FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)11:06 No. 252196 ID: cd2f9c
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Blake wakes up in an unfamiliar place. the walls are too close for comfort and constant bumps make him uneasy.

... are you taking a dump?!

Looks like an airplane bathroom. Get done and then go back to your seat or something.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)11:13 No. 252200 ID: cd2f9c
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-yes it would seem so... I cant quite remember where I am... It would seem that we reseted again. how far back do you remember? can you remember your name?

we got nothing, you are blake though.

inventory check

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)11:27 No. 252204 ID: cd2f9c
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>>252202
-yes I'm definitely Blake...

>>252200
-Your right it does look like a bathroom. best I leave and find out were I am...

>>252203
-lets see I have on me... 40bells, a train ticket and my camera.

>>252198
best first post ever

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)11:32 No. 252207 ID: cd2f9c
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-ahhh... wait its coming back to me now... yeh I'm on this train. and I'm going somewhere and its been 3 days... the ticket says it should be a 5 day trip.

well then, let's get back to your room.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)11:45 No. 252213 ID: cd2f9c
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-yah your right , I'll just head back to my room. eh? it would seem that my neighbor's coming out. odd I don't remember seeing him.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)11:53 No. 252218 ID: cd2f9c
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the door open's reveling the strong smell of coffee. a strange cat stares at me with red eyes...

-HEY! its you, I was just gonna knock to see if you were there. your not the social type are you. care to come in? I have coffee...

follow the creepy stalke cat, I don't see what could go wrong

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)12:10 No. 252225 ID: cd2f9c
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I follow the cat into his room. he seat's me down on his bead and hands me a cup of coffee... my eyes glance to the window and I notice that the sun's going down...

-so friend got a name? were you going? are you a boy or a girl?..

-euh... My name is Blake. Im a boy and I'm going to...

I pull out my ticket and read the destination. BLAKELAND... That's right I'm going back home, My ancestors founded that village eight generations ago. It still sounds odd to my ears.

-I'm going to blakeland...

-You don't remember me do you? well I guess people change in six years, how yah been Blake?

these are very oddly specific questions. just say "okay"

tell him you've been good and ask him who he is again

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)12:26 No. 252237 ID: cd2f9c
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-I don't remember... anything... all I remember is that some thing bad happened and now I'm on this train...

-Well that will happen... so were yah living? maybe we live close. I was your neighbor when we were kids.

-I don't think I have a house there...

-what! your going out there with no were to live?! well don't worry old Rover will help yah out just let me make a ring to a few friends of mine...

>>252237
hug Tom Rover and thank him for the house

>>252246
well, potential house, you never know when a plot device will come and kick you in the balls

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)12:56 No. 252255 ID: cd2f9c
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the cat finishes his coffee and leads me out side his room.

-this might take some time so got explore the train or some thing... its not good to be antisocial.

-ok I guess?

no use going back I already used the bathroom and that's all that's back there. ok I'll head left.

do de do.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)13:06 No. 252261 ID: cd2f9c
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leaving the room I find myself between two wagons. the fresh air hits me at height speeds, its nice here. the sun is setting...

caution crappy gif approaching

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)13:10 No. 252267 ID: cd2f9c
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-that's right... I remember now... My house caught fire. All I have left is my shirt my camera and some money. I spent most of it on my ticket...

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)13:19 No. 252272 ID: cd2f9c
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-It's all coming back to me now. I was exiled from My hometown six years ago for something I didn't even do... Since then It's been cup noodles and no heating. honestly I don't really know why I'm here. well that's not important now. It's been nice knowing you what's your name

dude, mark when it's a cutscene and when it is over, no idea if i should say something or not

>>252272
Hey, now, don't be like that. Get down off of there before you do something stupid, eh?

You ought to find someone to talk to, at least.

ah sorry... how do I do that exactly?

>>252277
Well, for one, you could literally put in spoiler text something like CUTSCENE START and CUTSCENE END. Or put that in the title of the post. Or use a counter, like [1/3], [2/3], [3/3], etc. Just try to mark it somehow; having irrelevant suggestions in the middle of the cutscene doesn't help the quest any and frustrates suggesters.

two ways, put 'Cutscene' in the topic and 'cutscene over' in the topic on the last part.
or
put [cutscene #/#] as the last line of your post.

Blake if you die this early in the quest I swear I will kick your ghost in the balls

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)13:55 No. 252301 ID: cd2f9c
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>>252274
-well I don't see the point in that... no one really care's anyways... well I'm done here. see yah on the other side no name.

-Oh no you don't!

You're telling us you have nothing to fight for? Nothing worth living for? Nothing that you love more than anything else in the world, beyond good and evil intentions?

That's a load of shit that you don't have the strength to shovel. Sit your ass down and tell us more about yourself.

>>252301
a wild hero appears

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)14:39 No. 252315 ID: cd2f9c
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-listen kid! I don't know what your plan is but this is going a bit far...

-mister I don't think you understand the whole jist of it...

-now you listen here... what you need is priorities. I had priorities, and they guide me through out my life and still are. you see back when I was your age I wanted to be a police man so I joined the enclaive and they trained me in the art of death and so i...

-sir, please let go of me. I'm in a hurry here...

-I when on into the police and they told me that I had a lot of talent but that I should focus on the hole anti crime thing because parking tickets weren't doing it for me and so...

-mister your stories is boring please let me die...

-so I joined an elite force that stopped crimes and so on until I got bored of normal enemies and then I went back into the enclaive. and did some stuff with them, you see they have these plans to do big things...

-maybe I can slip out of this coat...

-to do things and I cant really talk about them, but I know a lot about them you see, I'm a mechanic now and I make things that do stuff for the enclaive, but mostly I make sure that the new meat is good for us you see we need good soldiers to fight of the capitalists.

-and what does that have to do with me?

-well aren't you the new guy?

uhhh, no. just a poor schmuck.

um...no?

maybe. what is the new guy's name?

Why does everyone wear giant buttons.

>>252342

They look like discs of metal

sorry im late my computer crashed... now were was I?

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)15:52 No. 252355 ID: 51d4c6
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-euh... no?

-... heh. they teach you how to lie in the training now eh? that's good I would have needed that back when I started. you see the police don't like us and we... I'm getting off track here... Hi my name is Kevin and I will be your instructor for today now would you please get on the train?

"...you are holding me."

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)16:06 No. 252359 ID: 51d4c6
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-...you are holding me.

-oh am I? I'm sorry let me help you with that comrade.

-AAHHHH!!!

stay up there, keep away from him.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)16:30 No. 252369 ID: 51d4c6
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the man lands with a thundering clang.

-your gonna need to drop the act cause I'm not falling for it, now fight we need to see how much you have grown.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)16:52 No. 252380 ID: 51d4c6
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-Listen Keven! I don't know who you think I am but I'm not him! ok? I'm not a soldier! I'm not an enclaive! And I'm not your comrade! My name Is Blake Steelheart IVth! My ancestors founded a small community near here! And I'm currently having a moral dilemma!

"and i have mild amnesia!"

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)17:33 No. 252403 ID: 51d4c6
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-Blake Steelheart? Blake Steelheart! The Blake Steelheart the IVth?! The keeper of seals? The man who sold the world to flames? The Blake Steelheart?

-euh... no?

wow... the boss is thinking highly of me. I cant mess this up! listen legend you had better give me a proper fight cause I wont go easy on you! and euh duck.

Hey, you serious about the whole 'killing yourself' thing? Because he just gave a better place to jump from, didn't he? None of that pesky railing to impede people.

Careful, though. You might wind up accidentally landing headfirst on some fair bit of fluff that insists on nursing you back to health or something.

>>252403
>> and euh duck
DUCK NOW

HIT THE DECK!

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)17:42 No. 252416 ID: 51d4c6
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-shit!

tell me you are not K.O

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)18:10 No. 252438 ID: 51d4c6
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dropping to the floor at the thought of a incoming bridge. a loud SSHHHhhhAK! can be heard above.

when I look up the man is holding a large metal cross, still glowing white from the heat.

-come on comrade. I'm waiting.

-this looks bad. ok you guys fight or flee?

start crying. he would never expect it.

eanraig 2010/11/04(Thu)18:16 No. 252442 ID: 97360c
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flee

do you even have weapons with you?

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)19:08 No. 252466 ID: 51d4c6
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>>252447
other than my camera. no

>>252442
>>252441
I turn fast and commence running. tears start to build up as I think of the crazy predicament that I'm in, but if I keep running maybe... OH Lord he's using some kind of crazy street-fighter doge move!

-listen... Blake... drop the act will you.

-I'm not acting I'm really just a normal guy!

-listen I have your file right here, look...

he pulls out a paper and reads in an orderly manner

-enclaive training scout: mission 00284. by order of blablabla do not kill blablalba ah! here... target is young white haired red eyes and blue hoody with the enclaive's rivets. target will pretend to commit suicide at sun down. between the third and fourth wagons. target has low combat skill, fight with caution. see?

state you have been inflicted with laser guided amnesia so you no nothing about that.

You wanted to jump earlier! What's with the hesitation. You wanna die or you wanna get beaten up? Even if you don't die, you'll be away from this nutter.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)19:21 No. 252469 ID: 51d4c6
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-Kevin this is the eight wagon... the fourth is that way.

>>252469
errr, that too.

>>252469
facepalm.jpg

FlynnMerk 2010/11/04(Thu)19:42 No. 252473 ID: 51d4c6
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-fuck. fuck fuck fuck FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK !!!!!

the man dash's off down the train. I sit down to contemplate what just happened...

-you know what? I think I'm quite lucky to be alive... and I think I'm gonna take his advice. yah I'm gonna get my priorities in check... now that I think about it, maybe that cat will find me a place to stay... but for now I need to sleep. what do yeh say? Lets go back to my room for some shut eye.

also on that note I'm gonna log off now. 25 posts is quite enough for any one man and I do have school tomorrow.

yeah that train thing was a bit jerky though, withholding info that could save the character, that the character knows from the audience is... yeah.

>>252475
I don't quite understand that? what do you mean?

blake knew it was the wrong car but we didn't know that until you just showed us even though we would of sad it before hand if we knew.

>>252478
we did'nt know it was the wrong car, that guy just told us

>>252478
between wagon 3-4 there was a man with white hair and red eyes wearing blue huddy who commited suicide at sun down. blake just so happend to fit the bill. he had no idea about the whole taget thing. blake know's nothing more than you do.

ether way good night.

>>252466
he knew it was wrong when the guy told him here.
BUT didn't say anything until
>>252469
here.
that was just stalling.

>>252485
no, that's call ilustating the situation whit a new pic

>>252485
oh your right. I'm sorry, I see what you mean now, I'm not really good at mentioning cut scenes. I'll try harder next time.

Mneme!AACRITtEr. 2010/11/05(Fri)02:00 No. 252641 ID: fd6d7e
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...awesome.

Did you think of the "between the third and fourth wagons" trick only after you had drawn >>252301 ? Because at that time you could have written a "Wagon #8" on the side and we'd all be cackling at your mastery of the art when you did your trick in >>252466 . Instead it was a bit clumsy since we had literally no way to know the assailant was at the wrong between car junction. It went from "I should have known!" to "You should have said so."

Just remember you can almost never have enough foreshadowing. Any plot twist you want to drive home, just put a hint of a clue in it sometime in past panels, and it'll make you look like the wisest wiseass that ever crawled out of wiseassia. Even if we figure it out, all the better, because /quest/ loves to have our ego stroked that way.

>>252485
wich is his direct following post so it's not that bad right? however I do agree with >>252641

anyway, I think we should save this for a discussion thread, if FlynnMerk doesn't mind making one

ok were was I?

FlynnMerk 2010/11/09(Tue)13:12 No. 254482 ID: 51d4c6
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-What a day... First I meet a creepy looking cat who claims to know me and then I get attacked by some goblin from an anti capitalist group who also claims to know me... Well I need some sleep. and we need to talk I need to get my life in order and we need put our heads together if we want to get our memories back. but all that will have to wait till tomorrow. I bit you good night.

>>254485
awaken, lol at zelda reference, engage in morning ritual in that order

FlynnMerk 2010/11/09(Tue)13:41 No. 254498 ID: 51d4c6
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-Good Morning.

that cat is very close

-I have good news for you.

greet cat.

PRINCESS BEAM

FlynnMerk 2010/11/09(Tue)14:06 No. 254509 ID: 51d4c6
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>>254500
-Good morning?

-I have excellent news for you Blake.

-does it involve coffee?

-no. but I found you a job. and a place to stay.

-ahh... well that is good news. please give me the details.

-you will be working for the Nook's Cranny part time and you'll be living with my brother. on top of that since your grandpa's the landlord I got you a crazy deal on the rent. only 1000 bell a month, but don't tell your room mate he doesn't know that the rent's been reduced for you.

slipping out of bed I put on my only shirt.

-wow thanks man. you really saved me there.

-and guess what!

-what?

-My house is right next to your, we'll be neighbors.

-euh hey do you have a stationary I could buy off you?

-why yes... why? you need to wright a letter?

-no no. its a personal reason...

>>254502
I loled so hard I feel out of my chair and broke my alarmclock

FlynnMerk 2010/11/09(Tue)14:19 No. 254513 ID: 51d4c6
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the cat hands me a stationary and a pen.

remember yesterday I mentioned getting my life in order well it all starts here.

I wright down my current life goal on the paper...

ok its not much but its a start... do you have any ideas for any other goals? maybe you would like me to have something done or any ambitions?

are we supposed to write down potential goals? umh....learn about wtf was going on with that other guy I guess, I mean he did atack us with a cross batt thing

>>254514
yes... I'm sorry I didn't really realize that I didn't explain that one to well, yes the point is to find potential goals. this is the quest log.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/09(Tue)14:51 No. 254516 ID: 51d4c6
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>>254514


anything else?

FlynnMerk 2010/11/09(Tue)15:15 No. 254520 ID: 51d4c6
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well my quest log is somewhat empty but that's ok It should fill up with time.

the cat returns with two cups of coffee.

-ah thanks I needed that

-say? you want to follow me around all day long, there isn't much to do here so generally I just try to meet new peoples.

-ok I guess? since there's nothing to do here

I'm logging of early today. I'm just not into it today, I'll be back in a few days. with more interesting plot devises! The train scene is so boring, but important. please bare with it.

Oh hell, not Tom Nook. You're in deep shit now. That fucker owns this town.

>>254516
Grind a mountain to dust with your bare hands.
Bed and fully satisfy the five most gorgeous women on the planet. Simultaneously.
Get a boat. Boats are awesome.

>>254522
woah, chill out Rudy

>>254520
follow him for now, try and find out what the fuck is up with his face while you're at it

>>254516

Yeah here's more:
-Unfriend Rover from your Myspace.
-Find out what weirdo meant by "keeper of seals" and "man who sold world to flames." Especially since you are a bunny and not a man. I suppose this might go hand in hand with the whole "regain memory" thing, too.
-Burn the rest of hometown to ground (That'll show them all. Hehehe.)

>>254525
What? These are life goals, not immediate. They should be on everyone's list of life-goals. At least the first and the third. The second is questionable for inclusion.

>>254539
shit you just made me realise, add "regain memory" to list of shit to do

FlynnMerk 2010/11/11(Thu)10:58 No. 255240 ID: 51d4c6
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>>254522
ok here you go, quest log updated

>>254539
why would I want to burn down my own hometown?

>>254899
yes memories would be nice

I'm sorry this is all I can do for now, I need to move out of my room for renovations. I wont be back till Monday, maybe...

>>255241
lol busy?

also enaugh sidequests for now, lets just follow rover and triger an obligatory plot device

If My computer is good to go tomorrow I should be able to continue

now... were was I?

FlynnMerk 2010/11/15(Mon)15:04 No. 256720 ID: 51d4c6
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we both leave the room. The cat closes the door behind us...

-Hello there!

a girl yells across the hall.

-Don't talk to rabbits dear.

the man scolds her with a little tap on the back of the head.

uhhh, we are gonna be living near someone in a straight jacket?

>>256720
say hi



what else can we do in a situation like this

FlynnMerk 2010/11/15(Mon)16:18 No. 256749 ID: 51d4c6
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>>256726
>>256723
-Hi

-do not speak to me you damn dirty hare.

the man walk's by avoiding eye contact.

-don't be so mean dad! Oh don't mind him, he's just a little racist... hi my name is Ophelia what's yours?

-my name is Blake, say were are you heading?

-ohh... your a Blake? Were just off to your town.

-it's not mine. my family lost the town two generations ago, but the current mayor is of my family. Are you gonna live there?

-Why yes we are. father's retiring and he wanted to return to his hometown.

"if you don't mind me asking, why are you in such an outfit?"

FlynnMerk 2010/11/15(Mon)19:50 No. 256837 ID: 51d4c6
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>>256750
if you don't mind me asking, why are you in such an outfit?

FlynnMerk 2010/11/15(Mon)19:56 No. 256841 ID: 51d4c6
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sorry this is so late. renovations and all... I should be back full throttle in a few days. also A friend of mine is complaining that I talk to much In my quests (like I am now). is this true? if so please tell me and I'll keep it down.

>>256837
Sure, why not?

naw, you are doing fine

Couldn't hurt to do a favor. Sure.

Also, those are some nice blue eyes.

What kind of favor? It's unwise to make promises if you don't know what you're promising.

>>256837
it depends what kind but sure I guess

>>256841
more than most authors but it's not necessairly a bad thing

we were we?

>>257794
favor.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/18(Thu)14:43 No. 257797 ID: 51d4c6
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-you need help, what do you need? and you have very pretty eyes might I add.

-well you see I have an itch that I just cant scratch and my father refuses to help.

-oh?

-yes... could you maybe scratch me right here, in my ear?

-oh, of course.

-with your dick.

-euh... what?

ok guys I really need your help on this one. I have no idea how to respond to that.

I...um...but...w-what? sorry dude I don't know either

"I'm pretty sure your father wouldn't approve of that either, so maybe you could later come to my compartment without him to discuss this in private."

Tell her she can pretend your finger is your dick.

Go ahead and scratch the spot.

"not in public of course, once i figure out where i'm staying you can come over"

i bet she is tied up due to rampant nymphomania.

Maybe she just has some kind of Tourette's like condition where she can't stop saying socially inappropriate things? Better not take it too seriously, besides her dad's right over there.

Either way the response is "Oh hey it's big, but it's not going to reach your ear."

Ask her where you can meet somewhere private to do that. Yes, you are going to use your dick to scratch her ear, among other things.

Scratch her ear with your finger for now. Put your other hand on the back of the ear to hold it still.

>>257797
Put hands on trouser button.
Tell her to close her eyes for a few seconds in a sultry voice.
Questioning look at her dad, take hands away from trouser front and hold palms upwards at an angle. Possibly mouth 'What?'

FlynnMerk 2010/11/18(Thu)17:05 No. 257870 ID: 51d4c6
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>>257806
>>257837
>>257852

-my dear Ophelia. I simply cannot, not today not here. an indissentsy such as this in public would be unacceptable. and besides, not on the first date... heee.

the sound of her father's foot steps can be heard throught out the hall. he sounds quite angry.

-ah but if you are truly itchy I must help a fair maiden.

speaking loudly so that he can hear me loud and clear. his walking turns to jog. as if to catch up to me. I lean down and scratch her ear. leaning in closer I whisper so the father can not hear.

-we'll meet again soon. don't worry... you and I are gonna have a lot of fun together.

the father grabs Ophelia and shakes her down.

-Hold your tongue fool! We don't need peoples saying things! Especially not in front of the mayor's family.

>>257842
>>257837

-oh don't worry Sir. I probably understand her condition. it's fine, beside a lot of peoples try to seduce us rabbits. well I guess old titles die hard.

-I miss judged you young one. Maybe your not all that bad. come with me well talk about our family affairs. come on Ophelia!

very well then, let's walk.

follow the nice racist man, nothing bad will happen

>>257964
we are related to the mayor, doing something bad to us will probably result in bad stuff to him.

>>257966
>implying you are related=protected

Did you forget that We've been disowned and effectively removed from the family tree?
We were kicked out for some 'horrible crime', and coming back home is a desperation move on par with a prisoner going back to the Alcatraz on purpose.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/19(Fri)15:55 No. 258096 ID: 51d4c6
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sorry Iv been logging on and off with out warning these days. this is due to the renovations in my room (there taking longer than expected (stupid land lord)) while I wait for my room to be rebuilt I'm living in the living room. and I have a small 2x4 foot space for my computer and no proper drawing table. so I draw on my knees. this is the cause for my slow work, coming and going.. thank you for your patience.

now were where we?

>>257872
>>257964

the man marches off and I follow.

-so... Blake. that's your family name am I correct? whats your first name?

-Steelheart. but please call me Blake. It's more suiting of a first name.

-very well. so do tell me about your self.

-not much to tell.

-oh they all say that but peoples have a lot to say when they talk. just start at the beginning then continue till you reach the end. then stop.

-nice reference to Wonderland there mister...

-Loin. my name is Sir Loin Grumph.

-well you see Loin. I have recently been touched by a mild amnesia. and cant really tell you my story right now. but if you don't mind my asking just why do you dislike rabbits?

-well there all perverts is my problem.

-and you blame them for your daughters situation?

-quite...

-Sir I'm not gonna lie to you. Thought I am of noble blood. I'm not in the noble family...

-what? do tell.

-It's a little complicated and I don't remember.

-oh poor child. well I hope it comes back to you.

-I'll be working at the nook's. so come stop by some time. I'll see if I can get you and your daughter a good deal.

-why thanks you young lad. you don't resemble your father one bit might I add.

-is that a good thing?

-well yes. he was arrogant and foolish. not to mention a raving pervert.

(so that's were it comes from. heh)

-shame. he was quite a man thought.

-was?

-hmm... yes oh here we are. I'm sorry I must leave you. I do wish to see you again soon.

-oh yeah.

the man enters a door leaving it a little open. Ophelia rushes in behind me and whispers in my ear.

-meet me here at 0200

the she rushes into the room, closing the door behind her. probably with her but of her feet.

(its a date then... two am. I can do that)

-she seems nice

the cat had been talking whit her on the way here.

-but no matter, lets continue.

-sure.

sorry for mass text. I'm trying to avoid drawing if possible. and there wasn't much to say in that dialog anyways. plus I'm rushing the train scene. I do hate this chapter but It's a must

FlynnMerk 2010/11/19(Fri)16:27 No. 258102 ID: 51d4c6
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the cat continues down the hall and we cross a few wagons.

-what do we have here?

we find a door with "DO NOT ENTER" written on it. open just a crack. its guarded by a large man who seems to be sleeping. Zs are engraved into the wall behind him.

-well well well. look who it is. old man Perkins is sleeping on the job again. stupid cop. I'm glad every one makes fun of you... hey wanna check out whats behind that door?

-I don't know... If it was guarded by a cop shouldn't we not enter?

-don't worry. I'll just check nothing much.

-I don't know.

what should we do? I'm curious to, but it says not to enter.

ACK! use fonts to tell people apart better
take out the - to make them work
use [-i][/i] to make it italic
[-b][/b] is bold
and [-u][/u] is underline

>>258104

terribly sorry. I will do that from now on. AS you can tell I'm quite new here and still have a lot to learn. but I'm glad your here to help, starburst I really owe you one.

by the way... how do I greentext? I think that would help too.

>implying

oh, and
peek but keep a firm grip on the handle and door frame.
and as the other guy said just add a > to the front.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/19(Fri)18:50 No. 258143 ID: 51d4c6
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>the cat walk's right in. Probably because of his curiosity... you know how cat's are. the room is clouded in darkness. I stay in the door frame. there is a small thing in the back of the room. few details can be seen. a large hammer resides beside it.

Thing: why hello there. It's rare to get visitors here. how do you do?

Rover: Fine and you?

T: Very fine. but how is your friend? he seems shaky to me

Blake: I'm fine!

>this thing seems too friendly if you ask me.

T: Do come closer It's hard to see in the dark. Don't worry I don't bite.

B: of course not... Bite is a melee attack. talk how ever is ranged. and I intend it to stay that way.

R: oh stop being so antisocial. She's tied up anyways.

B: what is it anyways?

R: hard to tell let's get closer.

T: yes yes come come... Friends

>well I'm still unsure if we should even be here to begin with. But I'm very curious...

>the cat walk's right in
Oh 'shit, here come's an 's!

nope, stay right there.

Stay standing in the doorway.

If it comes down to it, do not hesitate to lock the cat in the room when you run. He knew the risks.

eanraig 2010/11/19(Fri)21:18 No. 258224 ID: ccfa8f
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don't do what he/she is saying

FlynnMerk 2010/11/19(Fri)22:05 No. 258242 ID: 51d4c6
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Rover: see were friends already. theres no need to fear.

Bleake: yah well I'm still gonna sit this one out.

R:fine suit yourself.

>crazy hyper social idiot, he doesn't even fear scary peoples.

Thing: there's no need to fear. we all have red eyes here.

B: and that is creepy as fuck!

R: wow... Blake you have to see this!

B:no I don't. but you could describe it.

R:I think its a sergal. maybe. wait no sergals don't have horns...

Sergal: your right. on both guesses. I'm an experimental mutant.

R: oh... do you have a name? and aren't you a bit small?

Scarce: Names Scarce coarse. and I'm not small I'm young.

R: ahh.. what are you doing here?

S: oh nothing much. just riding the train in a dark room chained to a chair that is bolted to the ground guarded by an armed cop.

R: oh I see. were you heading?

S: Babylon maybe?

R: cool never heard of it. is it nice?

S: no. its not. I'm definitely going to escape before they take me back... If you help me I wont rape you when I get out.

R: oh... well I'm sorry on that one. not much I can do to help and besides, I would rather not help an escaped experiment.

S: I understand.

>the cat walks back to greet me

R: see that wasn't so bad?

B: yah well lets just get out of here.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/19(Fri)22:12 No. 258247 ID: 51d4c6
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pause.

well its 0100 here. and as much as I could stay up later. since I don't have to wake up tomorrow. I'm a bit to tired to continue working on this. but since I'm not doing anything tomorrow. I might be on. but most likely Monday.

Also I'm sorry for talking to much and not drawing enough.

due to the nature of this site, pausing is totally unnecessary

let's.. just go.

Do you have anything to spare that might assist her in her escape? Never hurts to try avoiding the rape half of conditional statements. ...unless you're into that sort of thing.

Judging by Ophelia's reaction, you're apparently not too bad looking. So, if that's so, sergal might remember the cute asshole bunny that didn't even get close to her and make note to rape you even more.

...or you could just GTFO and assume her keepers will be able to keep her locked away.

>>258338
>assume her keepers will be able to keep her locked away.

he is sleeping on the job so i dought he is going to be mush of a fight so tonight lock your door and window before you go to sleep.

and get a shotgun just to be sure

FlynnMerk 2010/11/22(Mon)15:10 No. 259054 ID: 12cc58
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>>258338
>helping dangerous strangers is not on my to do list. besides, all I have is my ticket (which I need to get off the train) 40 bell, the cloths on my back and my camera (and I'm not giving that to anyone) so I guess I can just hope for the best.

>>258338
>We walk about in the train for about an hour. The cat stops and talk's to a number of peoples. but none of them raise any interest.

>after a while we stop in front of a vacant door. etched between the windows is the number 13.

Rover: I ride these trains a lot you know. and I picked up some stories. Did you know that this room is haunted?

Blake: I was gonna guess that. what with the 13 and all.

R: five years ago two goblins live in this room for three days. and on the fourth night the wife tried to kill the man with a carving knife. but she failed the man killed her instead. he drowned her in the washroom you see. I heard a version of the story saying that he was a pro wrestler. legend has it that if you sleep in this room. on the fourth day you have been on this train. at 5AM she might try to kill you. thinking your her husband.

B: spooky.

R: yah but its just rumor. Hey Blake. I bet your to chicken to sleep here tonight.

B: no I'm not. I just don't care enough to humor this old legend.

R: pah! I bet 40 bell you cant sleep here for one night.

>40 bell?.. sounds good to me. I mean I really do need the money, seeing how that's all I have. but his place give's me an eary felling what do you say?
>and find a name for your self! calling you "you" all the time is starting to tick me off

fine, we are Legion for we are many.
anyway, just keep your camera and take a picture of it. would trap it's soul to film.

>>259054
No problem, just be awake around 5am.

Also, call us Colonel O'Neil.

>>259054
you can call us Eden

and for the ghost, try getting some salt if she appear just trow some on her she should start burning the moment it touch her

>>259058
no wait, we have something to do at 2 AM. so it looks like we aren't actually going to be sleeping in here tonight so yeah.

>>259075
dude, we could totally spend the night with ophelia in the haunted room, or just spend it in our room and head there before 5AM

>>259076
That's a good point. Hopefully Rover wouldn't camp out near the door if you take the bet. Security tends to frown on people sleeping out in the walkways, after all.

But if you don't take the bet, hey. It's only 40 Bells. If I remember correctly, that's not exactly a whole lot of money. Enough to buy a pad of stationery, but not much else.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/22(Mon)17:25 No. 259089 ID: 12cc58
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>>259074
>Eden... I like it, it sounds cool but familiar. FF8 right? or maybe the bible?

>>259056
>my cameras digital, I don't think I can trap a ghost in a digital film. and besides there's no such thing as ghosts.

>>259058
>>259075
>>259076
>ok so plan goes as followed. 2am fuck chick. then sleep. then not get killed at 5. simple.

>>259078
>40bell is not much indeed. you can buy a pad of paper with it. or for 60 you can get a nice fruit. but It just so happens to be all the money I have. and no matter what way you look at it, doubling your money is a good thing.

Blake: 40 bell? ok your on. ha easiest money I've ever *GRUMBLE!*... made.

Rover: look at the time!

B: heh?

R: its time for tea. hmmm... and it sounds like you need a healthy dose of crumpets with that.

B: what are you British?

R: hehe... you were always like that you know?

>lunch does sound nice. and it will be a good opportunity to ask him some questions. since he seems to know me. right? but what to ask?

let's ask how we met him before.

hey since he knows us from before, maybe he knows something about what that goblin was talking about, I mean he did call you the keeper of seals and shit

>>259092
>I was your neighbor when we were kids.
>>252237

If he already knew who you were, why'd he ask what your name, destination, and gender were yesterday? Speaking of basics, how old are you, anyways? Any interests aside from photography? What's your mum like? Brother(s)? Sister(s)? Your soon-to-be roommate?

Also- hey wait a minute. You were supposed to have bought some stationery from him earlier, yet you still have 40 Bells. What's up with that? Well, free is a good price to buy something at, I guess. Anyways.

Also be weary when 5 AM comes 'cause the way things like this go, something bad is bound to happen. Probably won't be the goblin that shows up, but maybe that mutant sergal chick will. Or another tardo from that Enclaive thing.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/22(Mon)19:36 No. 259116 ID: 12cc58
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>we walk to a cafeteria. the room has many chairs but few tables. emptiness cloud's the atmosphere. there are a few couples sharing sandwiches and coffee. for a second I thought the cat would jump out of his seat and engage in conversation with one of them. but to my great surprise he only got up to grab a menu.

>mmm... cheese cake. the bane of man. devourer of money. well it cost's 40 bell and I'm getting that much in a few hours so why not?

Rover: so what are you getting?

Blake: a slice of cheese cake

R: mmm... they have good cake here, I suggest the strawberry.

B: ok I'll go for that one.

>the waiter come's and goes with our orders. then he arrives with a small plate of cake and a spot of tea.

>>259092

B: hey... I'm sorry. but I missed your name. what was it again?

>the cat look's down and adopts a sad face.

R: you really forgot didint you?

B: yeah... Amnesia sucks.

>his eyes light up again

R: Amnesia?! you mean you didint just forget about me?

B: no I... who are you?

R: My name is Rover Barker. I was your neighbor when we were young. ahh... we were the best of friends.

B: is that so?

R: yes we did every thing togeher... you were... my first kiss.

>*cough!* I nearly kill my self on that salt peace.

B: w-what?

>Rover blushes

R: well what? we were young... besides you were always...

B: MOVING ON!

R: hehe...

>>259109

B: so you say your brother's my new room mate right? what's he like?

R: I don't know really. he was always secretive when he was young, he loves ninjas. intact one day he went to train on top of a mountain to become one. came back three years later. he was a wreck. but true as told he had become a ninja. I heard he joined a guild of some sort. the ENCLA? no wait what was it called again? well that's beside the point now he just work's a the fruit store. funny taste in pets

B: he's part of the enclaive?!

R: well not anymore, they all disbanded years ago.

>>259098

B: right?.. euh... do you know anything about the keeper of seals?

R: the one who sold the world to flames... yah I know about him...

>his eyes fade down again

I nearly kill my self on that salt peace.
>last

>>259116
>first kiss
Gaaaaaaaaaay.

Also, quite strange how Rover says they're disbanded, and yet that chain smoker from yesterday claimed to be with them. Perhaps a resurgent group seeking to recapture the glory days?

>>259124
or they just SAID they disbanded to hide.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/22(Mon)20:13 No. 259126 ID: 12cc58
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Rover: Six years ago, you see there was an incident... some one set fire to some houses. and he blew up some things. peoples say he even killed a guardian. they... they say it was you who did it. but you couldn't of... my mother died... you couldn't of killed her. you...

>the cat is in tears.

R: I-I wont believe it. there's no way you could of been him. I... I... I!

>he rushes off out of the room. crying heavily.

Blake: ROVER!

wow, i hope you didn't do anything bad ether D:

Well, go after him ... hurry!

>R: yes we did every thing togeher... you were... my first kiss.
>>Rover blushes
>I... I... I!
>>he rushes off out of the room. crying heavily.

you don`t need to have read as many doujins as me to know were this is going...

>>259186
and yah follow him

FlynnMerk 2010/11/23(Tue)11:51 No. 259217 ID: 12cc58
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>>259124
>>259125
>>259130
>>259193

animooted

Excellent way to wait a few minutes before persuing after Rover. Some quality time with just you and yourself (and the voices), not having to be forced into socializing with the incredibly weird strangers occupying this train.

But, fun's fun, I suppose. Should probably go now and see if you can get him to calm down. Or find him in the first place. If not, then hey. Even more time to yourself.

==>

eanraig 2010/11/23(Tue)14:51 No. 259248 ID: 24a088
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>>259217
i just noticed the fork

FlynnMerk 2010/11/23(Tue)17:36 No. 259291 ID: 12cc58
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>>259248
>oh my god I just noticed! this is awesome. I'm totally stealing this fork.

>>259244
yup gonna run after him.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/23(Tue)18:10 No. 259305 ID: 12cc58
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>just as I'm getting a good pace up a door opens down the hall and just who comes out?

Kevin: Sup

>shit shit shit! what does he want now?!

K: glad I found had. I've been meaning to talk to you about some thing.

"Well feel free to have the talk without me being present I won't mind 'kay bye."

About face, run away.

>>259305
"Sorry, busy, got to go, Bye" then gtfo like the wind

>>259305
Look confused.
"Who the hell are you, and why are you smoking like a chimney? Geeze, put those out!"

Rover needs to sort out his feelings. Let's leave him be for now.

What does Kevin want to tell us?

FlynnMerk 2010/11/24(Wed)14:02 No. 259515 ID: 12cc58
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>>259398

Blake: eum... your not allowed to smoke here.

>Kevin chuckles. and continues to smoke arrogantly.

>>259419

Kevin: Blake I... I wanted to apologize about yesterday. I hope I didn't hurt you to bad?

B: n-no. but you scared me half to death.

>he plucks a cigarette from his mouth and starts having his hand around as he talks.

K: its just that you looked so much like my target and I was at the wrong place at the right time. but out of curiosity. why did you want to kill your self comrade?

B: personal reasons. but thanks I feel a lot better now, and you sort of saved my life so were even now.

K: glad to hear it

B: what happened to your other guy?

K: hell if I know. ether way is fine with me. if he died he's not cut out to be in the enclaive. and if he lived well he'll be happy to know he passed.

B: what is the enclaive anyways?

K: can't tell you that comrade.

B: what were you calling me? the keeper of seals?

K: more classified information. I just cant tell yah. were you going some were? you looked like you were in a hurry.

B: euh yah... I wont keep you any longer.

K: well see yah.

>I sure hope I don't. as I walk away he shouts out something from across the hall.

K: Blake! listen. I'm not gonna say were the good guys... but there wrong too. We might be the darkest dank that ever crawled out of hell's hollow. But our hearts are pure and our cause is just. My advice to you comrade. don't fear the cutting edge and you wont get hurt.

>I'm not quite sure what he meant by that. some were between his accent, the numerous cigarettes and all the metaphors I got lost in his words. when i turn around to ask what he meant he was gone. only a few ashes lied were he was and strong smell of smoke.

B: I hate being left alone... this kind of stuff only happens when your alone.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/24(Wed)16:17 No. 259575 ID: 12cc58
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>as I enter the space between the wagons I notice Rover curled up in a ball crying to him self.

>shit... how do I deal with this? Arg!! words! I needs words. help me out here Eden, your good at talking, that's all you ever do.

Kick him.

"Hey hey hey, buck up bucko."

And roll from there!

>>259575
"Cheer up, emo cat. Look at it this way: she doesn't have to put up with your creepy smile anymore. Unlike some of us."

No. "Hey, check out those handrails. Sure seems like a good vantage point to stand from before leaping, huh? I would know."

Closer. "Look, um... Lots of bad stuff happened in the past. Most of which I don't remember yet, but I do know I wasn't the one behind that incident."

Then... I dunno. Gently pat him on the back, offer some comforting words and (reluctantly) the prospect of meeting more recurring weirdoes together, and see if that helps return him to his normal, creepy self.

I think it's best to let him cry for now. We don't fully understand what's got him upset, but apparently he thinks you've done something horrible to him before you lost your memories. Talking to you now would probably just upset him more, and he might lash out at you and do something he'd regret later. He'll be ready to talk to us eventually, once he sorts out his feelings.

But we should stay in the same general area to keep an eye on him.

Not exactly the best place for him, is it? Well nothing to do about that. Before asking us what to say to him, you need to sort out and place how exactly you feel about this cat. Whether or not you know it you have some history together, but the past's the past and it's the present that matters now. What with your "amnesia" he might just be considered a hindrance to your ambitions, whatever they are. He's helpful, sure, but he definitely has a lot of emotional baggage attached to him. If you think that continuing to associate with him is worth it, or even if you don't, our effectiveness at telling you how to handle things is based on what you want us to accomplish. Help us understand who YOU are and what YOU want so that we may further serve.

-Z

FlynnMerk 2010/11/25(Thu)14:35 No. 259784 ID: 12cc58
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>>259726
>I don't know how to feel about him. I feel like I should hold him and tell him that I'm back that I missed him. But I don't think I want to. I don't think I want to remember every thing. just thinking that I once kissed this guy makes me shiver. I don't want to know what else I did with him. your right about the past being the past and some things are best left forgotten. how ever he is nice and I don't need to loose what little friends I have, plus I owe him for finding me a house and a job. on top of that he's my neighbor now, It would be best if we were just friends. but as a friend I have to help him out here.
>(hair blow's in the wind epically, during epic internalmonolog)

>>259720

>agreed. best we wait for him.
after a few minutes he stands and turns to face us reluctantly.

>>259582
>I kick him in the shin. not hard enough to hurt him, but just so that he understands that I'm making a point here.

>>259596
>>259654

Blake: Buck up will yah... Look, um... Lots of bad stuff happened in the past. Most of which I don't remember yet, but I do know I wasn't the one behind that incident.

>he smiles and laughs as if I said some thing wrong.

Rover: I know that silly. I never thought you were the keeper, not even for a second. I even defended you at your trial. I'm not angry at you... I'm angry at my self... you were... my first love you see...

>oh god I don't need to know this.

R: you made me feel warm and special inside... after you left you took a part of me with you, and I needed that part back. so I left too... I had to find some one who made me feel like you did, some one that I could fall in love with... but I couldn't, even sex didn't fell the same as when I was with you.

B: W-w-we H-had s-s-sss...

R: yup all the time

>I cover my ears in shock. I really didn't need to know that!

B: LALALA! AMNESIA I CANT REMEMBER THAT I HAVE AMNESIA!!! LALALA!

R: hehe. It seems the new you is quite hetero. that's fine. I understood that it was over between you and me a long time ago... besides... You don't quite complete me anymore...

-cut scene-

FlynnMerk 2010/11/25(Thu)15:25 No. 259795 ID: 12cc58
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R: after 3 years of looking I sorta gave up on it. I figured you only love once but then there you were again... I thought that my efforts were gonna be rewarded... but I was wrong... fate really loves to kick you in the balls... It broke my heart at first when you said you forgot about me... I couldn't believe it, that after all that effort I put into replacing you, I couldn't tell you that I love you... I was so angry at my self, but I'm glad to know you still care... I'm ready to move on now. I hope that maybe love finds me instead...
Blake... take this... I want you to have it.

B: wow its pretty, what is it?

R: adamantite

B: adama... Were did you get this?!

R: I found it on the island closest to hell. almost cost me my skin too.

B: and you want me to have it?

R: more than anyone.

B: wow thanks...

>I reluctantly take the shiny blue necklace from rover. and tie it around my neck

R: well I guess its good bye then...

B: your wrong... were neighbors. well see each other every day and what not. its not like well never see each other again.

R: yah your right... could you... could you do me a favor Blake?

B: that depends. what do you need?

R: could you kiss me? not for love, but just to make me fell like the last three years weren't in vain. that I didn't waste them, that I got some thing back from all this.

>ok... its the least I could do. but I don't really know how... what do I do? how do I kiss a guy that I used to love? I'm so confused... how would you do it Eden?

-end cut scene-

To be quite frank, this guy's clearly enamored of you, and as you seem to consider yourself straight, it'd be morally reprehensible to lead him on just because he's useful to you. Don't be a dick, tell him the truth: you might have shared things in the past but at the moment you have no desire to have that type of a relationship with him. Otherwise you're just toying with his heart, and honestly he seems fucked enough already.

-Z

>>259795
He's feline. He's practically a girl anyway.
I mean look how adorable he is goddamn.
Maybe kissing him will jog your memory in a good way.

Kiss him on the lips, but not too much.

Kick him again.

>>259795
No tongue, but include hug.

>>259805
If by "adorable" you mean incredibly creepy-looking, then I wholeheartedly agree.

[Rover: Stop being creepy-looking.]

Blake:
>>259799
This.

>>259837
agreed

FlynnMerk 2010/11/26(Fri)11:56 No. 259904 ID: 12cc58
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>>259837
>>259848
>>259840

>kiss on the lips, no tongue, include hug. kick him if he goes to far... ok got it.

>>259799

Blake: ok Rover... I'll do it, just because were friends. but that's all we are, friends. we may of shared something in the past, but I'm a different person now. I'm not looking for any form of relationship with you past the friend zone. so don't get your hopes up. cause its not gonna happen... ok?

-cut scene- (again)

FlynnMerk 2010/11/26(Fri)12:26 No. 259906 ID: 12cc58
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Rover: I understand

>this is so awkward...

Blake: and no tongue

R: ok

B: and stop being so creepy

R: fine

B: and don't freak out if I get a girl friend

R: I wont

B: and don't

R: shut up and kiss me

>>259906
Pretend he's a woman.

A butch, flat-chested woman.

>>259906
>>259907
with a penis

just get it over with and then you can go back to thinking about banging that crazy fox chick.

>>259911
>>259907

In fact, put these two together and imagine that he's that crazy fox chick.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/26(Fri)13:53 No. 259916 ID: 12cc58
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>he leans in and gazes deeply into my eyes. he holds my hand tightly in his own. his lips pucker up and his eyes closes shut. I hesitantly move my lips to match his, his mouth is warm but wet. his breath tastes like cat. this entire ordeal is awkward and revolting. but I get used to it after a matter of seconds. I guess I just started ignoring the fact that hes a guy. my mind wanders...

>geeze I hope no one see's us... my head is so hot I must be blushing a lot... it feels so strange but I... I... I don't know... I wonder what he's thinking right now?.. this reminds me of the first time we kissed... Wait! I remember now! but why don't I remember more? just this one kiss? I feel like that's all that ever happened... I feel like some thing's missing... I really hate this feeling...

-Memory fragment unlocked-

memory fragments can be viewed in the emotional bagged section of your menu.

>Rover leans in further. his tongue slithers in my mouth like a snake. its dry and scratchy, really unpleasant... I give him a strong kick in the leg and he stops. he pulls away but tightens his grasp on me.

R: hehe you never liked my tongue to begin with.

>as soon as I open my mouth to say some thing his lips are already firmly locked with mine. I close my eyes and pretend that I like it... I just cant shake the feeling that I want to be here... right now... doing this... with him... but I know how I fell about this... I want to run... I want to go away... I wan to see Ophelia and I want to kiss her... I want to enter her and make her my own... but why does thinking this make me feel bad?.. like I'm already with some one?.. I'm not! I'm... I... I don't want to think anymore... I just want to... melt away...

>after what I assume was two of three minutes we back off. were not touching each other anymore. were not even looking at each other. I'm breathing heavily, my head is so hot that I feel like I'm gonna explode. rover's whispering some thing to him self.

R: I found you blake...

B: what?

>he smiles at me

R: I found that missing piece.

B: Rover I... I'm not your Blake anymore...

R: I know... I'm just happy were friends again.

B: me two...

>he leans in against me and rests his head on my shoulder... just as I thought... the most awkward moment of my life... why can't you be a girl Rover...

fade out to black screen

and by the way, how Blake wind's up feeling about rover can be fully influenced by you. just point him in which ever direction you see fit.

oh! one more thing... Blakequest is a multigenre quest. some times you'll have romance on your hands some times you will be fighting monsters, babel or the enclaive and some times things will get down right stupid and turn into a comedy story... I hope you enjoy the show

-cut scene end-

probably did only kiss you bu had to mess with you about the other stuff.

>>259916
I have one word for you.

Threesomes!

He's still pretty cute for a guy, though. :3

FlynnMerk 2010/11/26(Fri)15:09 No. 259930 ID: 12cc58
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>we retreat to Rover's room and play a friendly game of monopoly waiting for some thing interesting to happen but nothing does. after a few hours of gaming we decide to stop playing.

Blake: its getting late... maybe you should go get some sleep. you look tired.

Rover: yah I should *Yawn!* what about you?

B: I'm not gonna lie to you I've got a hot date with ear sex in a few hours that I cant miss it.

R: aural penetration? didn't know you were into that kind of stuff.

B: I'm not, its just that she is and I sorta like her and...

R: hehehe don't worry you don't have to explain it. just go get her tiger.

> I leave the room a bid Rover good night he smiles and closes the door.

B: well here goes nothing...

DAMN IT GUYS YOU MADE HIM GAY ALREADY

>>259933 Hey, Rover seems to be all-in-all a swell guy, romantically interested, loyal to Blake, and yet retaining that masculine identity that makes removes that pesky gender barrier that one sometimes encounters with typical heterosexual relationships. *I* certainly think he'd be a good bet to go with, but whatever happens be classy about it, don't go breakin' any hearts.

-Z

>>259936
My thoughts -exactly-. It's not like there's anything wrong with it, and the other girl is in a straightjacket. That means she's a danger to those around her, including herself. They do not use those lightly, you know.

>>259936
And incredibly creepy. Sure, over at >>questdis/337305
He seems more likeable. But here? C-r-e-e-p-y~

>>259930
Get on with the rendezvousing, then. And put all thoughts of Rover out of your mind. And into a fire.
...Well, except the part about your bet with him, I guess. You can keep that one.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/26(Fri)21:01 No. 259997 ID: 12cc58
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>2am I try to not make a noise. I don't want to wake anybody up. I'm at the right place, but nobody's here.

Blake: maybe she's asleep. poor thing probably couldn't stay awake.

Ophelia: pst... pst... over here...

Blake: oh there you are. sooo... still interested?

Ophelia: you have no idea. I've thought about this all day long.

>I open the door slowly to let the little rascal out.

I really don't think you'd need us to tell you what to do at this point...

or do you?

Take it slow. Very slow. Agonizingly slow. You are in control. Have some fun with that power. Ear/neck massaging/nibbling is a great start.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/26(Fri)23:29 No. 260021 ID: 12cc58
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>she walks out slowly and stares at me with wide eyes. its hard to see in this light but I think she's drooling?

Blake: are you ok?

>she suddenly snaps out of it.

Ophelia: yah... I was just a little exited.

>she say's that but she's still got blood flowing out of her nose. and she didn't quite stop drooling yet... she let's out a low perverted laugh

Ophelia: hehehe... were gonna have a lot of fun together right? hehehe...

Blake: as promised.

>she suddenly smiles so wide that... well I don't know what to compare it to... but I didn't know she could go that far. what amazes me more is that she still maintains her cuteness while doing so.

Ophelia: so... were do you wanna do it? your room? mine? out side? the cafeteria? right here? right now?

>I get the feeling that I have indeed too much control over the situation. and at the risk of sounding a little evil. I like it.

Blake: we'll do it in my room.

Ophelia: ok were is it? lets go.

Blake: relax... its this way, and try not to wake anyone ok?

Ophelia: ok.

>she follows my every foot step right to my door. I open the rumored room 13 and scudle in with my nymphomaniac friend. in the light I can see much better. she is indeed drooling and bleeding, and her eyes are creeping me out.

Blake: calm down... your drooling like a dog.

Ophelia: oh! I...

>she blushes a little a changes her face from crazy to shy. smiling I wipe the liquids from her face.

Blake: sooo... ear sex? what up with that?

Ophelia: *giggle* I'm into that ok. look you scratch my back and I'll scratch yours.

Blake: and by that you mean?

Ophelia: how does long lasting oral, vaginal and anal sex all night sound to you?

>no need to answer that, I start unzipping my pants...

that's it I'm too tired to keep drawing. its actually 2am here so I'll see you all next time.

past this point be 18+ yar be warned

Ditch this crazy woman and go make up with Rover right now.

>>260031
naw dude, crazy chicks are the BEST

Look this isnt' really something we need to be consulted about. If you think that you'll be safe and you're desperate/horny enough to hook up with this chick then have at it. Not something I'd recommend as she seems even more unstable than Rover and potentially dangerously so, but it's your call to make. Hypothetically it's just mindless sex and not any other commitment, but if you're fine with it and she's fine with it then it's nobody's business but your own.

One thing I'll recommend most vehemently: Do not under any circumstances take her straightjacket off. Or for that matter putting your anything into her mouth.

No crazy chicks are the worst and it's impossible to hold a long-term relationship with them, since eventually she's going to go off her meds and bite your dick off.

You're safer with Rover, really.

Liking being in control isn't evil. And if you have the power you may as well use it.

She's impatient, overeager. Show her the scenic route. Draw things out. Build up tension slowly. You've got all night. She may never have experienced it like that before. Most of all enjoy yourself.

>>260035
I say it again: Straightjackets Are Not For Show. They are not used on every single person who is mentally unwell, only those who are more than likely to damage themselves, or others, without warning or provocation. If her room is padded, then GET OUT OF THERE.

Somehow i dont think she' looking for anything long term

>>260037
well, at least until either:
A. 5 am, ghosts appear and rape your shit
B. straightjacket breaks and ophelia rapes your shit
C. sergal mutant thing breakes free, finds you and rapes your shit

...if C happens, remoove ophelia's straightjacket and watch the resulting lesbian rape-off

>>260021
Ask her why she's in that straight jacket while you're fucking her ear.
We really need to know what kind of crazy she is; if she's in that straight jacket because she'd rape anything that moves then that's a completely different situation than if she's ax-crazy.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/27(Sat)12:50 No. 260174 ID: 12cc58
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>>260031
>>260035
>>260038
>not a chance I'm staying here with the crazy chick. I need this sex more than anything. Eden your just a disembodied voice. as much as I like your company and you never lied to me nor did you ever do me any wrong I don't think you understand how I feel about this. my memories are gone I have a 19 year long hole in my memories and I feel like I didn't fuck in six years. Eden your more than a friend to me... your like family... I love you even more than I love my self, but I need this. and besides it looks like she does too.

>>260034
>>260084
I don't think she wants any kind of long term commitment ether. lucky that. nor do I. here's my plan: I'll play the nice little bunny when her dad's there, get on his good side. play with his daughter, be her friend. nothing more. just friends. that being said when his back's turned I get to fuck her brains out. hehe... if I wind up getting into this ear sex stuff I might just have to take that literally hehe... besides she seems quite nice to me. that is when she's not in one of her sex crazed ahegao moods.

>>260037
your right but I feel evil... and I like it... I like this darker side of me. but I'll save it for her. just for her. I wont let it consume my life.

-Memory fragment unlocked-

>I unzip my pants exposing my underwear. my boner can be seen as massive bulge. she stares wide eyed at my crotch... shes drooling again.

Ophelia: take it out.

Blake: hold your horses man. its better if you take it slow.

>I take off my undergarments slowly... like battle cruiser slow. shes clearly getting impatient. but its fun to see her lust build up. my undies are at there limit and my dick flings out like a... well like an erect dick, not much else to compare it to.

Ophelia: haaa... plump rabbit sausage. my favorite...

Blake: you can have as much as you want...

>>260034
>>260035
>Or for that matter putting your anything into her mouth.
>she's going to go off her meds and bite your dick off.

>wait what?

>Ophelia lunges at me mouth wide open.

Blake: shit!

>role 1d20 for reflex.

rolled 15 = 15

---

>>260174
Put your knees and arms out to block her.
"Whoa, hold on there. Oral's not my thing, and you wanted earsex first anyway, right?
'Sides, you've got that crazy look again; those teeth can stay away unless you've got a ring gag on you somewhere.

What kind of crazy are you, anyway? You're lucid enough for that, right?"

rolled 5 = 5

---

>>260174
Your hands, her shoulders. You dont have to stop her, just control her approach.

>>260180
success

but I have to go be back later

>>260174
>like battle cruiser slow
>battlecruiser
>your dick's new name

FlynnMerk 2010/11/27(Sat)17:25 No. 260264 ID: 12cc58
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>>260180

>my hand jets forwards and grasps Ophelia's face moments before her mouth and my dick make contact. her face is pushed back and she looks up in confusion.

Blake: Whoa, hold on there. Oral's not my thing, and you wanted earsex first anyway, right?

Ophelia: are you afraid of me?

Blake: no. I just... yes... but I'm curious about earsex. can we do that first? don't you want to start with that?

Ophelia: *giggle* I can tell that you never did before... more impressive than the actual penetration is the ejaculation the ears. the warm flow is magical. I climax every time it happens. but if you want to fuck my ears that's fine by me, its all fun on my side, how ever most peoples don't like it.

>well you heard the lady. how should we go about this? do I try ramming her ears or do I let her service me and finish how ever she wants?

Your preferences are your own, but I wouldn't give this girl any power

Kick her.

agreed don't give her any power, ram away my friend

>>260264
Ask her if you should just ram it in or do something in preparation.

Lay her on her back on the bed. Sit on top of her and play with her ears for a while. If she gets impatient, tell here "You'll get to experience the firepower of my battlecruiser before the night is done".

oh god I can't stop laughing

>>260272
only if you scream "yamato gun FIIIIRE!!!" as you cum

>>260272
>>260277

These two, definately do these two.

>>260278
Agreed.

Also: "While you can still hear, just what kind of crazy are you? Why the bondage jacket?

>>260279
wouldn't a question like that kill the mood?

Goddamn you idiots.

Blake, it would have been nice knowing you if it weren't for your lack of self-preservation instinct and common sense.

She probably has the straight jacket on because if she didn't she'd spend every waking moment either masturbating or trying to drag people close enough to have some fun with.

As for proceeding, I'd say... take the initiative with experimenting. Let her offer some advice. Never hurts to try things once to see if you like it or not.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/28(Sun)06:55 No. 260363 ID: 12cc58
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>>260272
>she adopts a more playful face and leans up against the side of the bed. I lie down on it near her and start playing with her ears... pulling them a little.

Ophelia: why are you teasing me?

Blake: I told you It's better to drag it on. besides you are powerless. and I am in control.

>I start nibbling on her ears, lightly. she blushes up like a tomato.

Ophelia: your so mean Blake... you know I can't *ahhhh*...

>I licked her at the base of the ear...

Ophelia: nnn... just fuck me already Blake... come on...

>hehe... I love antagonizing this crazy chick. I wet my finger and play with her aural cavity. with my other hand I slip under her jacket through the front of the neck and grab some tit. I'm not sure just how stupid that was. but she seems quite distracted by my fingering her that even if she could do some thing she didn't. her breast are small but warm and squishy. I'm definitely enjoying this... her eyes are rolling back in her head. leaning in I whisper to her...

Blake: don't worry... You'll get to experience the firepower of my battlecruiser before the night is done

>as much as torturing this little girl is fun I'm at my limit too.

Blake: soo... tell me just how do I fuck an ear? should I lubricate? do tell my pet... should I just squeeze in my meat or what?

Ophelia: YES yes yes fuck me fuck it just do it!

Blake: ...

>maybe I went to far?.. oh well.

Blake: Brb...

>I slip in the washroom real quick and try to find a liquid that can double as a lube. lets see now... nothing that stings, nothing to soapy but it has to be slippery... ahh here we go... I manage to put my hands on some hand lotion and baby cream. just to test I put a drop on each finger and rub them in my ears... this will do... great... returning to my little nympho, I take off my shirt. she looks at me with impatience. I pour mounds of lotion on my raging hard-on and stoke it to spread it out evenly... I line up my cannon with her ear canal. grasping her head in both hands

Blake: brace for impact!

>ramming the cruiser as far in as it can go I violently pump in and out of her... I expected it to go deeper but, then again I'm not surprised that I can only fit about an inch in. even at that when I think about it that's pretty deep to be putting things in your ear... ether way she seems to love it. and I cant complain I guess. It's not amazing but its good enough to make me cum... just gotta go faster is all...

>>260363
Full speed ahead and fire all guns!

Broadside!

FlynnMerk 2010/11/28(Sun)10:58 No. 260423 ID: 12cc58
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>increasing speed really does the trick. the feeling of hot ear across my shaft runs jolts of pleasure to every part crotch. I can feel it. I'm close.

>>260366
>>260277

Blake: Yamato Cannon Fiiirrre!!!

>I came buckets. mounds of cum flow out her as I pull out. her head convulses lightly from the pleasure. I turn her head side ways to let the cum out, as I pat her head.

Blake: soo... how was it for you?

Ophelia: I came twice *ahh* three times...

Blake: I'm glad to hear that.

>her face changes again but this time for the better... her eyes are back to normal. full of tenderness and joy.

Ophelia: thank you so much Blake. now take off these pants for me and claim your prize.

>prize? cumming in you wasn't my prize? I like were this is going...

ok in light of not turning BlakeQuest into: SexQuest the quest. I propose we lay off the sex a little. so here's what I'll do: you suggest two or three posses and orifices and I'll draw up some porn resuming the rest of the night in a montage.

for all those who don't like porn please bear with it...

-Cleveland Steamer
-A orifice you made yourself

[Well it's too late for that. There is such a thing as fading to black, you know.]

>>260424
NOSEHOLE, then EYEBALLS.

There's no turning back NOW.

Hey guys, what's going on in this thread?

>>260423
Oh... Right then. I'll just be.. over.. here... chuckling.

>>260425
>>260427
...I hate you all.

Claim the prize.

>>252195
I'm gonna vote against eye-sex.

Ugh, seriously guys.

... I say, you have a not-rabid tied up girl at your mercy here. What else do you feel like doing with her?

For lowest risk-mess possible, hmn. Maybe now she'll suck it without trying to take a bite out of it, y'know.

FlynnMerk 2010/11/28(Sun)13:10 No. 260440 ID: 12cc58
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>>260430
>>260427
>>260425

Blake: oye! that's not funny Eden. you know I would never hurt a friend like that.

>>260423
Vaginal sex in the missionary posistion.

>>260448
You're sick.

Did you jizz in her brain via cartoon physics? How's that working out?

>>260440
Well, noseholes at least lead to the throat by way of sinuses...

FlynnMerk 2010/11/28(Sun)14:48 No. 260460 ID: 12cc58
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Ophelia: you fight with them to euh? yah they can be a pain...

Blake: ... did I say that out loud?

Ophelia: yup... you gotta work on that. but don't worry. I understand.

Blake: some how that doesn't surprise me

Ophelia: so what's Eden talking about?

Blake: well it want's me to hurt you and ...

Ophelia: oh do tell

Blake: they want me to break your eyes with my penis.

Ophelia: battle cruiser.

Blake: ...but some of them are telling me to just have sex with you. and some want me to just walk away.

Ophelia: hehe... yah I know how you feel. look do what you think feels right.

Blake: yah... your right. euhmm... Ophelia? why do you were that jacket?

Ophelia: I'm dangerous. but its not because I'm crazy. it was my choice to loose my hands.

Blake: I... wow. really what happened?

Ophelia: I don't want to talk about it.

>I've never seen Ophelia this normal, she;s like a different person.

Ophelia: Blake your a great friend to me.

Blake: we only just met?

Ophelia: yah but you talked to me. and I'm insane. you gave me pleasure were most men would run away. and you defended me against your own mind. I've never really had a friend before. but I think you cut it.

>...

Ophelia: Blake... I feel like we could go far you and I. but... but if your Eden cant accept my fantasizes. I just want to be your friend. but no matter what. I am your friend now and there's nothing you can do to stop that.

Blake: ... I'll have to think about that. but for now I just... really need to feel your warmth.

>normal sex feels strange after all that. I feel like a nerd in the missionary position, but at least my minds at ease... there's so many looneys on this train... I cant wait to get off and on with my life... I'm sorry for getting angry at you Eden... with out my memories I have nothing but you... I need to be more considerate about your feelings... but lets talk about this later... for now lets just enjoy this... you do feel it right? I kinda remember you telling me that we feel the same things...

Ophelia: its kinda odd having sex with some one who's having an internal monologue.

Blake: sorry...

>screen fades to black

guys I'm a emotional wreck here and I cant keep working on this today. so I'll log off for a few days and see how I feel after that. see yah

Well that adds a little more interest in Ophelia's character, not just a nyphomatic psycho, but someone who potentially can hear us as well. The question is, then, whether or not we can consciously direct her in the same matter we do you, Blake. Or whether we want to. It WOULD explain, to a degree, why she's in a straight jacket, but she claims that this isn't the case. Regardless, YOU do need to make sure to keep the fact that you're hearing voices (and terribly chaotic voices from extremely different perspectives) to yourself, lest YOU end up in a straight jacket. Wonder if it's a family curse or something. But in regards to her, for the moment it seems fair enough to keep her reasonably close at hand, and if she doesn't want to necessarily talk about why she's in that jacket and her story in general, you can always ask others about her. I mean, she's got family on the train you can talk to, and maybe other passengers like Rover can clue you in to more details.

>>260460
What are you apologising for? If you can't tell your own headvoices to fuck off then who can you tell to fuck off?

By the way, you should probably see if you can find the smoker goblin and try to pump him for some more information on that Keeper deal. Seems like some shady shit. Oh, and possibly ask why there is such a large amount of freaky shit on this train.

Also, watch out for ghosts. Hmm, got any salt with you by any chance??