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1092905 No. 1092905 ID: c540e0

NSFW (obviously)
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No. 1092920 ID: c540e0
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1092920

>>1092913
>>1092914

Grim ~ O’Malleys it is. Maybe I find someone to make his dreams come true there, hopefully Petyr will wingman me, if he isn’t busy trying it on with someone else…. that Petyr…

Grim~ I’ll finish up my work and head out to the bar then.
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No. 1092921 ID: c540e0
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1092921

O’ Malleys - Nowhere else will you find such a wretched hive of scum and villainy.

Looks like Petyr has already got his flirt on down there.
Grim also notices some of his other colleagues too.
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No. 1092924 ID: 92fc95

Hey is that booty thicc enough for you?
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No. 1092931 ID: 5ebd37

Approach the bar all casual-like. Offer to buy her a drink to gauge her interest.
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No. 1092948 ID: c540e0
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1092948

Grim enters the bar. The smell of beer with a slight hint of vomit embraces him like an old friend. O’Malleys the fakest Irish pub in Chicago. It’s where the city boys come to play and the city girls get dragged along too.

Grim descends the stairs and meets Petyr who has some drunk floozy on his lap. Looks like Gerald the fun vampire is also here…hooray.

Petyr - ‘Grimmy!! You made it. You have to meet Suzy. Suzy is a nail technician. No… a nail artist should I say and she’s also a dancer! What do you make of that! ‘

Suzy. The floozy is called Suzy. God does Grim hate when he calls him Grimmy.

Grim - ‘Wow very… impressive. Nice to meet you Suzy. ‘

Suzy - ‘Pleasure to meet you Grimmy! Petyr was just talking about you, he’s sooo funny! Did you fall asleep at work baby? Aww you must work so hard!’

Grim- ‘Yeah… haha, Petyr told you about that huh? Yep it’s a busy time at the moment’

Gerald - ‘ Alseep at work were you Grim? I always get my 8 hours. I was watching a podcast about sleep recently. You have to get at least eight hours every night in order for the brain to enter REM sleep. REM sleep is the phase of sleep when…’

Grim wishes for death.

Grim-‘ Yeah… really interesting, I’m just gonna get myself a beer Gerald I’ll be right back!’

>>1092924

Grim can’t help but notice an outrageously thick woman sitting by the bar all alone. This woman seems to have a mountain where most women have a butt. Grim likes this.

>>1092931

Grim wants to approach the woman but it looks like she has a full drink in her hand already

What should Grim do?

Stay and talk to Gerald? Ask Petyr for advice or wingmanship (a little awkward with Suzy the floozy there)? Come up with some other plan?
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No. 1092949 ID: c540e0

I haven’t played on tgchan for a while so I’m going to make mistakes. Plus I’m still finding my style in both the art and the writing hope you can bare with to make this enjoyable. Any suggestions or advice will be appreciated. In the discussion side of things. Finally, hope you enjoy and feel free to push this is ungodly directions the artsyle is adaptable
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No. 1092950 ID: 8f9bc4

hit on petyr
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No. 1092952 ID: 2f41db

>>1092948
Three o clock.
Dont stare.
Witness the thiccness
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No. 1092969 ID: c540e0
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1092969

Grim goes to the bar and buys an overpriced bottle of Glug.
He brings himself closer to the sexy 3’ O clock.

It looks like she’s watching the game on the TV
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No. 1092976 ID: c5529d

Ask her who's winning, and talk about the game with her, like what team she's rooting for and stuff. From there, you can fish for similar interests and stuff! Basically you want to try to form a friendship with her before you try to hook up with her later. Takes time, man.

if you're not that into sports, uhhhh... pretend to be?
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No. 1092989 ID: 5ebd37

>>1092976
Even if you're not into sports you can still use it as an icebreaker.
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No. 1093003 ID: c540e0
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1093003

>>1092976
>>1092989

*Welp* Nothing ventured nothing gained.

Grim - ‘ Looks like a pretty exciting game, who are you rooting for?’

Big Booty Cutie - ‘ It’s pretty a pretty boring one actually …but the Bulls are playing… I’m guessing you’re not a fan?’

Grim- ‘Hehe, sure I’m a fan! 7 foot black guys, running up and down, what’s not to love? …go Bulls! How are we doing?

Big Booty Cutie - ‘ Losing. Badly.’

Grim - ‘Oh.’

Big Booty Cutie- ‘Do you have a thing for big tall black guys?’

Grim ‘ Not especially… I do have a thing for women like you though.’
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No. 1093004 ID: c540e0
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1093004

Big Booty Cutie - ‘ I guess you’re not so bad yourself’

Grim - ‘I’m Grimmley by the way, my friends call me Grim’

Raquelle - ‘Enchenté. Raquelle. Should I call you Grim then?’

Grim - ‘I guess that depends on whether we’re going to be friends’

Raquelle - ‘ I guess it does. I have lots of friends. don’t really need more friends.’

Grim - ‘Neither do I, I guess we’re not going to be friends then’

Raquelle- ‘ I guess not. Quel dommage.

Grim - ‘ I figured you were French.

Raquelle- ‘Very perceptive monsieur… Perhaps we should be enemies instead’

Grim - ‘that sounds more exciting… I’ll start by rooting for the Lakers’

Raquelle- ‘Very funny, You are a joker’
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No. 1093005 ID: 2f41db

>>1093003
Lean on bar
Watch game
Tell her youre a casual fan.
You Enjoy the game but havent ever really watched regularly.

Ask details at points.
Someone makes a play, good or bad, ask if hes having a good/bad game.

If shes a fan, an arsehole trying to chew on her booty is going to annoy her more than normal.
Youd be competing with something she already likes.
So.
Enjoy it with her.
Let her talk about it.
When the game ends youll already be talking and have a topic.

OR

Sfep back three paces,
Stretch legs and arms.
Assume diving position
DIVING BUTTCRACK MOTORBOAT
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No. 1093006 ID: c540e0
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1093006

Grim and Raquelle were interrupted by a loud shout from across the bar.

Petyr - ‘HEY GRIMMY!’

Grim looks to see Petyr and Suzy over by the pool table.

Petyr - ‘GRIMMY! Come shoot some pool with us!


How should Grim proceed?
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No. 1093009 ID: 5491c7

Raquelle did say that the game on tv is boring. So ask if she wants to play or watch you play billiards.
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No. 1093012 ID: 2f41db

>>1093009
Yes!

Take your battle to the baize.

Lots of leaning over tables in that game.
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No. 1093031 ID: f2320a

>>1093009
Support.... also i hope she has a thicc belly
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No. 1093032 ID: c540e0
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1093032

>>1093005

Believe me, Grim would like nothing more than the aforementioned “butt-crack motorboat” but Grim has a life outside of bars that he somewhat values. Pursuit of the “butt-crack motorboat” may require a less direct approach.

Sports small talk doesn’t seem so bad though.

>>1093012
>>1093009

Grim - ‘If you’re finding the game boring, why not join me at the pool table? After all, if you’re my enemy you should delight at seeing me get my ass handed to me’.

Raquelle takes a long sip from her wine glass and seems to think about it for a second.
Raquelle agrees.
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No. 1093035 ID: c540e0
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1093035

Grim and Raquelle make their way over to the pool table where she is introduced to Petyr and Suzy.

Petyr- ‘Wow, what a beautiful little thing you are’
Petyr kisses her hand causing Raquelle to blush.

Raquelle- ‘Enchenté monsieur’

A pang of jealousy runs over Grim. Suzy didn’t seem so happy either.

Gerald mostly skulked by the other side of the table, nursing his drink but briefly introduced himself when prompted by Raquelle.
Mostly he was ignored which was a pretty standard affair both in and out of the office.

Suzy - ‘Honey, I have to say you have, the biggest, juiciest ass I have ever seen!’

And just like that Suzy, Petyr, Raquelle and Grim all had a good laugh and the ice was broken.

The teams were quickly agreed upon.
Petyr and Suzy v Grim and Raquelle.

Gerald watched.
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No. 1093037 ID: c540e0
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1093037

Grim and Raquelle agreed that even though they were enemies they would agree not to sabotage one another throughout the game. Conversation, flirtation and banter flowed freely between the four of them (Gerald was also there).

Raquelle had the first shot and >>1093031
>>1093012 Grim took the opportunity to enjoy seeing her bend over the table whenever it was her turn.

Grim got Raquelle and himself a second drink about half way through the game. Grim learned that Raquelle was 25, and PHD student from the Heights studying at Chicago State, she didn’t have a lot of money or a boyfriend. Apparently she’d recently broken up with a villain of an ex.
Raquelle confessed that her huge ass made her insecure and she didn’t know how to deal with all the attention it brought her.

The game was going well until Suzy accidentally potted the black ball.

Petyr - ‘Are you guys hungry? I think Suzy and I are gonna get a late night snack?’

Raquelle - ‘ I don’t mind’

What should Grim do next? Join the crowd, split off with Raquelle, stay at the bar, suggest a nightclub, other?

The world is your Oyster, the night is young and Grims dreams seem one step closer to becoming reality.
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No. 1093043 ID: c5529d

Ask Raquelle where she wants to eat.
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No. 1093051 ID: 2f41db

>>1093037
Food is an excellent idea.

Ask her if she knows anywhere good around here she could show you.

Opens the chance after eating to offer to show her somewhere you like.
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No. 1093080 ID: c540e0

Do we need a quest discussion for this? Maybe not but it's there if you want it.

https://questden.org/kusaba/questdis/res/142330.html

Use it as a space for constructive criticism, art, Q+A, behind the scenes and speculation.
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No. 1093109 ID: 92fc95

Good gravy. Update that woman from enemy to nemesis, because that ass must be *destroyed*!

Know any fun late-night spots? I could go for Thai foot. Peanut sauce is the best. Does Raquelle like peanut sauce? What does Raquelle like? Whatever it is, I bet you have some or could get some.
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No. 1093119 ID: c540e0
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1093119

>>1093043
>>1093051
>>1093109

Grim- 'How about Thai food? I could go for some peanut sauce to soak up the beer'

Raquelle- 'I'm alergic to peanuts. But Thai sounds good to me, know anywhere nice?'

Petyr- 'Thai, great. Suzy?'

Suzy- 'Yummers!'

Gerald- 'You guys go, I'm gonna hit the hay. Never much had the stomach for foreign foods!'

Grim- 'Get home safe bud. Theres a place just a couple minutes walk down the street called Thai Foot. It's fast food but I think they open late.' >>1093109 Yes I know this was a typo but I quite like the sound of a resturant called Thai Foot

The crew move to start walking out the Irish pub, but notice that it had started raining heavily.

Stranger- 'Hey I hope you guys aren't plannin' on walking out there in that rainstorm? Here take my umbrella.'

Suzy- 'Wow thanks hon. Won't you be needing that?'

Stranger- 'No I will not, to be honest I've been fixin' for an excuse to get red of it. It's a sentimental thing and not in a good way. Just don't go throwing it away now.'

Suzy- 'Oh my god, you're a lifesaver. Thanks so much.

Now partially protected from the elements, the four made their way to Thai Foot.
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No. 1093120 ID: c540e0
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1093120

The resturant wasn't too crowded and the four ordered at the front and took their meals to the table.

Hoping he might kiss Raquelle later, Grim abstained from peanut sauce, instead opting for a noodle dish. Raquele had the same.

Grim and Raquelle really hit it off and Grim did his best to try and turn up the heat, with small toches, the odd inuendo and a little under table footsie. The beer and the wine had certainly helped with that.
Despite sitting together as a four, Grim and Petyr hardly said a word to eachother as both men gave their full attention to their ad-hoc dates for the evening.
Grim and Raquelle barely even noticed Petyr and Suzy getting a little too handsy for polite company. Grimm and Suzy and were so engrossed talking to eachother that they altogether missed when Pete and Suzy left the resturant (with the umbrella no- less). I think they call that an Irish goodbye.

Suzy opened up more about her work and her life. She told Grim that she liked him but is looking for a boyfriend and she won't be best pleased if he is only interested in her for her massive ass.
Grim told her that while he couldn't deny that's why he first approached her, he had really enjoyed the evening that they had already spent together and if this was as far as things went he would still go home happy.
To reassure her, Grim gave her his number and she gave him hers.

Once meals were finished, bellies were full and physical chemitry was palpable between them there was only one question left to ask...

Where next?
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No. 1093123 ID: c5529d

maybe a nice walk with her to wrap things up to and get to know her more. Could probably walk around Millennium Park even.
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No. 1093124 ID: 84117e

>>1093120
To a sturdy bed, hopefully.
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No. 1093167 ID: c540e0

>>1093123
In this weather?
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No. 1093168 ID: c5529d

>>1093167
ah, nevermind then
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No. 1093203 ID: c540e0
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1093203

>>1093124

Grim- ‘So Raquelle… my place or yours?’

Raquelle- ‘Wow, you are bold sir. But I’m warning you, if you turn out to be just like the other guys who say anything to get in my pants and then disappear I’m probably going to kill myself’

Grim- ‘Woah, that’s quite extreme. I promise I’m not like the other guys. I like you. I’ve had fun tonight, a lot more than I was expecting to. And like I said if you want to call it a night now and meet up again another time that’s fine with me too, I’ll happily pay for your Uber home.

Raquelle- ‘It’s just I am so tired of being used by guys who just chase after me because they like my stupid, fucking ass but they don’t care about me. I didn’t choose to look this way, it’s just how I was born. Sometimes I think it’s a curse not a blessing. Maybe… maybe I think you should pay for my Uber home’

Grim - ‘I understand. It would be my pleasure.’

Raquelle- ‘But I also think you should join me in it’

Grim- ‘Well that…would be even more of a pleasure.’

For the first time, Grim leaned over and kissed Raquelle on the lips. The chemistry he felt was electrifying. Her soft mouth cushioning his, the sweet and salty taste of her, he wondered how we had got so lucky.

Grim ordered an Uber to Raquelle’s address in the heights. It was quite far from his office, he realised he would have to get up early tomorrow…granted if she allowed him to stay the night.

The Uber arrived quickly and they dashed through the downpour to get in and sped away to Raquelle’s apartment complex.
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No. 1093206 ID: c540e0
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1093206

Grim and Raquelle had to dash once again through the rain to her apartment block. They got soaked as Raquelle fiddled with the combination to get in. Maybe she was nervous because she kept getting the password wrong before finally getting into the lobby. By the time they got in they looked like they had just come out of a swimming pool.

Raquelle called the elevator and they kissed again while they waited. It was as electrifying as the first one.

Raquelle traced a finger across the contour of Grim’s chest.

Raquelle- ‘I suppose we must get out of these wet clothes.’

Grim- ‘ I guess we don’t have a choice. Such a shame.’

Raquelle- ‘In french we say Quel dommage’.

Grim- ‘I like the sound of that word. I like learning french from you’.

Raquelle- ‘Then peut-être I should teach you what the French know best: how to love’.

Grim- ‘I like the sound of that too’.
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No. 1093207 ID: 5ebd37

Given the weather, maybe you can get a nice hotel room nearby.
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No. 1093211 ID: c540e0
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1093211

Raquelle’s apartment was a small studio with a bathroom and a kitchen. It was much smaller than Grim’s and was barely an upgrade over cheap student accommodation. Grim didn’t question it.
He was briefly introduced to Bizou her cat who was sleeping on a dresser and payed them no mind.

Raquelle wasted no time stripping off her waterlogged dress and revealing to Grim her undeniable body.
Grim could not hold back. He had to feel her and before she was even fully undressed he grabbed a hadful of her soft and doughy rear end.

Raquelle - ‘ oh mon diue , so rough!

Grim - ‘ I couldn’t resist any longer. Sorry. I can be gentler.’

Raquelle- ‘ No, don’t be… I like it’ .
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No. 1093212 ID: c540e0

I think it’s clear where this is going.
What should Grim do next?
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No. 1093214 ID: c540e0

>>1093120
[spoiler] fuck I realise I confused Suzy and Raquelle here. Grim and Raquelle were hitting it off and Petyr left with Suzy [spoiler/]
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No. 1093224 ID: eb0a9c

It's a trap...
RUN!
RUN FOR YOUR THIGHS!!!
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No. 1093225 ID: 273c18

>>1093211
She likes it rough huh? Ask what kinda shit she's into. Spanking?
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No. 1093226 ID: 106d8c

>>1093212
Prone bone
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No. 1093231 ID: 872553

>>1093212
This is the part where Grimm grabs her and makes his dreams come true

>>1093226
No, prone bone means you cant feel the other side. Her tits and lips are thicc too. You gotta enjoy that.
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No. 1093262 ID: c5529d

>>1093231
Agreed. Gotta love all of her and not just her thicc ass
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No. 1093285 ID: 92fc95

Gat DAMN! Bite it, you nasty little freak! And then pull her panties off with your teeth.
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No. 1093315 ID: c540e0
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1093315

>>1093225

Grim- ‘we can play rough if you like that’

Raquelle- ‘mmm, yes daddy’

Grim - ‘maybe I should spank you then’

Raquelle- ‘there’s no maybe about it’

Grim grabbed Raquelle by the hips and pulled her close to him. He couldn’t stop himself from grabbing and groping her body all over. Her hips her, beautiful breasts, all of it was his to take.

>>1093231

He crouched low and squeezed and sucked on her breasts.
He wanted to prove that it wasn’t just her ass he cared about. But it didn’t matter, she was all gorgeous. Sexy all over. All woman for him to appreciate.
Raquelle moaned in delight and Grim felt his blood rush between his legs springing his shaft up to a 45 degree angle.
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No. 1093316 ID: c540e0
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1093316

The two kissed and clumsily stumbled backward towards the bed. Grim roughly turned Raquelle around and pushed her down onto the bed and she landed on all fours in front of him. She was like a beast in heat as she presented her ass up to him.
In a fashion he has only dreamed about he dived face first into her.
He roughly grabbed the full circumference of her colossal read and lapped at her like dog.
She moaned again

Raquelle - ‘Ahhh just like that Daddy’.

Grim was frenzied and relentless. He could taste her and every lick made her wetter and wetter until she was gushing. He didn’t stop to breathe, he only wanted to taste her and make her feel his pleasure as hers.

Her moans became louder, her body started to rock, occasionally she would twitch. Grim knew she was building up to something and pressed on as seconds dragged into minutes.

Raquelle screamed out incoherent while her body and her pussy twitched and bucked against him. She locked her legs around his back and Grim found his mouth and his chin covered in her ambrosia as she climaxed for the first time.

She collapsed a sweaty, panting mess and Grim took this as the point to finally mount her.
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No. 1093318 ID: c540e0
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1093318

They were in the throes of passion there was no thought to protection. Grim quickly pushed himself inside of her and felt her pull him in.
Instinctively they rocked against one another, finding a natural rhythm and building momentum.
The bed creaked and Grim remembered not to be gentle. He squeezed her cheeks hard, and then rubbed them gently. Suddenly without warning he lifted his hand and brought it down with a loud smack.
Raquelle gasped and Grim worried he’d hit too hard. Instantly his fears were dismissed.

Raquelle- ‘Ahh yes Daddddyyy…more!’

Grim obeyed and spanked her again and again and again. Each time as his hand collided with her soft, ginormous, ass he felt her tighten around his throbbing cock.

He grabbed a fistful of her hair and pulled it back. She let out a an overextended moan. There were no words coming from her by this point, only vowels.

He spanked her again and she reached a falsetto tone.

As the pleasure built, Grim realised he was getting close. He was determined not to finish before her. Her moans got longer and higher and Grim couldn’t hold out for much longer.

Grim- ‘I think I’m gonna come’

Raquelle- ‘ahh, do it daddy, come inside me! Make me yours give it to me. Cum inside your slutty cunt’

Grim was taken aback by the words coming out of her and the dirty talk sent him over the edge.

He erupted inside of her. Waves of hedonic warmth emanated from him into her and then pushed back onto him as she began to quake and vibrate with him. They were climaxing together and their joint moans harmonised.

They held their position for as long as they could before finally collapsing, exhausted onto the soft mattress below.

Before either could utter a word, they were both sound asleep.
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No. 1093322 ID: c540e0
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1093322

Grim awoke with a start as the morning light illuminated the quiet bedroom. Raquelle was nestled against him and he suddenly felt calm and at peace.

What a night it had been.

Grim looked at the clock. It was early but Grim also had to get to work. He’d also have to get home first to change his clothes.
He looked at his phone, if he didn’t leave now he was probably gonna be late.

He looked over at Raquelle. She was every bit as beautiful in the morning light as she was the night before.

He thought about waking her, but she looked so peaceful. He could always text her so she knew he didn’t just fuck her and run like she was afraid of.

What should Grim do?
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No. 1093330 ID: c5529d

Why not just wear the clothes you wore yesterday to work? That way you won't have to waste time going home to change, and have more time to wait for Raquelle to wake up. it's a sacrifice in the name of love!

For now, shower, iron your old clothes to get rid of the wrinkles so that you don't show up unprofessional to work since you're wearing the same clothes (unless she doesn't have a clothing iron) and hey, prepare her breakfast so it's ready for her when she wakes up. Be a handy boifren.
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No. 1093332 ID: 5ebd37

Not a text, leave a short hand written letter assuring her that you had an amazing night, and want to see more of her. But you can't miss work so you left her to her rest. Use a bit of flowery language but not too much more than your regular speech.
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No. 1093338 ID: 986a04

>>1093332
I support this, but i'm hoping we still know her number, right? At the very least we need to be able to message her later.
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No. 1093342 ID: 080f8c

>>1093322
Wake her up gently, preferably by embracing her from behind. Leaving a message might accidentally make her freak out when she awakes alone
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No. 1093593 ID: 92fc95

BITE THAT PEACH.

Yeah, wake her up sensually, let her know you need more of that ASAP, but you gotta go handle business for a while. MAYBE have a morning quickly. Then walk off whistling, with a jaunt in your step.
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No. 1093675 ID: c540e0
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1093675

>>1093342
After much deliberation, Grim decided it’s best to gently wake Raquelle to let her know he has to go.

Carefully he put his hand on her shoulder and politely jostled her awake.

Grim - ‘Hey Good morning’

Raquelle - ‘Gmmshmmph’

Grim - ‘sorry to wake you up, I gotta run or I’ll be late for work, you go back to sleep,

Raquelle - ‘What time is it?’

Grim - ‘It’s 5:15, you should go back to sleep…I had a great time last night’

Raquelle - ‘Me too… kiss me before you go’

Grim bent over and kissed her on the lips one last time. He reassured her that he had her number and she told him she would text him when she got up.
Grim wondered whether this would be the start of something or whether it was just a passing moment.

He ordered an Uber, dressed and in just over an hour he was already home.
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No. 1093676 ID: c540e0
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1093676

Grim made it in to work and looked for Petyr to discuss the night before.
Petyr was conspicuously absent however.
Gerald wasn’t of course and he pressed Grim for the salacious details about the night before. Grim resisted as best he could and messaged Petyr but received no reply.

The morning was spent working with his colleague Mandy and being micro managed by their line manager Steven. Grim didn’t mind Steven except when he got too hands on with his work.

All the morning Grim waited for a text from Raquelle or Petyr. Raquelle had said she would message him but then again she had just woken up. Maybe she forgot she had said it. Maybe she was still asleep.

Grim started to feel a little anxious.

What should Grim do next?
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No. 1093687 ID: 0efa55

>>1093676
Message Raquelle. I dont know about Petyr though.
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No. 1093688 ID: 8f9bc4

It was just your first date, so don't be too clingy.
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No. 1093707 ID: c5529d

You got reception on your phone right now?

anyways, give her some time. Probably asleep, or doing her morning routine. Worst case scenerio, she probably forgot since you did talk to her pretty early while she was still sleepy. If she doesn't text you by lunch time, then you could try texting her, say something like "Had a really good time last night, lemme know when you wanna meet up again" or something like that.

Can probably ask Gerald if he heard from your friend Petytr lately since last night
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No. 1093727 ID: 92fc95

Give it a minute. Focus more on work, enjoy your lunch. Check back in around 2 or so, text her then.
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No. 1093867 ID: c540e0
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1093867

Grim worked through the morning and resisted the urge to text Raquelle. Suddenly his phone pinged and he saw she had texted him.
She had sent him a sexy picture from her bathroom and a message. Her ass was still sore. Grim could see the red marks he had left on her from the night before. He quickly scanned around to check nobody had seen.

Grim started to reply when Steven walked over with a phone in hand and passed it to Grim.

Steven - ‘you’d better take this’

Grim - ‘hello, this is Grim’

Voice- ‘Mr Mountbatten, this is Officer Smith, we need you to come to the police station immediately in relation to an incident that took place last night’

Grim- ‘Oh woah, ok. Can I ask what happened?’

Smith - ‘We are still confirming the details but there has been a murder and you were one of the last people to see the victim. We need you to come in for questioning straight away.’

Grim- ‘Is it Petyr? Is he ok?’

Smith- ‘I’m not going to go into details over the phone, you just need to come to the station’

Grim- ‘Am I a suspect?’

He hung up before Grim could say anything further. What was happening? Grim packed up his things.

What should he say to Raquelle? What should Grim do?
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No. 1093868 ID: c540e0

>>1093707
Grim asked Gerald if he had heard from Petyr, Gerald said not since they separated last night.

Gerald- ‘Where are you off to in such a hurry?’

What should Grim tell Gerald?
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No. 1093869 ID: aec603

>>1093868
Tell him we're being called by the police to the station, but we don't know why.
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No. 1093870 ID: eb0a9c

You fool
Raquelle has been serial killing so she can anal-vore her targets and grow her thiccness!

Or you're insane
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No. 1093873 ID: c5529d

Well, do not worry. You have an alibi, and a witness to your alibi (your new girlfriend). You also have proof. You and/or her probably have a receipt to the place you visited, and what time you paid it, and some kind of record on either of your phones about taking an Uber of where you went to and from and what time.

Other than that, always remember you have the right to remain silent until you get a lawyer appointed to you to do the talking for you if they start accusing you and things get dicey. Don't let them scare you into lying or telling you that silence is an admittance of guilt. Let the lawyer handle it

Speaking of which, best not to tell Gerald and Raquelle about a murder happening, feels confidential right now and will probably worry them.

Tell Gerald there has been an emergency, and you have to leave work.

text a sunglasses emoji to Raquelle, and then text her you had a wonderful night and would love to see her again (don't schedule a time just yet, not until we get this police business straightened up)
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No. 1093879 ID: f2320a

>>1093873
also dont drink any offered cups of water as due to a legal loophole discarded cups and shit/piss can be used to sample DNA and those incidents of that DNA being used to plant "evidence"
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No. 1093901 ID: 92fc95

"And I bet you want it sorer too, you little minx. ;)" Keep flirting with her if you've got the stomach for it, in light of what's going on with the cops. Make your excuses at work and head to the police station.
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No. 1093902 ID: 273c18

>>1093868
Tell Gerald it's an emergency, don't give any details yet. Police don't like it when information spreads. Tell Raquelle that's fucking sexy.
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No. 1093954 ID: c540e0
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1093954

>>1093873
Grim realised that he had an alabi with Raquelle and proof in the form of the Uber receipts, witnesses at Thai Foot, Suzy had seen him and Gerald too. He relaxed a little.

>>1093902
Grim considered telling Gerald about the murder but decided against it. Better not to get in the way of the police, he'd find out soon enough anyway.

Grim- 'Gotta head off Ger, there's been an emergency. Will chat about it with you later'

>>1093901

Grim thought of what to say to Raquelle. In the end he wrote:

'You're so sexy'
'I bet you want it sorer too, I can help you there'
'Sunglasses Emoji'

Grim hit send and got a taxi to the police station.

When he arrived he was greeted by two Police officers: Officer Smith a Large, mid-forities, no nonsense type African American man who Grim had spoken to on the phone and Officer Black who was an older, balding man who really looked like he had seen some shit over the years.
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No. 1093955 ID: 58dd24

Thicc alert, 8 o'clock
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No. 1093957 ID: c540e0
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1093957

Officer Black: 'I want you to take a look at this Mr Mountbatten'

Black handed him a photograph of a crime scene. It was Suzy from last night.
She was lying in a pool of her own blood, covered in bruses and slashes. There was a gaping wound in her abdomen and blood spattered all over the floor.

Grim: 'Jesus fuck'

Black: 'Yeah that's about right. Can you identify this woman?'

Grim: 'Yeah, that's Suzy...I don't know her last name. We just met last night'

Smith: Suzanne McTavish. She was found dead this morning. We'll need to ask you some questions about what happened last night.
Now you're not under arrest but it's really important that you tell us as much as you can.

>>1093873

Grim: 'I think I should probably get my Lawyer'

Smith: 'Oh we can play it that way. But In these early hours It's important we find out as much as we can as soon as possible.'

Grim: 'Yeah I understand...Was Petyr killed too?'

Black: 'Petyr Sarasanovich is currently missing, and we have issued a warrent for his immediate arrest. If he's a friend of yours, we need to find him as quickly as possible. Now if you'll come with us to the interview room we need to record your testimony.'

Smith: 'We also need you to contact two other people you were with last night and tell them to come to the station immediately. That's this man and a man and this blonde woman you were identified with on CCTV.'

Black pointed at his computer screen at blurry camera footage from O'Malleys. He pointed to Gerald and Raquelle. How they had found Grim in the first place was a mystery to him.

What should Grim do next? Get a Lawyer? What should he tell Raquelle and Gerald?
Wtf happened last night
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No. 1093959 ID: b3eab7

Lawyer up first and foremost, as recommended by every lawyer on Youtube.

Check with the lawyer what you should do; if the lawyer agrees, call Raquelle and Gerald, tell them there's been a crime at O'Malley's and they should come to the police station. If they ask for details, tell them the cops don't like this stuff being discussed over the phone.
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No. 1093999 ID: 273c18

>>1093957
Wait why are the police telling you to contact the other people? Shouldn't they be doing the contacting? How about you can give them the phone numbers of whoever they need to contact.
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No. 1094042 ID: 92fc95

Holy shit man. Lawyer up for sure. Give them the others' contact info.

... Can you spare a glance at that thiccness?
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No. 1094062 ID: c540e0
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1094062

Grim gives them Raquelle and Gerald’s contact details.
At that moment another text from Raquelle comes in. Grim doesn’t dare open it in front of the officers.

>>1093873
>>1093959
>>1094042

Grim decided it’s best to get a lawyer before he says anything further and risks incriminating himself.

Grim has 3 choices of lawyer he could call.

1 - Josh Krypkey.

Josh is Grim’s family lawyer. He has represented the Mountbatten family in several legal matters although never a criminal case so far as he is aware.
Involving Krypkey inevitably means involving Grim’s family which means complications. But this is a serious matter, maybe that’s the best course of action for the circumstance.

His fee is pretty high but he’s a reliable guy.
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No. 1094064 ID: c540e0
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1094064

2 -Allison Jaffe

Allison is lawyer that Grim became friends with at university. They were not great friends but they ran in similar circles. Honestly Grim always thought she was a bit of a bitch but he remembered that she would get good grades and she was a criminal lawyer.
Grim hoped she would remember him positively, the last time they had met he had drunkenly made a reference to her weight that didn’t go down so well. But that was a long time ago.

Money wise he didn’t know what to expect.
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No. 1094065 ID: eb0a9c

Recommend you take (1). You're dealing with an adversary who is willing to murder people to get what they want, so you need to ensure you have the full strength of the law guarding your ass in the aftermath.
If your family is still talking about your ass-fetish instead of murder drama for the next few months, hire a psychologist and your family lawyer again.
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No. 1094066 ID: c540e0
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1094066

3 -Sam Rugg

Sam represented a rogue choice. He was an attorney that Grim had met when he was dealing with a fender bender issue a couple of years ago. Grim had lost the case but Sam was actually the one representing the other guy. Grim was totally innocent but Sam was able to twist the whole thing against him. He was an asshole but it was pretty impressive.
Grim remembered that Sam was pretty cheap for a lawyer.
On the other hand, that was a car incident this was murder.

Who should Grim choose?
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No. 1094111 ID: 7de2b4

Josh, no question. This is pretty important. If he's not the right kind of attorney, he can point you in the direction of one.

What's the deal with your family?
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No. 1094113 ID: b3eab7

Go for the family attorney, yes.
Even if it means involving family... better the devil you know.
And as >>1094111 said, if he's not the right kind of attorney, referring you to one is also his job.
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No. 1094124 ID: 2f41db

>>1094066
Josh.
Youre not arrested, but let them know the details.
With luck he wont be necessary, but better to have him ready incase the coos decide to be assholes
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No. 1094245 ID: c5529d

Joshy Woshy is the way to go (don't call him that)
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No. 1094342 ID: c540e0
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1094342

>>1094124
>>1094245
>>1094113
>>1094111

Grim decided that Josh was the safest bet under the circumstances and gave him a call.
Josh told Grim not to panic and that he’d be there within the hour.

Grim waited in the reception area and weighed up whether he should request a cup of coffee from the police but decided against it until he was offered.
Not long after waiting Raquelle called him asking him what was going on and why she was being summoned to the station. He tried to reassure her, advised her to call a lawyer and told her he’d meet her there when she arrived.
Grim then called his work to tell them that there was a personal emergency and he wouldn’t be in for the rest of the day. They already knew, Gerald had told them about the murder and that Petyr was missing. The idiot.

Before Grim knew it, Josh arrived and Grim caught him up to speed on all the details he knew.

Josh - ‘Listen Grim, you don’t have to tell them anything you don’t want to, I’ll be with you the entire time for the questions and I’ll stop them if they overstep. The most important thing is that you are innocent and I won’t allow them to try and corner you or confess to anything that you didn’t do.’

Grim felt reassured by this, a little. He was worried about Petyr.

Black led them to a deposition room and began the questioning.
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No. 1094343 ID: c540e0
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1094343

The questioning was intense.

Black asked about Grims relationships with Gerald, Suzy, Raquelle and Petyr.
Grim thought about naming Petyr as his best friend but decided just to say he was a friend.

Black - ‘I need you to tell me how your night went all the way to the last time you saw Petyr and Suzy’

Josh gave the ok and Grim began recounting the evening before trying not to miss any details.
He talked about the pool game, the drinks they had, leaving Gerald after the bar and deciding to get food after.

Black- ‘And after the bar?’

Grim- ‘We walked to the restaurant Thai Foot round the corner. We were there for maybe an hour or so but I can’t tell you exactly when Petyr left but he left with Suzy and I stayed with Raquelle’.

Grim then told them in brief detail about the rest of his night with Raquelle up until his arrival at the office the next morning.


Black- ‘Was Petyr acting strangely that evening? Did he say anything to you that might lead you to believe he was planning to commit a crime?’

Grim said he didn’t think so.

Black- ‘Now this is really important. Are there any details from last night no matter how small that you need to tell us?’
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No. 1094344 ID: c540e0
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1094344

Enter Flashback Mode.

You may now use flashbacks to relive any memory from the previous night in more detail.
Use this mode to try and provide useful insights to the cops that could help the case and find Petyr.

To select an event say RECALL (the event). You may also include FOCUS (detail) to focus on specific details you may have overlooked.

Good luck.
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No. 1094350 ID: 58dd24

When you first got there, Suzy was already on Petyr's lap, right? He described her as a nail artist and a dancer. Anything about anyone's facial expressions or reactions when you first showed up?
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No. 1094352 ID: eb0a9c

...Wait a minute.
Right before you left, one of the other patrons gave Suzy an umbrella. She said it was 'sentimental' and not to lose it.
What if... she was being targeted by a serial killer or something, and betrayed a random stranger by giving them the targeting beacon?
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No. 1094361 ID: 273c18

Sentimental and not in a good way... Maybe it was owned by a stalker or a violent ex-boyfriend and that's why the girl was murdered? Because using the umbrella made the murderer mistake her for the Stranger?
RECALL the Stranger giving the umbrella to her.
FOCUS on the Stranger. Give the police a description.
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No. 1094369 ID: 2f41db

>>1094352
Good instinct.

Dont share suspicions as thats not your job here, but it is a point of contact between another party and the victim.
Recalling this may turf up some details or at least someone who may know more.
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No. 1094502 ID: c540e0
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1094502

>>1094350

RECALL (Arrival at O’Malley’s). FOCUS (Expressions on the faces)

Grim couldn’t remember noticing anything wrong when he got to O’Malleys . Everyone just looked like their normal selves.
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No. 1094503 ID: c540e0
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1094503

>>1094352
>>1094361
>>1094369

RECALL (The woman with the umbrella). FOCUS (Descriptive details)

Grim recalled the woman with the umbrella. She was dressed kind of trashily. The kind of girl Grim would usually avoid at a bar like that to avoid getting certain illnesses.

She was wearing a jumper and a mini skirt that sat quite low on her hips. She had a lot of piercings including what looked like nipple piercings on her sizeable breasts.

She was maybe 30-35. She had a tattoo of a butterfly on her back left thigh. She wore thick rimmed, round glasses.

The Umbrella wasn’t particularly remarkable so far as he remembered, maybe some details about it were relevant, he wasn’t sure. But the more he thought about it, the more suspicious she seemed.

He described her and what happened with the umbrella to Officer black.

Black - ‘we did find an umbrella at the scene, it’s currently in evidence, we’ll take a closer look at it.’
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No. 1094504 ID: c540e0

Continue recall or end the questions and move on?
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No. 1094529 ID: 2f41db

>>1094504
There was a fat dude in the redtraunt and a guy just outside.

Recall if the guy left after them or if the guy outside approached.

Also, recall any overheared details from their conversation but consider before sharing any of them first.
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No. 1094530 ID: eb0a9c

Make sure you confirm Raquelle's face is the same as when you left it.
Come to think of it, she said she had an asshole of an ex-boyfriend...
Also, talk about the football game that was playing during pool, to prove you were watching it.
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No. 1098344 ID: c540e0
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1098344

Sorry I left this unfinished folks.

Life caught up with me and I’m not gonna take it to the end.

If you were curious ( the woman with the umbrella put an AirTag in the umbrella and followed Suzie and Petyr home where she and her boyfriend murdered them. Serial killer motive)

I was thinking of having it build to a confrontation with them but tbh here we started horny and it felt weird to take it Noir.

I learned a lot though. My art style came a fair way and I pushed myself a fair bit so I’m glad I did it.

Maybe I’ll make another quest some time when I have the time to follow through.

If you guys wanna carry on with the characters in the thread or let it die, all is well, feel free.

Grimm out.
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No. 1098363 ID: eb0a9c

Okay, one last question.
Were Grim's family secretly human traffickers or some other criminals against humanity? Hence them being as rich as the Fudge Industry?
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No. 1098370 ID: f2320a

>>1098344
Nah making it weird is even better its like real life fucked up stuff does not wait on your mood, also neat we figured it out pretty fast and its cool the flashback is more detailed its like we are partially face blind.
So was Raquelle going to get progressively fatter in our relationship with how his dream ended with chunky?
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No. 1098380 ID: c540e0

>>1098363
I think had you gone down the family route I’d have done more of a super controlling old money (source not specified) interfering family that put their reputation above the case and are embarrassed by Raquelle
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No. 1098381 ID: c540e0

>>1098370
Thanks I appreciate the feedback.
I never had that in mind specifically for Grim and Raquelle but I suppose I’d be open to if it was suggested.

Honestly I was considering having her leave Grimm to free him up for more interesting encounters with girls of varying sizes but eventually changed my mind.
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No. 1098390 ID: 2f41db

>>1098344
Thanks for the quest.
It was fun.
And thankyou for the denouement.
Its nice to know how things would have played out or at least one possibility.
Gives closure.
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No. 1098395 ID: 43abac

>>1098344
Damn. Well, at least you bothered to say it. I suppose we got to sleep with Raquelle, so it's not all bad, so thanks for running what you did, i guess.
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No. 1098453 ID: deb35c

more closure than I'm used to. Bless you sir grimm
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