One 2013/11/23(Sat)19:57 No. 21294 ID: f3bb85
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Por- Dangit.

How about an Argonian bodyslamming a Dunmer?

>>21294
I just realized the sexual innuendo implicit in that phrase. Sorry.

>>21294
Hahaha, sure - once I find both some free time in the next day or two, and maybe figure out how I'm going to draw without my customary materials.... Thanks!

Also, (this goes for anything here), I make zero guarantees as to quality.

Oh hey, I remember you. That daemancy quest looked like an interesting concept.

Erhannis 2013/11/26(Tue)02:20 No. 21319 ID: fb4e93
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IT BURNS. IT BURNS, BUT I SHALL POST IT. Augh, it's just so mediocre! And it took like 5.5 hours! Aaaaugh. Anybody have any constructive comments? Like how to fix the facial structure, the lack of action in the stances, the coloring, the facial structure? Part of this all may stem from the fact that I did this on an android tablet, rather than with a drawing tablet. Maybe. Plus, as time wore on, I gradually started to lose willpower. Like, the Argonian was originally going to be a girl - waaaasn't working, so I erased a line or two, and presto, you couldn't tell!

But geeeeze, the mediocrity BURNS. Uh, I mean no offense to anyone who would consider this art to be better than their own; don't be discouraged or anything - it's just that normally I can draw stuff better than this. I...think.

I believe Piro of Megatokyo.com once said, "Sometimes I wonder if I actually can't draw and I've just managed it by accident up until now."

Man. Any other suggestions, anybody? Perhaps something geared towards some particular art goal, like improving facial structures or colors or linework or something?

>>21298
Thanks! Yeah, I think I invested too much of myself in it and then panicked. Hopefully I'll get back to it at some point, maybe with a bit more "wherever it goes is fine" attitude.

I mean, looking again, it's not BAD art, really...it's just...I dunno. It just seems a bit meh. And I really like to make GOOD art! Good ANYTHING, whatever it is I'm making!

Oh, I will say there is one thing I was pleased with - the shape of the tail. Not even necessarily in context (it might not be quite right with momentum or whatever), but I rarely manage nicely tapered curves like that.

>>21319
Well, for one thing, that's a Throw, not a Body Slam.

For another, I do not know what that brown disk behind the Dunmer is supposed to be.

Otherwise, I suggest you continue practicing your drawing skills.

Oh, I just noticed, it is a table. Anyway, you should work on Perspective and Consistency. Once you have those down, you should be home free.