa74
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i actually have no idea how to continue this event, so i'll have to deal with it politically.

vote time, either

A.
>>296983

or
B.
>>296733
>>296698

B, more funk potential

>>299360
This.

You hear us in there, funky team? You better play some kickass theme music and turn the funky up to eleven, cause shit is about to go down.

You are going to have to deal with this man for the rest of your sentence, so I think an apology might be in order. Tell him that Buzz told you to do it, etc.

A. Like >>299369 said, Franklin'll have to deal with him later on.

B. Because you are the funkiest individual around.


And he needs to know it.

>>299357
B. Because it's funky time.

Meanwhile inside the vast lands of Frank's head Indigo 2011/04/27(Wed)11:19 No. 299626 ID: f7aa74
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[dourbrother] ...

*memory voice*
"Father, where is mother and sister?"
>"They have been taken, taken by the Evil Attitude... it may be too late."

Indigo 2011/04/27(Wed)11:29 No. 299629 ID: f7aa74
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"TAKEN, Didn't you try to stop this Evil Attitude?"
>"I had tried, my son, but he was much too strong..."
"Then I will stop him!!!"
>" SON WAIT, you cannot stop such a strong foe unless you were the chosen Hair Warrior!"

Indigo 2011/04/27(Wed)11:41 No. 299633 ID: f7aa74
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"Then how, how do i become the Chosen Hair Warrior?"
>"... The first sign of being The Chosen Hair Warrior is the total agreement of your inner voices. Those Inner Spirits must declare you to be the one... If they do not say you are the one, then you are not the chosen."
"So all of the spirits must say i'm the Chosen one? Fine, INNER SPIRITS, IF YOU CAN HEAR ME, I MUST KNOW IF I AM THE CHOSEN ONE... my family needs me."

>Response?
>_

Hmmm... yeah. Yep.

totally dude, you are the most chosen one ever.

yes you are the CHOSEN ONE!

Do we even have to say it?
yes.
Release the pompadour

>>299633
"Chosen?" Bullshit. The only choice is how badly you want to save them. And that choice is yours.

Better question: Who cares? Screw the rules, a real Chosen One makes the rules. But for the record, yes.

Now go kick ass.

Suggestion 2011/04/27(Wed)13:45 No. 299668 ID: 6930ef
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>>299633
YEAH BOYEEEEE

>>299633
Fuck yeah you are. Nobody shall have a funkier hairdo than you my man. Now go out there and teach them the ways of the funk and the fist.

You have the powah! Your hair is not to be touched, period. Not by hand, not by claw, not by scissors, not by electromagnet, not by nuclear blast, and definitely not by some jive-ass-turkey so full of fail he'd call himself ovnianam. I mean come on!

Indigo 2011/04/28(Thu)11:08 No. 299871 ID: f7aa74
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... i don't even understand half the things your talking about.

Indigo 2011/04/28(Thu)11:09 No. 299872 ID: f7aa74
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"groovy?"... "AAAAHHH, MY HAIR!! What's going on!?"

I'm gonna guess it's about to get REALLY HUGE.

Your hair is the hair that will pierce the heavens?

It looks like hair did not beat bullet. We're going to have to manage with a manageable pompadour now, help us god.

>>299872
Take it easy son. It's just taking the shape of the chosen one.

THE GROOVIEST HAIR

THE HAIR WHICH WILL PIERCE THE HEAVENS!

Indigo 2011/04/29(Fri)08:43 No. 300138 ID: f7aa74
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Ah, what's going on, what's happening!?

Indigo 2011/04/29(Fri)08:44 No. 300139 ID: f7aa74
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W-what, why do i feel so different?

check the hair



..
CHECK THE HAAAAAAAAAIR

>>300139
Give me a head with hair, long beautiful hair
Shining, gleaming, streaming, flaxen, waxen
Give me down to there, hair, shoulder length or longer
Here baby, there, momma, everywhere, daddy, daddy

Yea, check that shit. Then remember you're in the middle of a flashback while somebody has a gun to your head, and whip-out your chosen one powers to disarm the situation.

>>300139
It's the power of the funk. You have it in you now.

Indigo 2011/04/30(Sat)11:01 No. 300430 ID: f7aa74
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[Hayashida] Wait wait wait, i'm confused here man... Is this frank or that little dude that lives in his head?

[Kamiyama] You mean pompodour brother, yes, it is pompodour brother and not frank.

Kamiyama 2011/04/30(Sat)11:06 No. 300431 ID: f7aa74
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Pompodour brother is on an epic quest of his own, one which drives him through the magical time known as 'coming of age.'

Kamiyama 2011/04/30(Sat)11:14 No. 300432 ID: f7aa74
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Alright, i see... Maybe we should take a break before i continue my story. How about we head out for ice-

Kamiyama 2011/04/30(Sat)11:15 No. 300433 ID: f7aa74
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-cream... they must not have liked my plot.

Well Kamiyama, I happen to like your plot, especially the guy with the big hair. Maybe next time we shouldn't do an ass-pull on crazy hair powers with no foreshadowing: No matter how awesome they are the suits probably just don't get it and the suits determine what gets made eh?
Tighten that shit up and let's pitch it to the next studio.

Trial Version End Indigo 2011/05/01(Sun)11:25 No. 300625 ID: f7aa74
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Alrighty, i would like to say it went well, but we didn't do any racing... So i'll start that in the next installment, if permitting.

alright, so survey... how was it?

Rate How funny you thought it was, between 1 and 5
Rate how much you enjoyed being a part of this quest, between 1 and 10
And i need to know if i should keep going with this one.
Also, add any opinions about this quest that you may consider improving the quality or humor.

Funny... let's go with 4 out of 5. General enjoyment I'd say 6 out of 10, as it kindof went nowhere as you said.

Improvements: You could have tightened up the flow of the quest; maybe restricted where we could go and do next... Also while the infinitely long pompadour is hilarious, having the camera a bit closer to him would make it a bit less completely ridiculous. Make it have an unknown but very large size, rather than an obviously impossible length.

Also, giving the main character a little more of a personality of his own would've been nice. That's more of a personal taste of mine though.

Folk, please keep this in /questdis/

>>300633

wait wait wait, i don't have a discussion up for this quest... didn't think it was worth it. Can't i at least collect replies in here until i submit it for archive?

I liked the quest, and I thought the main character had plenty of personality, especially with the scenes inside his head. Also, I like your absurdist humor.

As for improvements... I'd agree about restricting our options a bit. The best would be to make it look like we have lots of choices when we really don't, but that can be tricky to pull off. Keep it moving in the direction it's going, though! I like it.

in my opinion this is by far your funniest and best quest
the inside the head stuff really cracked me up

I am a strong supporter of you continuing this quest

>>300625
4
8
Y

The end of the hair must never be seen. This has a significant practical advantage, since that way we'll always be able to instantly see where he is in a picture even when it's horribly chaotic. He can even appear in a zoomed-out shot of a massive crowd without requiring a halo, dead zone, or other tricks to make him stand out.

It did have a bit of a meandering feel to it. And I actually liked the impossibly long pompadour, so I guess tastes differ there.

I'd say humor 4 out of 5 (this is a really good rating, few things amuse me this much), and 7 out of 10 overall.

4
7
Y

Maybe get the quest on rails a bit more so we can actually start the races and such.

5
9
Yes.

Also, the pompadour must remain lolhueg. Otherwise he wouldn't be Franklin Dynamic Pompadour D:

>>300625
5
8
Hell yeah.

TL:DR Indigo 2011/05/02(Mon)08:14 No. 300947 ID: f7aa74
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yep, thx guys, ready to submit

1000/5
10/10
Yesyesyes